ASYA OS: Tu Jo Nahin Final Chapter PG 22 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fimmy

Nice os...
Keep writing more... 😃

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Thank you yaar and will see :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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and it was amazing!!! I loved the way u used the song here..it was a beautiful experience..❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You seriously should write more. FAB
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI,

I never comment on the stories though I am a writer myself

I am lost at words while appreciating the works

I have this song and just as I read the name of the OS went straight and played that song

read this OS with the song playing int the background

even while messaging this song is playing

it is a beautiful OS

kehte hain na ki jab koi cheez humaare saamne humaare paas nahi rehti uski kadar tabhi hoti hai

same with Asad he will learn Zoya's worth only after she is no longer around him

just on word "BEAUTIFUL"


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg so write so so well my dhak dhak rani !!
Luv u so much !! Great work
Edited by MaaNeeTLuV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Haaiii, so nicely described.. Loved Asad's longing ang pining for Zoe :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Hally! This was beautiful
Asad missing Zoya, perfect👏
Doesn't seem like your first
ha, lol looking forward to reading more of your pieces
<3 Farhana
Edited by risingsea101 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderrful os👏👏👏 u wer der in PKYEK forum na...😳 i got company😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderfull. Hope there is atleast 1 more part to this, thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..

and it was amazing!!! I loved the way u used the song here..it was a beautiful experience..❤️




Thank you :)

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