Return of Love FF *part 14 Updated*index page 1 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Great part love <3
S'great that najma and zoya are friends <3
Asads already irritated :P
Thanks for pm, update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
hey its amazing..

it would be nice if u make a proper index of this ff..

it would be easy for readers..

thanks a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
wow nice cute introduction into the home.
and Asad miyan as usual irritated👍🏼
thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
That Was Awsome. Please Make A Index On The Front Page.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
awesome ss cont soon...and pm me too
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm back! Thank you everyone for appreciating the parts, it really means a lot. I've put up an index on page 1, now it won't be hard to locate the parts. Keep reading

Asad walked down the stairs to find his mother reading the newspaper. She looked up to see Asad, sleeves folded up, tie missing, hair kind of messy.

Dilshaad: Tum itne thake hue kyun lagrahe ho?

Asad: Ammi, I had to lift and place 6 boxes of unnecessary things and move it from here to there, all by my self, until Zoya found the perfect place

Dilshaad: Yea, she is a handful

Asad: I can't believe it, out of all the people in Bhopal, she lands in front of my car!

Najma: Bhaijaan, Zoya itni bhi buri nahin hai

Dilshaad: Najma teek keh rahi hai

"Are you serious? It hasn't even been 24 hours and their already taking her side?"

Asad: Ya, ya whatever…

He left the living room and entered his bedroom.

Entering he realized the pictures, the memories all were gone and taken clean.

"Wasn't I the one who asked Najma to remove them? Why do I feel suffocated even being in here now? Without the room being stuffy and unclean…I need a shower"

He entered the bathroom

………………………………….

Zoya and Najma sat in "Zoya's room" playing UNO cards.

Zoya: So, you match the either the card or number, and if you don't say PICK AND PLAY, pick a card, play it if it matches….okay?

Najma nodded and they continued playing.

Dilshaad: Najma bring Zoya down for Dinner

Dilshaad called out

Zoya put the cards down and Najma helped her up

Zoya: How stupid can these doctors be? I mean at least give me crutches.

Asad, who also happened to walk out of his bedroom…clean and bathed, heard this, and as everyone knows he couldn't help and had to say something.

Asad: Well this isn't New York that for every little foot injury they have to give you crutches.

Zoya: Little injury?! I could've died; do you know Mr. Khan kitni khoon behrahi thi?

Asad: Toh hospital mein kaun keh raha tha"oh no, it's a minor injury"

Zoya: Voh tab ki baat tha! I don't know why you're so rude to me?!

He was silence "It's true, he has been mean ever since she stepped into this house. Well it wasn't her fault she looked like Imrana or that she fell in front of his car; he should've watched where he was going"

Asad looked back at her, then at Najma who started pulling Zoya away.

………………………………

They all sat in the dining table, silent.

Dilshaad looked at everyone.

Dilshaad: Umm, to Zoya, tum Bhopal koi khaas waje se ayi ho?

Zoya: Yes Phupi, to find out about my family….

Najma and Dilshaad looked at each other

Asad: Well that's good, wait I thought you didn't have any family?

Zoya: Nahi, well see….urm… I was adopted a long time back, and now am here to look for my real family.

They all looked shocked. Was it because she was adopted or was it because she said it so easily.

Zoya looked up to see their faces.

Zoya: Is there anything wrong?

Najma and Dilshaad shook their heads and Asad looked back down.

………………………………………..

Precap: Zoya finds out surprising news about her family

Asad, Zoya share a personal conversation

…………………………………………

I know the part was short, but next part will be longer promise. I have a question, how many parts do a SS in maximum have, because from where I am, I don't think this story finishes so soon?

Oh don't forget to comment (encourages me to write more)

Thanks.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Lol, poor asad 😆
Love their mini arguments <3
Oooh... The precap looks interesting :P
Thanks for the pm love, and update soon <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Amazing part.
I loved Asad's irritation and Zoya's non-stop banter.
She is adopted.
The precap is quite interesing.
plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
cute lil update, mercy on me yaar, kch tou long karo update😭.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Whose Zoya's Real Family??
Nice Precap. (:

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