ASYA OS: Tu Jo Nahin Final Chapter PG 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys this is my first OS ever so bare with me

A bit of background first - this OS is gonna be like a day after Zoya has gone back to New York and how Asad is missing her.

BG music - Tu Jo Nahin

The sound of an airplane wakes Asad up in the morning and looks around his room. In his room he has got everything, laptop, TV and all the things he could wish for. But something was missing... SOMEONE was missing. Sighing he walks out to the kitchen and first thing he looks at is Zoya's chair. He can imagine her sitting their. Smiling at him and laughing and saying her annoying Shayari's.
Tu Jo Nahin Hain To Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hain
Yeh Maana Ki Mehfil Jawaan Hain Haseen Hain

He goes and sits on his chair and still stares at her chair. Around him Dilshad and Najma are fussing over his food and putting them in place for him. He feels lost without her. Not hearing her Shayari's or her 'Allah Miyan, what's wrong with you?' anymore.
Tu Jo Nahin Hain To Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hain
Yeh Maana Ki Mehfil Jawaan Hain Haseen Hain

Not even feeling hungry, he sighs and walks off to his room while Dilshad and Najma look at him and are puzzled. While in his room he looks outside his room and sees Zoya standing there. His heart skips a little of seeing her there and smiles and opens his windows and jumps out and runs towards her. He runs and hug her, but it's not her. It's his eyes deceiving him and she is not there.

Like a lost puppy, he crouches onto the bench and just stares at the garden. How he wishes he hears her laughter. If only once he saw her, he wouldn't let her go like he did then. He would've confessed his love to her to make her stay.

Mujhe Phir Tabah Kar, Mujhe Phir Rulaja
Sitam Karnewali, Kahin Se Tu Aaja
Mujhe Phir Tabah Kar, Mujhe Phir Rulaja
Sitam Karnewali, Kahin Se Tu Aaja
Kahin Se Tu Aaja

He closes his eyes and remembers all the moments he had with Zoya - the time he saved he from the Ghundas, the first time he saw her at the Darbar, their time in Mangalpur where he died for the first time seeing Zoya lifeless body and breathing again after she came back to him.

Aankhon Mein Teri Surad Basi Hai
Teri Hi Tarah Tere Gum Bhi Haseen Hai
Tu Jo Nahin Hain To Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hain
Yeh Maana Ki Mehfil Jawaan Hain Haseen Hain
Tu Jo Nahin Hain To Kuchh Bhi Nahi

He feels someone touch him and quickly opens his eyes. Dilshad looks at him and asks him 'what's wrong?'
He doesn't reply. He just gets up and walks back to his room. He needs to get out of the house, seeing her everywhere is making him crazy.

He grabs the keys to his car and makes a run for the door while Dilshad and Najma are getting worried about him.
In the car, he starts driving to anywhere, he needs to be alone. Somewhere where Zoya is not there. The traffic lights turn red and he looks outside and sees her in the rain. Dancing. With no care in the world. Then the lights turn green and he hears other cars behid him beeping their horns at him. Stupid eyes deceiving him again. He starts driving again and just stops and sees the place where he and Zoya had stayed the night the car broke down and it started to rain. He gets out and walks into the house. Still the same. Memories come rushing back of both laughing, of both dancing and singing in the rain.

Jidhar Bhi Yeh Dekhen Jahaan Bhi Yeh Jaayen
Tujhe Dhundhati Hai Yeh Paagal Nigaahen
Jidhar Bhi Yeh Dekhen Jahaan Bhi Yeh Jaayen
Tujhe Dhundhati Hai Yeh Paagal Nigaahen
Yeh Paagal Nigaahen

He walks to the door and looks outside a plane above and stares at it. He doesn't care about the rain anymore. He stands outside and crouches onto the floor and he just stares at the sky.

Main Zinda Hoon Lekin Kahaan Zindagi Hain
Meri Zindagi Tu Kahaan Kho Gayi Hain
Tu Jo Nahin Hain To Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hain
Yeh Maana Ki Mehfil Jawaan Hain Haseen Hain
Tu Jo Nahin Hain Toh Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hain

While the ending of the song music happens, Asad just stares at all the cars going past while the rain is pouring more heavily.

OK how was it??? I knw its not great than other OS's but it was my first attempt :)


Also I recommend you listen to the song too - its an amazing song :)


INDEX

Chapter 1 - ^
Chapter 2 - PG 7
Chapter 3 - PG 15
Final Chapter PG 22
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hally u r great writer.. U should write more ff's ..its ur 1st OS and hally tu pass hogai its very gud OS
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ahhh i have tears in my eyes.seriously if zoya leave he will b lyk ur os.i cant see my poor asad so broken
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanjana-ARMAAN

Hally u r great writer.. U should write more ff's ..its ur 1st OS and its gud




I was soo wortied posting it and thank you yaar :) 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab OS hally👏👏 aww asad missing zoya so badly..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tishma

ahhh i have tears in my eyes.seriously if zoya leave he will b lyk ur os.i cant see my poor asad so broken




Something i would like to see though :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Shruti.M-

fab OS hally👏👏 aww asad missing zoya so badly..!!

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Thanks Shruti :) 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hally, this was really good!
You should write more often!
Poor Asad!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice os...
Keep writing more... 😃
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Originally posted by: sophie420

Hally, this was really good!

You should write more often!
Poor Asad!




Thanks sophie i will see about writing more .. If it is good LOL

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