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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey my lovely QHians, back with another part. This part will be longer than the others. Enjoy

The birds chirping, the breezy morning, the sun up high, what else could a person ask for?

Zoya exited the house quietly. Her foot was feeling fine and she seemed to be walking by herself, just limping a little…okay a lot.

She put on her side bag and slowly turned the corner waiting for a rickshaw, the last thing she wanted to do was get caught and be brought back. Why did her foot have to be hurt! She saw a rickshaw and waved her hand until it stopped.

Rickshaw driver: Kahan jaana hai

Zoya pulled out a piece of paper from her side bag and handed it to the rickshawala, he nodded and started driving.

……………………………..

It was a far ride, a long way from the Khan residents. The rickshaw stopped and Zoya stepped out after paying. It was a quiet and small street, not a lot of people out, a couple of kids walking to school. She walked to the address she needed to go to. Her home…..

It wasn't at all what she expected, no flower bushes, no cars in the driveway, not even a single person near it, but there in front of her, an old worn down house, the colors fading and paint chipped. The windows broken…the place was abandoned, just like she was. She looked around and saw a couple walk by, they seemed like they were in their mid 50's.

Zoya: Excuse me

The couple stopped

Woman: Ji kahiye

Zoya: Kya aap mujhe bata sakti hai, iss ghar ke log kahan hai?

They looked at the house

Man: Kya batao, kismet hi kharab thi inke, bohot karab

Zoya heart was pouning hard

Zoya: K..kya hua hai?

Man: Yahan ek aurat aur unke beti rehti thi, unke pati kahin saal pehle unko ckorke chali gayi, aur phir beti ki shaadi ho gayi…

Woma: ek bohot aamir aadmi se

Man: beti chaali gayi, ma akele rehkar ek din guzar gayi…kya naam tha…oh han asthama attack se

Woman: aur unki beti jaane kahan hai woh….

Zoya had tears in her eyes…..was this her family, the family she was told about

Zoya: Toh…toh aap jaante te unhe?

Woman-Nahin, hum ne tho sirf yeh kahani suni hai, allah hi jaane agar sach ho ya nahi…

They started walking again, while Zoya stood rooted to the spot.

"Oh god, please let this be a story…this can't be true, this is my family…my mom…my sister. Sister…I have a sister….."

She started walking again and took out her phone. Did it take her that long just to arrive at this place? It was 7:56 already.

She looked back up, but to fine a couple of people staring at her. Most of them were women. They had shocked expressions.

"Why are they looking at me like that, is it because of my dressing style….yeah it had to be"

She looked at the apologetically and smiled. Some of the people walked away seeing her. What was happening?

……………………………..

Dilshaad walked out of the kitchen.

"Najma's up...check, Asad's up…check, Zoya….Zoya"

She headed to the stairs, where Asad was coming doen

Dilshaad: Beta zara dekho toh Zoya uti hai ya nahi, uski dawai ke waqt ho rahi hai…

Asad nodded and headed back.

He walked to the door, and stood in front of it. Letting out a deep breath he knocked the door. No answer. Again he tried to be welcomed by silence, and once more, but no luck. He held a confused face and turned the knob, empty.

"Was she gone? YES! Wait she has a broken foot…bathroom?"

He walked to the bathroom door and knocked that door. No answer. He opened it. Empty too

"That's weird? Where'd she go?"

Asad scratched his hear, the confused expression still on his face

Asad: Ammi Zoya's no in her room!

He called out as he ran down the stairs. His mother came out of the kitchen and so did Najma

Dilshaad: Kahan jaa sakti hai?

Asad: I would call, but I don't have hernumber…

"God, this girl!"

Najma: Mere paas hai….

She took her phone a dialed….

Najma: Bhai she's not answering

Asad held his head. This is what he had to wake up to….

Asad: Try again……

……………………………..

Zoya sat in a rickshaw, she was returning…defeated. She had tears running down her eyes Praying what she was told, wasn't true…

Thanks to her memory and the address Najma told her she was dropped off to where she started.

Zoya wiped hr tears and taking a deep breath walked in.

All heads turned. She looked at all their faces. Dilshaad…feared, Najma…worried, Asad…anger

Asad: Where the hell have you been?

He bursted out on her making her jump back

Asad: God knows how long we were trying to contact you, do you know how early it is, what if something happened to you, it would've been my responsibility…and on top of that you're wandering with an injured foot….

Zoya looked down

"He can't see you cry, not in front of others Zoya…"

She thought to herself, and slowly walked upstairs.

Dilshaad gave Asad…the look

Asad: What?

Dilshaad: Kaise vevhaar kiya tumne uske saath?

Asad: Kaise karoo? Welcome her in with flowers?

Dilshaad: Asad… you're too much.

She turned.

……………………………..

Zoya finally walked back out. It had been a couple of hours, but she did come out. The regular smile was on her face and the happy mood was back.

