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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: meow23

if u gt a gud response wil u update it today itself...😊


For that i will have to type 🤣 jiske liye mera dil bilkul nahi kar raha :P But nevertheless i will see 😳 😳

y do i feel rasia aunty will copy ur idea tke zoya to gudiya factory and burn her alive bt that can neva happn um sure akdu wil set thngs ryte

Haiyee! Karlee :P 😆 😆 😆 buss credit mujhko de de buss 🤣


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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty


NOW
This is known as a COMMENT! 👏 👏 👏 in such a way that the person gets conpused ki compliment diya hai ki abuse 🤣 🤓

Jokes apart! LIKHA MAINE khush ho jaa! 🤣

things are yet to be unfolded my child ruko! First time at suspense/thriller 🤣 dunno how it will turn out 🤣

Aacha jii?! I will see 😎


Achcha ji ki mohotarma!! Now for the first time I did NOT give a CLIFFY in my OS and you are torturing me with your comment there saying 'cliffy ise kehte hain'!! Hmmph! *stomping my foot*
Abhi kya kiya maine?😭

Thankoo!! Dabangg ka nasha chad gaya lagta hain tujhpe! XP Caramba!! Dabangg?? Like seriously, Dabangg?? You couldn't get another movie? Sheesh! *facepalm* Well, I gotta tell you one thing that I like that dialogue of Salman Khan. 'Itne Chhed kardenge ki conphuj ho jaoge ki Saans kahan se le, aur Paade kahan se!" 🤣
I have never said this my entire life, but am saying this once and only once Salman... "You ROCK in that particular scene!!!" 😎
Tune likha hain toh zaroor khush hogi main!!! Idiota!

Well, yeah, different genre, so continue soon!

What will you see?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: cyndu_

Tumahri Pm ke pehele hi pad liya tha but need to say Awesome one!

The way asad shouting zoya..meri zoya and Ayaan trying to control Asad.
In car asad still telling zoya utho and when asad said to ayaan ki zoya ko kuch hogaya then i am gonna kill you first 😆

At hospital when they were taking her to the ICU how he waited for 1 hour and dilshad's entry was awesome!!!!

:P sare + points batati jaun toh i need to write the complete thing you written again!

SO

one word

AWEEESSSOOMMMEEE!!!!
Update soon 😃


Thank you thank you thank you! You make me feel soo goooddy 🤗 😆

haiyee thank you soo much!! :*

🤣

aacha tha seriously?

yeahh lets see meri LAAZZIEE-ness kab allow karta hai 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
wow ankie yaar you nailed it again
its taking way too long to seep into my mind cause first you actually wrote sooo much i'm shocked would be an understatement but i'm sure this piece of fiction belongs to you
and there are sooo many questions in my mind right now that i just cant type them all cause i'm too lazy so i'm gonna do it the conventional way i'm gonna wait for your pm which tells me that you have updated this
and yes love this cause of the mangalpur wala asad you put in plus the way you have written i just adore your writing style its one of a kind
so continue soon
and i wont say pm me cause u do that anyways :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar


Achcha ji ki mohotarma!! Now for the first time I did NOT give a CLIFFY in my OS and you are torturing me with your comment there saying 'cliffy ise kehte hain'!! Hmmph! *stomping my foot*
Abhi kya kiya maine?😭

Thankoo!! Dabangg ka nasha chad gaya lagta hain tujhpe! XP Caramba!! Dabangg?? Like seriously, Dabangg?? You couldn't get another movie? Sheesh! *facepalm* Well, I gotta tell you one thing that I like that dialogue of Salman Khan. 'Itne Chhed kardenge ki conphuj ho jaoge ki Saans kahan se le, aur Paade kahan se!" 🤣
I have never said this my entire life, but am saying this once and only once Salman... "You ROCK in that particular scene!!!" 😎
Tune likha hain toh zaroor khush hogi main!!! Idiota!

Well, yeah, different genre, so continue soon!

What will you see?


Sallu mera Huubbyy hai you know? Seee how sheesskkeeyy he looks here ☺️



jokes apart! In my dictionary anything which is incomplete is called as CLIFFY 😆 😆

Apne again incompelete diya! You dont know how badly i am craving for a complete part so that i can read it over and over and over and over again! Baddy girly! -________-

Jo bhi hai, you shocked me out of my skin today! And i love you for that :*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty


Thank you thank you thank you! You make me feel soo goooddy 🤗 😆

haiyee thank you soo much!! :*

🤣

aacha tha seriously?

yeahh lets see meri LAAZZIEE-ness kab allow karta hai 🤣



Sach mei bohot accha tha par vo last line nahi!
haww itna accha start karke "lemme se ki meri lazziiee allow karti hai ya nahi"!

Bohot accha tha so lazy na bona continue karo!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#27


chk de new huggng wala pics dil maan sab kuch karega to write...u updte wil give u a bada sa comment asad ki promise😉
btwn i realised u dunno noe my name na???????

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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
This was awesome...loved it can't wait for the next part write soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Ankiieee!!! It was awesomeee!!! You HAVE TO update fast... And please pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Second part please 😊

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