AsYa: Dil Ki Toh Lag Gayi ||Part-13 pg 129 || - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous dear👏!!!!!loved it...pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read all parts now,... just beautiful...loved them, please update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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when they gonna confess dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jst read al 3 parts ..n its awesome...

plz continue soon...

n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessradhika

WOW👏👏..JUST WOW.⭐️👍🏼.ur "DIL KI TOH LAG GAYI" ne hamari laga dali.😆..i can say that was hot right??😉..well i am sure i am not the only one who thinks the same..the way he pulled her to him..oh god..mera train to kuch der tak usi station pe atak gaya.☺️..uff he will surely kill us some day for sure...loved the asya moments.❤️.although i know don't need to say it aloud...


BUT WHAT THE HELL.😡...why did u end it in such a drastic way😭...ye asad ko ek slap marna chahiye..really how could he just leave her like that...i know he must be confused as always but poor zoya💔..hope this time zoya will surely teach him a lesson...loved the song selection ...continue soon...


Hey first of all, thanks a lot for such a nice feed back 😊 I know sometimes AAK acts a bit weird but he is a man in love, so...😆



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

One word : Teddy you write awesome! Worth the wait! 👏


Thanks a lot dear. It means a lot to me, specially when it comes from you. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AsyaManic

"No Mr.Khan, I am not okay. Specially not so since you are scaring me with your pyassi
atma like gestures, holding candles and all that. Aapko woh song yaad hai Mr.Khan -aaja
re/aaja re o mere
dilbar aaja, 'Noori' film se. You just reminded me of that.",

ROFL!! 🤣 dis phase crack me up 🤣 OMG i cnt stop rolling
Asad's soft, wet lips traced small pecks on her neck at first. Then they caressed her ear-lobes, her jaw-line, her cheeks. He dragged his lips gently across her cheeks and finally
rested them on her lips. Slowly he kissed the corner of her mouth. Zoya moaned with the sweetest pleasure. Asad's lips were softly sucking her lower lip. All her senses were on fire.
Asad paused for a moment and pulled back to see her face.
Zoya's lips were
slightly parted and quivered with all those pent up emotions. He understood and pulled her back into another kiss, this time a deep,
passionate one. He gently bit her lower lip while kissing, sending shivers down her spine. Zoya let herself go with the flow completely. She
reflexively raised her hand to cradle the back of his neck.

So beautifuly written... A perfect love moment. M burning
Overall a fab updt. Cont soon


Thanks a lot dear.😊 you made my day. Really.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asyalover

aww such a romantic update ...thanks 4 the pm and this update...i hope asad saves zoya but i guess he will be bit late maybe but zoya has to live...cont soon


Don't worry dear. It's my story, so Zoya has to live...for her Jahanpana 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: momai14

when they gonna confess dear...


I guess Jahanpana will confess in the next part 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Teddy i wanna🤗 you . is dil ka to pata nahi par meri lag gayyi . i want this more n more . well that was so nice ...
dil hai ki manta nahi . hai na asad . i bet If he'd tried to stay away than his heart is moth nd she is fire nd he would have to burn himself in it. plz update soon.

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