AsYa: Dil Ki Toh Lag Gayi ||Part-13 pg 129 ||

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Livingfree

@Livingfree

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Enjoyed it! Loved the AsYa moment 😃 You write so simply yet beautifully

Waiting for your next update

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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

"No Mr.Khan, I am not okay. Specially not so since you are scaring me with your pyassi
atma like gestures, holding candles and all that. Aapko woh song yaad hai Mr.Khan -aaja
re/aaja re o mere
dilbar aaja, 'Noori' film se. You just reminded me of that.",
ROFL!! 🤣 dis phase crack me up 🤣 OMG i cnt stop rolling
Asad's soft, wet lips traced small pecks on her neck at first. Then they caressed her ear-lobes, her jaw-line, her cheeks. He dragged his lips gently across her cheeks and finally
rested them on her lips. Slowly he kissed the corner of her mouth. Zoya moaned with the sweetest pleasure. Asad's lips were softly sucking her lower lip. All her senses were on fire.
Asad paused for a moment and pulled back to see her face.
Zoya's lips were
slightly parted and quivered with all those pent up emotions. He understood and pulled her back into another kiss, this time a deep,
passionate one. He gently bit her lower lip while kissing, sending shivers down her spine. Zoya let herself go with the flow completely. She
reflexively raised her hand to cradle the back of his neck.
So beautifuly written... A perfect love moment. M burning
Overall a fab updt. Cont soon

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s0n00smi

@s0n00smi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

weighting for the next part 😆very nice

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TAANI

@flowergarden

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

MASHA ALLAH 🤗

KYA WRITING HAIN!! LOVED IT!! PLZ DEAR FORGIVE ME..

I COULDNT ANS UR POSTS..I WS NT IN THE FORUM...

MERE LIYE LAG GAYI YAAR!!ASYA KI ENGAGEMENT MERI WATT LAG GAYI.. 😆

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Parneet

@ParneetS

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Hey.. Nice ff :)

It's pretty interesting :) wud luv to read what happens next..? :)

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

aww such a romantic update ...thanks 4 the pm and this update...i hope asad saves zoya but i guess he will be bit late maybe but zoya has to live...cont soon