Zoya: Hello everyone…

Asad rolled his eyes

"And I thought I had knocked some sense into her."

Najma: Hello…

Zoya: So whats up?

Dilshaad: Kuch nahi, batao tumhari paer kaisi hai?

Zoya: Abhi kucj der pehle dard karna shuru ho gaya hai

Dilshaad: Tumne dawai nahi li iss liye….

Dilshaad stood up to get her medicine.

Asad stood and left….

……………………………..

Zoya sat alone, in the backyard, just staring up into the sky, the stars were out, but the moon was hiding behind the clouds. She was crying, not in front of Asad, not in front of phupi or Najma, but alone, the way she liked it…..

Hey….

It was him, his voice came from right behind he…she quickly wiped her tears, but not quick enough

Asad: I hope you're not crying because of me….I am sorry

"Miracle? The Rude, mean man was really saying sorry?"

She shook her head

Asad pointed at the bench

Asad: …May I?

She moved over a bit so he could sit.

Zoya: Mr. Khan…. Can I tell you something?

He nodded

Zoya: I think you're rude and judge full

"Wow, talk about Honest…more like straight forward"

Zoya: You totally embarrassed me; you didn't even know why I had to go out…

And all that, she said it low… the words which could of been told by a loud pissed voice, she said it so calmly.

Asad: I'm so-

Zoya: Do you know there's a 99% chance my family is dead…

He sat still, his eyes on her, while her's were at the sky. He was startled and more than that he was worried. The pain of someone's death, how can he not understand?

Asad: Are you sure? I mean maybe they're not residents of Bhopal anymore?

Zoya: Maybe…. But still it pains my heart even thinking about it…

There was silence for about a minute or 2

Asad: I'm sorry for bursting on you….

Zoya: It's okay…I should of informed you before I went

He played with his fingers and she kept her gaze on the stars. Soon awkwardness filled the air…again

...

Precap: Zoya finds out Asad's story

bump and fall scene 😉

...

Okay, I think the parts long enough right? I'm sending pm's to all as not a lot of people comment, but ehh, who cares. Ignore my mistakes and the next parts will be coming soon

<3 Farhana

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Aww Zoya told him a little bit about her parents <3
And asad said sorry to her <3
I'm really happy they had a decent convo :P
Thanks for the pm and update soon love <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Read all your parts in one go.

This is wonderful. This story is amazing. Please continue soon. Wanna read more. 😳

Can you please pm me too😳

Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

The first chap I was like '' intresting consept move on ''👍🏼

The 2nd I ws like '' even though precap ws cheesy , I'm lovin it ''🤗

The third I ws like '' awww , poor asad ''😕

The 4th I was like '' totally lovin it and the update is so dam cute ''

The fifth I ws like '' u my dear r giving me minni heart attacks with the precaps ''💔

The 6th I ws like '' 2nd attack alert !!!! ''

And fr the 6th I'm wating eagerly😉 '''. I'm loving the updates by the way

VARSHA😃

Edited by varshificat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Asad can have an outburst on zoya any moment of the day :p
n zoya the brat can never follow rules of informing someone at home .
but atleast they had a civilized conversation.
loved it.
n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
I Hope Zoya Finds Her Family. And That Aren't Dead.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ur ss is nice. i like it a lot. asad's and his family's reaction to Zoya was so natural, but i think asad is gonna blast on zoya v soon cox he's avoiding the thoughts in his heart dat r pulling him towards zoya due to her face but later he'l reallly fall for her and it'l be all goody good. it was so funny of zoya to get three boxes of luggage for a month shifted at Asad's place, anyhow she belongs dere. it was sad to see zoya all down and upset on losing her family. i hope asad tells and even showsher imrana's pic, den zoya will realize dat she was her sister. hope u cont it soon. plz do add me to ur pm list for da next parts.
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESUM YAAR
I HAVE A GUT FEELING KI IMRANA ZOYA KI TWIN SISTER HAI...I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO SEE HOW THIS STORY INFOLDS...SO PLZ PM ME WEN U UPDATE AND PLZ DO UPDATE SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

7 parts already, no it's definitely not a SS, I'll change it into ff, but that's if you all want me to? Anyways, Sorry for taking so long on updating had a project.

I'm sending out pm's as not a lot of people comment 😭

Part 7:

Zoya, Najma and Dilshaad sat in the living room, playing another game, taught by Zoya herself. Asad walked into the house, mad as usual, he walked into his room without saying anything to anyone.

Dilshaad and Najma shared looks, while Zoya scratched her head, confused.

Zoya: What's his deal?

Dilshaad: Meh dekh ke aati hoon..

She stood up and left. Najma held a worried face

Zoya: Najma…ek baat batao… tumhara bhai hamesha adkru rehta hai?

Najma: Voh..uh..

She looked around

Najma-…ayiye..

