OS: Suffocation (Part II: Indifference on Pg. 4) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago

okay u write amazing and the depth and expressions are genuineee and unbelievably humble.

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

CONTINUE WILL YOU PLEASEEE

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Posted: 12 years ago

i LOOOVVVEEEDD it!!!! ur so so SO gooddd!!!!! u write amazingly well so please don't stop writing!!!! and bhagwaan ke liye pm me the next time u update!!!! :)

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blueflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

What Asad fainted??? thats a serious Omg moment 🤣

he is going out of his way for zoya, but thats bound to happen when Asad is in lOVE ...

please do continue, and update soon softie 😆

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priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

HEY... I REALLY ENJOYED READING UR UPDATES...
both the parts were superb... bt waiting for moreee...

n ya the chemistry b/w asad n zoya was really osum ;)

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dn-star

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Posted: 12 years ago

hahaha loved it!

please do continue, update soon and pm me :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you for continuing, Shweta! :D

This part was just beautiful too. ;)

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Krishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was AWESOME! I could totally see this happening. Thank you for continuing! :)

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Oishi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Both the parts are soo soo amazing..and last bit was so cute...

I so want to read some AsYa romantic moments <3

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Posted: 12 years ago

its really superb👏 are u gonna continue it?😊 i wish u would😃pls

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