AsYa: Dil Ki Toh Lag Gayi ||Part-13 pg 129 ||

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chichi220

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Amazin stuff I really liked it

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Oishi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

this is so cute and funny update...cant wait for the next one..update soon

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anushka

@anushka2112

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

OMG love you love you for wonderful update... kya khub likha h... Asad zoya and IPL maza agaya... and pepper spray in place of pepper salt was a heights man I was rolling polling...
Its a utmost request pls update soon...
And thanks for pm

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teddy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
i read it before you pmed me!!
Enjoyed each and every single bit of it Teddy! Felt like i was watching QH! fanfraking fantabulous.

please update soon! it made my night!

Wow! First comment is from you...that made my day, dear. 😆

So glad to know that you liked it. It means a lot to me, specially when it comes from one of my most favourite AsYa ff writer, you.

Love, Teddy ❤️.

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princessradhika

@princessradhika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

i just loved ur story...read it in one go..pls pls pls continue soon..

.aur is billo ko bhagao jaldi.😡.dimag kharab karti rahti hai faltu mein, zoya ko nahi to kya use chodna chahiye tha asad ke sath, bechara asad agar ye billo use seduce karti to aisa bhagta ki kabhi wapas nahi ata.😆..hmp..and zoya uske to kya kehne..ek taraf dhoni aur dusri aur mr. a-sad a-mad khan..😉.and did asad really said that about her planning her sasural in bhopal.😳.oly god can save me...

...uff bohat bol liya😆..pls update soon ..will wait

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nassindia

@nassindia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

amazing. I loved it ( and thank you for using more english dialogues : no offense i just don't understand hindi)

PLZ do PM when you update.

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suchitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

I luvd it...wonderful 1...continue asap...n plz pm me

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penfriend28

@penfriend28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

in love with ur ss...cant wait anymore...

pls update soon...

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teddy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: princessradhika
i just loved ur story...read it in one go..pls pls pls continue soon..

.aur is billo ko bhagao jaldi.😡.dimag kharab karti rahti hai faltu mein, zoya ko nahi to kya use chodna chahiye tha asad ke sath, bechara asad agar ye billo use seduce karti to aisa bhagta ki kabhi wapas nahi ata.😆..hmp..and zoya uske to kya kehne..ek taraf dhoni aur dusri aur mr. a-sad a-mad khan..😉.and did asad really said that about her planning her sasural in bhopal.😳.oly god can save me...

...uff bohat bol liya😆..pls update soon ..will wait

Thanks dear 😆 I am so glad you liked it.

BTW I totally understand your problem with Billo Rani, even I have the same problem with her. Just can't stand her goody-goody show-off nature.

But don't worry. At least in my story she has no chance to stand between AsYa. She indirectly will bring them closer. 😉