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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#701

marvellous update!!
asad is trying so hard to keep his temper check just to plz zoya...

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#702

Lovely.. I haven't been to New york.. But For sure want to visit after this.. Umm... Blast from the past.. huh!!! Who's past.. Zoya's.. Well, continue soon. I loved the chapter..

Dee

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Monica

@mochhug

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#703

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Lovely.. I haven't been to New york.. But For sure want to visit after this.. Umm... Blast from the past.. huh!!! Who's past.. Zoya's.. Well, continue soon. I loved the chapter..

Dee

Aww yay! I'm glad 😛 Can't say! Next update will reveal all 😃

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#704

aww it such a great update...

just luv it...

hw the clean freak manage to survive the subway was just great...

thx fr the pm...

wonder who person the is tat frm the past n hw is tat person connected to her...

please continue soon...eagerly waiting fr the next update...

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Aileen134

@Aileen134

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#705

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Firstly, thank you very much for writing a longer update 😃

Story :

GOD Asad is still on with tht 'woh actually' thing! 😆

Whats so funny? Isn't New York known for taxi's?, wondered a puzzled Asad. Lol Poor Asad 😛 He thought he'd said something right for the first time but Zoya proved him wrong... poor thingy 😆

LoL the way Zoya laughed at her own joke is way too cute xD

And now there she started her bakwaas century wala talk again bichara Asad Aww Zoya thought he would react to what she had said but unfortunately he didn't 😉 And tht place 😕 uh-oh

And HAWW 😳 Thanks to THT LADY, there's a romantic scene between Asad and Zoya <3And idk y and how Zoya is always the one who realizes tht something Asad doing isnt right ( frm her point of view ) 😡 Poor Asad!

And OMG lol 🤣 Those girls touching him and everything! Zoya didn't even plan to do that... + I didn't know that they were Zoya's friends 😲 and oh finally Asad realizes that we should not judge a person by his/her appearance 👏

And omg poor Asad that pizza! lol I bet Asad would never eat pizza again !it was his first and last time :P

And OMG I wonder how embarrassed Asad would have been! 😆

Anyways, u're such a good writer mannn :) keep up the good work sweetie :)

update soon n pm me, thnx <3

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Edited by Aileen134 - 12 years ago

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#706

beautiful part. its really taking loads of efforts for Asad to be normal, but I love his determination to take all cox of Zoe. its good to see him accommodating himself in Zoe's environment. but it pains to see Zoe going tback to his rude sarcastic remarks on her everytime. she's been in pain for so long. I hope the next part won't further drive dem apart. plzz con t soon.

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anu_123

@anu_123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#707

wow !! this is just amazing !

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#708

the part was awaome dear :))
im happy that asas is contolling his anger..
cant wait for the next part..
i hope that zoya will forgive him soon.
n then their confession.. yay

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asma

@Asyadeewani

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#709

Superb fantastic update and thank u for the pm please continue soon ur writing is brilliant it keeps me hooked I have an assignment due this week but all I seem to be doing is reading the fantastic work written by u gals its amazing please update soon