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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

I remember reading your OS before, but I guess I dint drop a comment b/c of my exams. my apologies :)

anyway coming to the part. 😳 im a sucker for stories where the lead has a broken heart or you know their lover is dead, and you've written the first part so so beautifully. I could just feel everything playing in my head.
and im so glad you decided to make this an SS, honestly I wouldn't mind if you make it an FF :P cause you write so well 😳
now coming to the second, aha finally Asad knows Zoe's name 😆 and aah she's gonna be staying at Asad's place? perfect! :D
continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey lovelies, sorry for the delay, its 1:13pm here (US time), but I'm updating for only you!

Recap: Zoe's minor accident

Asad brings her to the hospital,

One month recovery

Asad will take care of Zoya?

Zoya and Asad sat in his car driving to his place

Zoya: I can't believe this; I'm going to live with an unknown family in an unknown place,great

She mumbled sarcastically, he sat with his shades on looking to the road, but his ears were on her.

Asad-Umm, do you have someone to call at home?

Zoya: Agar hota, meh aapke saat thori jaati!

Asad:…o..kay

He looked back to the road.

"Why is she talking to me like that? Already I can't bring my self to talk to her properly, and now I ask these dumb questions? Of course she doesn't have a family member to call, then why'd she come home with me?'' Asad thought

Zoya rolled her eyes

"Meh kya karne ayi thi aur kya hogaya, I'm stuck here with a paining leg, with him, I don't even know his name!" Zoya's mind told her

Zoya: excuse me, kya aap bata sakti hai, aapkin naam kya hai?

Asad: Uh, sorry I'm Asad

Zoya: Aap mujhe apne saath kyn le jaarahi hai?

Asad: You're hurt because of me, and you have no one to take care of you, the least I can do is take care of you

"Zoya, agar psycho rapist nikle tho? Just to be safe, ask who he lives with" she questioned herself

Zoya's eyes widened

Zoya: Uhh, aapke ghar me kaun kaun rehte hai..you know family members?

"Finally, a decent question, I thought she'd never ask!'

Asad: oh…uh my mom and sister

Zoya let out a sigh of relief

…………………………………..

Asad's sister sat down on the couch, with remote in hand

"No colleges, no work, just relax"

She smiled to herself

Her mom was inside making a dish for lunch. Just at that moment the door bell rung

Dilshaad: Najma dekho na kaun aaya hai..

Dilshaad yelled from the kitchen.

Najma stood up and walked to the doo, and opening it she was surprised.

There stood her Asad, and someone in his arms…..

Najma: Imrana Bhabi

She murmured to herself

Her eyes widened

Najma: A…Ammi she ran to the kitchen

Zoya looked at Asad who walked inside; he placed her down on the couch.

Dilshaad walked out

Dilshaad: Asad yeh kya sunn rahi…

She stopped mid sentence as soon as Zoya turned

"Was it possible? Kya ho raha hai?"

Asad looked at his mom, who had a shocked expression and then at Zoya, who's expression was…not to shocked

Asad cleared his throat

Asad: Umm, Ammi yeh hai Zoya, aur Zoya, this is my mom and my sister

Najma and Dilshaad looked at eachother

Najma-Zoya? Par bhai inhe to Im-

Asad: Uhh, Najma ek kaam karo inhe guest room le jao, inke paer mein chot hai

Najma nodded and both slowly left

….Asad turned to his Mother

Dilshaad: Asad…yeh

Asad: Ammi, I know, she looks like Imrana, par hai nahi

Dilshaad: Meh yeh nahi keh rahi hoon ki yeh Imrana hai, par kahan mili yeh tumhe?

Asad: Meri gaari ke saamne a gayi, aur anjaane meh mere waja she unhe chot lagi…iss liye mehne unhe ghar le aayi

Dilshaad: Par unke ghar wale?

Asad: Hai nahi..

She turned and wlked to his room Dilshaad looked at his closed door

Dilshaad: Allah hi jaane kya hoga

………………………………….

Here again, he was being reminded of his past. All the framed photo's, all her things still lie in his bedroom, here too. There was a photograph covering every wall, a frame on the nightstand and the picture of their wedding hung above the bed.

She was dressed in a green and gold gharara, while he wore a god sherwani. They were both happy that day, it was true at first they hated each other but day by day their love grew, and when he gave his heart to her, she was snatched away, till this day he was questioning Allah. Why did Allah take her away, what was her mistake?

Asad wiped the fresh tears forming in his eyes and slowly walked to the picture and gently un-hooked it from the wall. He had to forget, but now there was Zoya, the face he had t see everyday….one moth how will he manage?

He placed the photo frame on the table, he'd ask Najma to remove them all, he didn't have the courage to, he turned and walked into the bathroom.

One month…..

………………………………………….

Precap-

Najma Zoya Friends? Kabse?

