~ Tabeez ~ (Three Shot Completed) - Page 4

AWESOME CONTINUE SOON AND GIVE ANSWERS TO ALL UR QUESTIONS IN THE NEXT UPDATE!😆

Originally posted by: fun_games

Hey Ankie loved it loved it 👏

U are very good in writing u know 😉

Please write some more😊

Originally posted by: IIdewaaneII

This is awesome!!! 👏

Originally posted by: kajen.asya4ever

amazing.

Originally posted by: --Kriti--

hehe

wowww amazinggg

This is soo amazing.
Ankie only you can write like this darling...
I loved the first part sooo much.
How did Asad come to know that Tannu took Zoe to the doll factory?Did he hear MSK's voice on the phone?
Anyways,I loved the way Asad behaved on seeing Zoe near to death.
The lion roared and the whole hospital building trembled.😆
Please update the next part ASAP.

Originally posted by: -ScarletRose-

Ankita right? 😛 wow that was beautifully written. loved it, you portrayed Asad's feelings so well. Loved it

-amu.

ankiii jiii

Originally posted by: aisha.khan

its wonderfull ankie<3continue plzz!!last part

ankieee it was a super se bhi upar wala story
i mean it was superbb

superrr se bhi uparrr ka TS

in fact itna accha that i had to bribe my sister to use her cell to cum online to reply

Now i owe her 100 bucks :P 😆

loved loved loved loved it... 😃

and u r ryt! We both love mangalpuria asad so much that we keep burning zoya 😆

continue sooonnn

maine cliffy ke liye na bola tha na 😡 😆

it surely deserves a Grumpy Approves ( sorry cant post the gif )

now update soon warnaaa

samjhe ya samjhaun 😆