She helped Zoya up and slowly both walked to the store room without being caught.

Zoya looked around the room and held a disgusted face, while Najma locked the door.

Zoya: Wow, what beautiful stoe room…

She blew away some dust, and held a fake smile…

Najma: Bohot din se koi neahi saaf kin a, iss liye

Zoya: Anyways, tell me… kyun laya hai mujhe iss…dust place par?

Zoya: Oh haan.

She turned to the wardrobe, slightly covered with a crme color cloth.

Najma removed it, letting out a lot of dust.

Zoya started coughing, but Najma told her to be quiet.

Najma brought out an album..and looked at Zoya, her face held sorrow.

Zoya looked back worried

Najma: Pehle…aap promise kijiye ki aap yeh dekh ke…aap yeh dekh ke aap shock nayi honge aur panic nahi karenge

A picture slid out of the album and landed at Zoya's feet faced down. Zoya crouched down to pick it up, still not seeing the photo.

Zoya: Shocked? Voh kyun….

Zoya stared at the picture…shocked

The picture was of…. Asad and…

Zoya: Najma yeh, she, who?

Yes, she definitely was shocked.

Najma held Zoya

Zoya: Yeh, who is she, she looks just like me….I…she….Mr. Khan?

Najma nodded

Najma: I know, this is very shocking

Zoya: Shocking? This

She pointed at the picture

Zoya: This, this is not shocking, it's scary

Najma placed the photo album down on wodden chair

Najma: Dekhiye...

She opened the album, making Zoya mentally scream

Zoya held her head '' how is this possible? Another me…or maybe I'm another she? This is so complicated!"

Zoya: Najma" Who is she, her face…it's just like mine.."

Najma looked back down at the pictures behind the plastic covering, then slid in the picture which fell

She smiled. It was a picture of Asad and Imrana at their wedding. They were so happy that day..

Najma: Yeh meri bhabi hai..

Her words were echoing…well only for Zoya

"Crap…Asad was married? What a drag…and she here thoug…WHAT! Bhabhi?"

Zoya: s…so my loom alike…look alike is Mr. Khan's wife?

Najma's smile went away

Najma: Nahin…she was..

Zoya's face again held confusion

Zoya: Was?

Najma pointed at the bride dressed in red, hair curled, smiling

Najma: She was my brother's wife…tha Imrana…then saal pehle… she died

Another shock…Zoya was rooted to the spot

" Aww, poor Mr. Khan… my look alike is dead, Imrana's dead?"

Zoya blinked as a tear slid down her eye. "Am I crying?"

She wiped the tear "why am I crying…why do I feel like this"

Najma: I know….aap yehi soc rahi hai na, ki kaise hui yeh?

Zoya nodded

Najma, slowly plached the album back and recovered the wardrobe.

Najma: Sirf bhai ko pata hai bhabi kaise ….you know. Par, he never wanted to tell us…Uss din….

---------------------- Flashback---------------------------

Najma and Dilshaad walked into the downs slightly wet from the rain outside

Dilshaad: Accha hua ki hum wahan se kuch der pehle nahi nikle.

Najma wiped her hand, then saw her brother and sister-in-law walked out of their room, dressed as if they were goinhg out.

Dilshaad: Kahan jaa rahi ho?

Imrana : Uff, barish shuru ho gayi hai?

She turned to Asad

Imrana: Asad, hum nahi jayenge…

Asad: Don't worry, hum car leke jayenge na?

Dilshaad: Maine kya poocha, kahan jaa rahi?

Asad: Hum movie dekhne jayenge..

Najma: Ab? Bahar toh..

Asad: Najma, please hum bahar behtke nahi dekhenge, ander hi honge..

He started signaling her something

Najma smile, he just wanted time alone with her

Najma: Ammi, bhai teek kehrahi hai

Both Dilshaad and Imrana held questioned faces

Imrana: Abhi abhi toh tumne…

Asa: Uff, tum…tum chalo

She started pulling her away, Dishaad smiled and waved a bye to Imrana

…her last wave to Imrana.

……………………….

A couple hours later, they had gotten a call from the hospital..and it wasn't good new

---------------------- Flashback end---------------------------

Zoya had tears in her eyes, and so did Najma….

Najma: Uss din, babhi…

She started crying, Zoya started crying too, but managed to pull Najma into a hug

Zoya: Shhh…

She whispered. "Mr. Khan ki life itni burhi tarah se guzri hai… iss liye voh aise hi hai"

Zoya: Everything will be alright

She sniffed back her tears….

……………………………..

Precap: Flashbacks, Flashbacks, and Flashbacks everywhere…

…………………………….

How was it guys. Please tell me how it was? Also please comment, I'm sending buddy requests to those who comment so I could pm them.

Thanks.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Amazing!
Read it all in one go!
You're a good writer!
Please add me to the pm list!
~Sophie ;)

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