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Originally posted by: webuser7

Some suggestions:

• Can you please have Zoya take him (and perhaps the others too) to Coney Island or Jones Beach? Want to see his eyes pop out seeing the bikini clad babes. He might just die of a heart attack! He truly belongs in the 17th century!
• Perhaps, he witnesses a couple making out on the Subway or the streets! Imagine Asad squirming at that and glancing nervously at Zoya. Perfect opportunity for his closet passion thoughts to emerge!
• Can the 2 go for a romantic Broadway or Radio City Hall show?!
• How about Zoya trying to make Akdu eat the Middle Eastern street food: Rice with chicken/gyro?! He definitely cannot eat the street roasted peanuts!
• Some gay man hitting on Asad in the Village! Like Masterji on the show!
• Perhaps on the way home, they can watch a busker/musician perform!
• Horse carriage ride near Central Park.
• Asad buys jewelry for Zoya from Tiffany's while Zoya wants a stuffed animal fom FAO Schwarz!
• A street fair. Asad getting uncomfortable in the crowd and noise!

Originally posted by: Noe123

Really good suggestions! Mochhug, if not all, do consider including some of them.

Asad really needs to get out of Bhopal and see the world. That will open his mind and his eyes. That guy is like a frog in the well. Yh...a frog that can turn into a prince😉😆

Originally posted by: misha93

Such a long update. LOVED it. Its great to read non-billi stuff and seeing Asad trying to compromise. :P Please update soon. Wonderfully written. Brought a smile to my face many times.

Originally posted by: friendsall

hey dear!!! am on a vacation n hence dis late reply!!! saw ur updt n switched on my lappy for dis!!!! so loved it n LOVEDDD uuu MOREEE for dedication!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ur sucha sweetheart!!!🤗

waiting for ur next interesting updt

PS: loved Asad s patience!!!! n realising his mistake for mis-judging zo based on her outfit!!!! it was really interesting n i cud imagine seeing it for real!!!! n dis s wat I want in d serial too!!!

Originally posted by: Sirit-of-Dead

the part was awaome dear :))
im happy that asas is contolling his anger..
cant wait for the next part..
i hope that zoya will forgive him soon.
n then their confession.. yay

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

aww it such a great update...

just luv it...

hw the clean freak manage to survive the subway was just great...

thx fr the pm...

wonder who person the is tat frm the past n hw is tat person connected to her...

please continue soon...eagerly waiting fr the next update...

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

beautiful part. its really taking loads of efforts for Asad to be normal, but I love his determination to take all cox of Zoe. its good to see him accommodating himself in Zoe's environment. but it pains to see Zoe going tback to his rude sarcastic remarks on her everytime. she's been in pain for so long. I hope the next part won't further drive dem apart. plzz con t soon.