ASYA OS: Tu Jo Nahin Final Chapter PG 22 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

You seriously should write more. FAB




Thank you soo much :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: chahat11

HI,

I never comment on the stories though I am a writer myself

I am lost at words while appreciating the works

I have this song and just as I read the name of the OS went straight and played that song

read this OS with the song playing int the background

even while messaging this song is playing

it is a beautiful OS

kehte hain na ki jab koi cheez humaare saamne humaare paas nahi rehti uski kadar tabhi hoti hai

same with Asad he will learn Zoya's worth only after she is no longer around him

just on word "BEAUTIFUL"






Wow thank you so much :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: risingsea101

Hally! This was beautiful

Asad missing Zoya, perfect👏
Doesn't seem like your first
ha, lol looking forward to reading more of your pieces
<3 Farhana



Thanks and it is my first :)

Will see if i will write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: rosamale


wonderrful os👏👏👏u wer der in PKYEK forum na...😳i got company😃




Yep my PKYEK yep my darling show n oh yeh company :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: life4me

Very emotional. Loved it.



Aaw thanks :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: hifzaa

great hally🤗



Thanks moni :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Anjinie

Wonderfull. Hope there is atleast 1 more part to this, thanks



Ooh i will see about a second part :)

Thanks for the comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Very well written. Great job!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing!! I loved it! Beautiful! I felt all the emotion!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kandygrover

Very well written. Great job!!!



Thank you for the comment 😊

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