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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: abuhurairah
Superb fantastic update and thank u for the pm please continue soon ur writing is brilliant it keeps me hooked I have an assignment due this week but all I seem to be doing is reading the fantastic work written by u gals its amazing please update soon

AWW thanks 😳😳😳

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@-ElmoFuj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

Okay im such a fool for not having read this earlier!!! I just read all the 19 chaps in one go and im in awe of your writing! Amazing!!!! <33

I love it! Im loving each and everything ! In the early chapters how zoya was going and asad was his stubborn self and then now asad's determination its sooo awesome in love!'m

Please pm me when u update next! I love your writing! <33

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-
Okay im such a fool for not having read this earlier!!! I just read all the 19 chaps in one go and im in awe of your writing! Amazing!!!! <33

I love it! Im loving each and everything ! In the early chapters how zoya was going and asad was his stubborn self and then now asad's determination its sooo awesome in love!'m

Please pm me when u update next! I love your writing! <33

Damn you're fast! Aw thanksss 😳

Haha will doo for sureee :)

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: Aileen134
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Firstly, thank you very much for writing a longer update 😃

Story :

GOD Asad is still on with tht 'woh actually' thing! 😆
Whats so funny? Isn't New York known for taxi's?, wondered a puzzled Asad. Lol Poor Asad 😛 He thought he'd said something right for the first time but Zoya proved him wrong... poor thingy 😆
LoL the way Zoya laughed at her own joke is way too cute xD
And now there she started her bakwaas century wala talk again bichara Asad Aww Zoya thought he would react to what she had said but unfortunately he didn't 😉 And tht place 😕 uh-oh
And HAWW 😳 Thanks to THT LADY, there's a romantic scene between Asad and Zoya <3And idk y and how Zoya is always the one who realizes tht something Asad doing isnt right ( frm her point of view ) 😡 Poor Asad!
And OMG lol 🤣 Those girls touching him and everything! Zoya didn't even plan to do that... + I didn't know that they were Zoya's friends 😲 and oh finally Asad realizes that we should not judge a person by his/her appearance 👏
And omg poor Asad that pizza! lol I bet Asad would never eat pizza again !it was his first and last time :P
And OMG I wonder how embarrassed Asad would have been! 😆
Anyways, u're such a good writer mannn :) keep up the good work sweetie :)
update soon n pm me, thnx <3

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OMG I loveee you!! Such a lovely comment!! Thaaanks! I'm seriously blushing 😳😳😳 I shall try and update sooon probably by the weekend.. starting to get final projects and assignments, so updates won't be as often, but they'll be LONG 😃

Thanks again for the lovely reply

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

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Hey guys! Sorry I've been MIA! My exams are staring and will go one for about 3 weeks. Don't worry i'll keep updating, but the updates with either be shorter, or long and waay less often. I'll leave that up to you 😉

Once again, if you'd like to see something in the story, please let know. I write for you guys :) my part of the story, my wish of what Zoya would do is fulfilled, bring it on! Anything you want! 😃

Alright! Gotta go study 😭 will write a new update this weekend most probably! Thanks again to all those who commented! You guys are really too sweet :). And to the silent readers, PLEASE COMMENT. I REALLY wanna know what you think, even if its not all positive :) Thats how i'll get better!

Peace, my lovely readers!

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago