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Posted: 12 years ago

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This was a lovely two shot

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Barayah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

OMG! Fricken amazingg!!! Written so beautifully and I just love it! Please PM me for next updatee!!! Thank youuu :))

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Please update soon and PM me!

Really good job, I was so immersed my parents had to shake me (literally) just to get my attention!

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jazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I reread each word again loved it
Awosome job can u plzzz update it soon

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niharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Hahaha lol he fainted lol
And yes he did screw up big time
hope there is a next part

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Scarlett kevin

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Posted: 12 years ago

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LOVED THE PARTS DEAR CONTINUE SOON

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Posted: 12 years ago

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soo...

you are not gonna continue this shiz?

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nikki.171

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awww mann. .. hopefully i will come bak to unres this comment.

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Amazing! This was AWESOME! 👏 Asad fainted?! 🤣 Hahaha! My fave part was when he carried Zoya. ❤️ Sooo freaking adorable! 😳 I probably had this big stupid grin on my face while reading this. Lol! 😆 Nice job! 👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago

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wow.. that was beautifully written.. hoping to read the next chapter soon

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