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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

I'm literally shedding tears for Zoya but at the same time I am so proud of her, to have finally stood up against Asad so strongly and confidently and not allowing herself to break in front of him that was commendable and I could only hope she does that on the show. Asad was an Asshole here, I absolutely hated him and I want him to feel sick to his stomach when he realises what he's done yet again, I want him to fall on his knees in front of her begging for forgiveness and for Zoya to not give two hoots. How cold hearted could he possibly be to yet again say stuff like 'he's glad that his abbu is dead' and shit like that? ARGH! I HATE HIM!!!


Anyways why do I feel something bad is going to happen, like something really bad?


Well I'm not gonna give away the story haha but I guess you could say it's a possibility. I've seen what i'm doing in other SS and FF's but they show the aftermath. Not how it happened. That's what I'm trying to show.. but that's all I'll say =P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow..it was good bt a shrt 1...w8tin 4 the nxt chp...continue asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved all your updates!
Why is Asad so heartless???
He should listen to his heart sometimes and make the right decisions.
Thanks for the pm!
Can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ms.Fix-it-all


Wow..it was good bt a shrt 1...w8tin 4 the nxt chp...continue asap


Just a preview since I got over 10,000 views :) the rest of this will be a monster chapter. Hence why i'm waiting a while to post it.. also partly because I haven't finished it. Will do so this weekend :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!! Love the story! The character development is great and the strength that you've shown in zoya's character is amazing!!! Really like your twists and looking forward to read what's coming next!
Do you send PMs for updates by any chance?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice.
Update next part soon.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice . Do continue soon!!!! It acted sort of a teaser. Waiting!!
~Dee~
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all sorry I haven't commented for 3 updates and a preview but I've been really busy with revision :P
Coming to the updates I loved the way you've expressed Zoya's feelings :-) I hope Asad realises soon he's been acting like an idiot and apologises soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
App update kab karengey? :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanku for the preview...waiting for the update eagely..😊

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