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Haha rest assured it will be over a long time :) sadly that means zoya will be away from him.. but that's how I wish the show would've gone.. i guess in this case it was good she is staying in India, but I do wish they would be separated for a bit just for him to realize what it's really like to be without her. THat's what I'm trying to reconcile here :) glad you like it :)

Ohhh trust me he will... as much as Zoya felt bad in the last 7 chapters, Asad will have his share, with guilt =P

And thanks :) Really happy that so many people like it.. since it's pretty different from the show. I hope I'm keeping them in character.. as much as possible despite the different storyline

aww you're sweet :) but yes someone else had also predicted that she would leave :) this was the main twist in my story.. that she would leave voluntarily instead of him throwing her out AGAIN.. but i have more twists in store =P the preview will be up soon I promise :) the next part however... might take a while.. have to seriously focus on school this week.. but I promise on the weekend (friday probably, if not saturday morning) I'll update the mother of all chapters :D

As promised.. here is a short preview of the monster chapter I'll be posting this weekend :)

Enjoy!

Chapter 9: Preview

The previous night at the hotel, Zoya had been tossing and turning. When sleep finally over came her...

Zoya walked in a straight line, in a long corridor, with many doors. The corridor was white, impeccable, glistening. As she passed the doors, she noticed each one had a small window into its respective room. She peered inside one of them. Then the next, and the next, only to see... Mr. Khan.

Mr. Khan saving her in Mangalpur. Mr. Khan carrying her out of Akram's house. Mr. Khan fighting the goondas for her. Mr. Khan comforting her in the garden. Mr. Khan bringing her cheesecake. Mr. Khan holding her while she mourned her father. Mr. Khan telling her not to go...

Mr. Khan... Asad...

She was smiling, tears of happiness welling up in her eyes. Zoya walked further down the corridor to even more doors. But these weren't doors of fond memories...

Mr. Khan... she saw... telling her she is a musibaat, a misfit, has no tezeeb, tameez...

Mr. Khan throwing her out of his house. Mr. Khan threatening her life. Mr. Khan blaming her for his mother's condition. Mr. Khan slapping her... she cringed... Mr. Khan questioning her upbringing...

Mr. Khan... "Khuda ka shukar ki aapke abuu aaj zinda nahin hain, une aap par zaroor sharam aati agar une yeh din dekne par the!"

Zoya jerked awake, her face moist with tears. When she realized where she was, and why, a new rush of tears trickled down her face.

Mr. Khan mujhe kabhi nahi samaj paenge. Aur mein une khabi nahi samaj paongi. Yehi sab ke liye acha hoga, she tried to convince herself.

Dejected and numb, she laid back down. Slowly her sobs lessened, as she softly cried herself to sleep.

Precap: the rest of the chapter will focus on Asad and his feelings about Zoya leaving.. and of course Zoya at the airport.. and the elusive question of who called at the Khan Villa =P

Hmph 😛