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Posted: 12 years ago
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I know late'again sorry, getting busy. Here's the part, let me tell you in advance this part isn't going to be long, but next time it will'promise

Part 8:

Asad was in his room, his gaze was outside, he watched the drops hit against the window. The thunder seemed to be screaming louder than ever. The room seemed to be filled with loneliness itself. He hugged himself, because there was no one else there to hug him. The cold was in the air, which sent chills throughout his body. He was getting goosebumps, but still stood their. This night reminded him of that day.

3 Years ago, June 16.

*****Flashback******

Imrana crossed her arms

Imrana: Why don't you just say we're lost?

Asad: Who gets lost while going to the theatres?

Imrana: You do!

Asad looked around into the dark night through the window.

The wipers whooshed away the endless rain from his car glass.

Asad: so much for shortcut...

He mumbled, but not unheard by Imrana.

Imrans: Ek kaam karo, ask someone for directions.

Asad stopped his car and got down into the rain

Imrana: Kya kar rahi ho? You're getting wet!

Asad: It's okay!

He said raising his voice little louder, because of the rain.

He headed out. She shook her head and took the umbrella, which lied on the backseat. She too headed out.

''''.

Imrana: Asad! Asad!

Asad ran hearing her voice

Asad: Imranan! Im-

He stopped seeing her in front of him, wet, just as he was the umbrella gone 5 feet away by now. She held the right side of her waist.

His eyes were filled with shock, terror'and tears

Asad: Imrana'

He fell to his knees besides her, pulling he head onto his lap

Asad: yeh sab'what happ-

Imrana: Shhh'

She attempted to put he finger on his lips

He started crying.

Imrana: Ahh!

He looked down at the object his hand just touched, and left his eyes wide'.

A knife.

He looked at the blood on his fingers and slowly pulled the knife out.

Asad: Imrana? How- Yeh- what?

He was running out of words and she was running out of time

She held his collar and pulled him down

Imrana: Asad' "I'm sorry'I broke out promise'sorry'I'm dying before you'''

Asad closed his eyes. This can't happen. NO!

He felt her lips on her cheek and then everything was silent, but the noised of the rain'
BAM!

Did someone hit him? He felt his vision blur'the dark figure of someone who stood in-between him and Imrana' he couldn't say anything; the words seemed to be stuck in his throat. He felt the warm blood slide down his head'.his eyes closed.

*****Flashback End*****

Asad banged his fist against the wall, only if he had been there earlier. Who was that person'who?

"I'm sorry'I broke out promise'sorry'I'm dying before you'"

The words played in his mind over and over again. He held his head and closed his eyes

Asad: No'I'm sorry, I'm sorry for not being in time'

He whispered, and turned his gaze back out to the endless rainy night'the type of nights he hated'since that day.

...

Precap- Asya nok - jhok

...

WOW'so now Imrana officially died on my birthday...that night of June 16'

I very well know you all are wondering who that mystery person was, but before you ask let me tell you'.sabar karo meri yaaron.šŸ˜†

This part was short indeed, but expect a longer one'soon <3

Farhana

Edited by risingsea101 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Very Sad For Asad's Poor Him. He Lost His Wife.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Imrana was murdered????😲 I thought, she died in some accident. Oh my!!!!šŸ˜’ Asad too was hit😭 This was indeed a sad update along with a cliffhangeršŸ¤” Who that person must bešŸ¤”

Oh Farhana!!!! Its your birthday todayšŸ¤—šŸ˜³šŸ„³ Happy Birthday Sweets🄳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
:O
Awww!!
Poor asad mah babey :'(
Update soon love and thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Nice update. Emotional and sad.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
itna chotttaaa update kyyynnn??

anyways it was good. n update soon n i want a loonng part of nok-jhokšŸ˜›

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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
thanx Farhana for da pm. da part was sad, i could feel Asad's pain on losing Imrana. who was da person who hit Asad and killed Imrana? plz give a long update next time.
love,
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
awsm part.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
That was quite a shocking and sad part

I loved the part a lot.
you are an amazing writer.
plz update the next part soon
Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago
risingsea101 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaforlife

Imrana was murdered????😲 I thought, she died in some accident. Oh my!!!!šŸ˜’ Asad too was hit😭 This was indeed a sad update along with a cliffhangeršŸ¤” Who that person must bešŸ¤”


Oh Farhana!!!! Its your birthday todayšŸ¤—šŸ˜³šŸ„³ Happy Birthday Sweets🄳


Thanks hun, but it's not my birthday...šŸ˜†
My birthday's on Jun 16, I was referring to the day Imrana died
Sorry if you misunderstood

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