Pleas bear my mistakes. How was it? I know Asad and Zoya seem impossible at the moment, but aage aage dekhna kya hota hai😆

Please comment, criticize, tell me what you liked…what you ant to happen. Will update soon <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting concept. please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Lol, Zoya thought he was a Psycho rapist 🤣
Aww...
Asad don't cry bebz, I'm here for you <3
Great update :)
Thanks for the pm love, and continue soon :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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btw you should be off to sleep now :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Its great do pm me whn u cont want to read futhur how they will fall in luv...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was just awsum...i m just a new member of qh but SS.os ff are really awsum..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Nice One Month Zoya Will Stay With Asad.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks everyone for appreciating my story and for that WALA...part 4 of Return of Love
enjoy;)

Najma entered the room with a tray of soup in hand. This was the wierdest encounter she had ever had with a guest. She didn't even know her.
Zoya sat on the bed, the injured leg wrapped in a cast on the bed, while the other dangling between the bed and floor. She was on her phone, taking

Zoya:ya, ya...hold on a sec...
she looked to Najma

Zoya: excuse me, aap mujhe bata sakte hai, ki iss ghar ka adress kya hai?

Najms : o...kay
awkwardness screamed its name in her tone.
Najma told her the adress, while Zoya repeated it back to the person on the other line

Zoya:...yes, thank you
She hung up and looked at Najma

Zoya: Hi!
Najma held a fake grin

Najma: Hi?

Zoya: Sit
Najma did and handed her the bowl of soup

Najma: Yeh ammi ne bheji hai

Zoya: Really? That's so nice of her
she took it

Zoya: Waise, tumhara naam kya hai?

Najma: Ji, Najma...aapka

Zoya: Zoya

Najma: Aap jaanti hai aap meri bhab-

Dilshaad: Najma?
Both their heads turned to Dilshaad who entered the room with a glass of juice

Dilshaad: Tum yeh neeche bhool gayi thi
She handed Zoya her zide bag

Dilshaad: Tumhara naam Zoya hai na?
Zoya nodded
Dilshaad looked at her leg: Bohot dard mehsoos ho rahi hai na?

Zoya: Thori thori
Dilshaad touched Zoya's cheek

Dilshaa: Bohot pyaari bachchi ho tum...
All of a sudden she felt loved, by a complete stranger, she was getting the touch of a mother, Zoya smiled

Zoya: Kya meh aapko phupi bola sakti hoon?
She unkowingly blurted out
Dilshaad looked at Najma and back a Zoya. She smiled

Dilshaad: Zaroor...
She patted her head
Outside Asad stood watching from a distance. Zoya said something making his mother and Najma laughed. Already she was being welcomed, by not his loving mother only, but also by his sister.
The door bell rung, making Asad come back from his thoughts, his mother looked up, and he signaled her he'd get it...Opening the door he found a man standing in front of him
Asad: Ji kahiye?

Man: Kya Zoya Farooki hai?

Asad: Ji hai, par ab aa nahi sakte, aapke kya madat kar sakta hoon?

Man: Un ke kuch cheeze deliver karne hai
he signaled someone behind hi.
Three men walked up with two boxed on each shoulder
"Kuch cheeze, they brought like a boxes a big as his house"

Asad:...Yeh sab Ms. Farooki ke hai?

Man: Ji haan, unhone hi call karke bola tha.
Asad held a fake smile

Asad: Than You...thank you very much.
...
Asad walked into the room where the three ladies were with the three men, they didn't at all seen tired from holding the boxed, but held straight faces.

Zoya: Whats happening?
Then suddenly remembered

Zoya: OH, phupi yeh mere cheeze hai, maine manga hai
Dilshaad, whose eybrows were raised of surprisement, turned to Zoya

Dilshaad: Ac..accha? Sab tumhari hai?

Zoya: I know, I'm staying for a month par...a woman need alots...right?
Asad rolled his eyes, already he was getting irritated of her blabbering, how can he take another 31 days of this?
" From the looks of this, it seems as if she's moving in"

Dilshaad: Teek hai, tum sab yeh set karo, meh khana taiyaar kerti hoon
Dilshaad exited and najma moved to Zoya's side

Najma: Kahan rehti haiaap?

Zoya: Officially New York se, par kaam se Bhopal aaya hoon, lemme' tell you the guys here are very rude!
She said extra loud, which was meant for Asad

Zoya: Aur looks, looks meh toh teek tak hai, par none of them are hot and dashing like Mahender Singh Dhoni!
Najma's eyes widened."was she for real now? Oh lord what is Asad bhai thinking?"

Asad closed his eyes and was mentally talking to himself "ignore, ignore!"

Zoya: So Najma...

Najma: What?

Zoya: How would you like the honors of being my friend?
she held out her hand
Najma smiled and shook her hand
Asad on the other hand, had on one of his sexy confused faces on.
"Najma and Zoya friends? Impossibel"

Man #1: Sir where do I put this box.

Asad: Put it anywhere
The man put the pox down, which made a little thud making Asad jump back

Asad: What's in there deat cats?

Man#2: Hume kya pata, hamara kaam hai sirf deliver karna.
Asad turned back to face Zoya, who moved her brows up in own facing him
"is she teasing me? Ugh! This was not the day for a suit..."

The begginning to a new love story...from the looks of it not now?

How was it guys? Leave you comments, tell what you like, what you want, common don't be shy😆
BTW: Ignore my mistakes



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome part
Loved it
Update soon
Thanx for pm dear

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