Return of Love FF *part 14 Updated*index page 1

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Asad stood in front of the framed photo, the form in the photo smiled back at him
a single tear slid down, it has been so long, he hadn't been here for 3 years and when he has it brought back many memories. He touched the picture, pressing his fingers against the glass.
It had been three years since her death and finally he's returned. Just looking at the picture brought back many memories. His love his beloved was no more she was gone that unfateful day, and the only words she spoke were "I'm sorry..I broke our promise...sorry...I'm dying before you..."
Only if he had arrived at time...he remembered holding her head on his lap crying his heart out
Ever since he shifted away from home, away from everything that reminds him of her. As soon as he arrived at the airport, he drove all the way here...where their home was on the hill, where her grave was burried...under the blossom tree.
He walked around the house, nothing was touched, which meant no one ever came here.
He walked out to the back of the hill, to her grave, where she lies. Many petals fell from above giving the tombstone a natural color, he knelt down and traced her name which was engraved onto the stone. Imrana Khan...
"sir" someone called out from behind. He turned his head a bit showing the side to his employee, who he had brought along

"sir, hume jaana hoga..." he continued

"Mein aa jaungi, you go ahead" he replied

his employee left and he turned back to her gravestone.
He reached into his coat and pulled out a rose, her favorite flower, and placed it on the ground in front of the gravestone.
He stood again and looked up at the sky, ever since her death he's been like this, but he hadn't turned cold hearted...yet
he remembers her saying before "You'd rather hurt, than feel nothing at all...I know I would"
She still affects him in many ways, but that's the price of love...isn't it?
He turned and stared walking, as he put on his Ray Bans on to cover his teary eyes.
******
He sat in the car alone...as usual. It used to be him and her, but that changed a while back, destiny had something else planned,but he still couldn't accept the fact that she was really gone. After three long years...
He looked up seeing a form walk in front of his gar, and with all force he turned the wheel trying not to hit the person, the back tire screeched against the concrete road as it came to a halt and he quickly stepped out of the car to see if he had hit someone.
There the edge of the road sat a girl, black hair, dressed in a light blue top and fitted jeans, a side bag which had her name imprinted on it. She held her foot, of which blood was coming out, he hair covering her face.
Asad kneeled besides her and had the sudden urge of seeing her face, but he didn't know why.

"I'm so-" he tried saying

"Allah miya whats wrong with you? Aap ghaari nahi chala sakte?!"

Her hair flew out of her face, revealing her angelic face.
He stood dead at his his end, was he surprised at the fact that she was welling away at him, or that she was an exact copy of...Imrana

"I-aah!" She looked down at her foot

He held her food, trying to stop the blood
They were sitting in the middle of the road, he looked left and right then picked her up

"Kya kar rahi hai" she said in his arms
"Hospital leke jaaraha hoon" he said

She kept quiet as he walked toward the car

The side bag lies on the road with the name Zoya Farookin imprinted on it
Because Destiny had something else planned

This was a totally, absolutely, random OS, It wasn't planned, but I was listening to the song Need You Now, and the idea popped in my head. I don't know who Imrana is is, so don't ask, the name came to my head out of no where.
Please comment and criticise, tells me how it was 😳
<3 Farhana


Index:
Part 1: pg 1
Part 2: pg 2
Part 3: pg 3
Part 4: pg 4
Part 5: pg 5
Part 6: pg 6
Part 7: pg 7
Part 8: pg 10
Part 9: pg 11
Part 10: pg 13
Part 11: pg 15
Part 12: pg 17
Part 13: pg 19
Part 14: pg 22
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shanakyasharan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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can u continue it😳...its such a beautiful story...love it❤️
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Its gud do cont n do pm me.
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A very beautiful OS.
I loved it a lot.
It was very sweet and amazing.
Plz keep coming up with more such wonderful ideas.
Take care!
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Very beautiful OS, but don't keep me hanging where is the rest.
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very nice plzz do countinue

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Hey loves, thanks for the comments. I think I'll continue it into a SS and I won't leave all of you hanging, since I've realized I have nothing to do for the next couple of days.😆

Continuing:
Asad picked her up again to walk into the hospital. She tried protesting, but he wasn't listening and he continued walking until he reached inside. He called out to the doctor, who ran seeing the blood
Doctor- Kya hua...lijiye inko stretcher pe betaiye.
He made her sit, while two nurse wheeled her away to bandage her wound.
Doctor-From the looks of it, the wound it very deep, kamse kam 1 mehna hi toh lagega.
"One Month!" Asad thought "what did he do to the poor girl?"
Doctor- waise, mujhe inko kuch antibiotics prescribe karna hai, aap mujhe bata sakte hai, voh aapki kaun lagti hai?
"Uh-oh..."
Asad- um...
" how should I answer that? What is her name...the only thing I know is that she looks like...Imrana"
Asad- voh...um...voh meri dost hain
Doctor- okay...please sign here...
he handed him the papers.
"great, now he had to take care of her..."
...
Zoya- dekhiye yeh kuch gehri zakham nahi hai, aap fikar mat kijiye meh teek hoon Zoya tried convincing the nurse
Nurse- aapko ab dard mehsoos nahi ho rahi hai, par kuch hi der meh aapko hoga
"what?" thought Zoya
She held a confused expression
Asad walked into the room with the Doctor
Doctor- kaise lagrahi hai ab...um
Zoya- Zoya
"Zoya?" thought Asad
Zoya- Meh fine hoon, par yeh nurse kya kehrahi hai, dard zyaada nahi ho rahi hai ab aur baad meh?
Doctor- Indeed, she's telling the truth. The wound is very deep and it'll take a minimum of 1 month to heal.
Zoya- ONE MONTH!
she stood up, but had to sit back down after grimacing over the pain she caused onto her right foot.
Zoya - One month? How is this possible? how can I move around?
Doctor- Don't worry, your friend here will take care of you..
Zoya- Friend?
She looked at Asad, who held a fake smile and waved a "hi"
"since when is he my friend" she thought
...
Precap: Asad rings the bell to his mom's home with Zoya in his arms as she can't walk, Najma opens the door to see him holding...Imrana bhabi?

kind of cheesy? I made it short as I wan't to write a longer part for the next update
Keep commenting(it encourages me a lot!)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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When you continue, you have to pm me.
Got it?
Brilliant start hun, I actually thought it was zoya who died at the start :P
Thank god ma prediction was wrong!!!
Please update soon love :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww Lovely SS. Please PM Me When You Update.
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Awesome
love it
awww so she is going to live with them...this is going to be fun
pls continue soon and pm me

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