Abhiya--Was it raindrops or i just heard my heart beating?

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Bisweswar

@Bisweswar

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

uff di.what an updt.but i am fed up of abhay's stay away missions.yeh idiot samajhta kyun nahi hai.poor my piya 😭 pareshan karke rakha hai usay.but the last part was .pls updt soon and thanks for the pm.

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.AgapiMou.

@.AgapiMou.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Indu tat was an emotionally beautiful update!🤗Your works are one of a kind..simple yet so touching!Song selection was perfect.Abhay here reads mind it seems..Pia ki privacy ki to lag gayi:P
The way you described tat kiss those emotions tat helplessness was just amazing:*
waiting for next!

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@--Janvie--

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Wow Indu that was just Amazing,Mindblowing,HATS OFF TO YOU. 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it immensely.❤️
The way you describe their emotions especially Abhay's feelings,helplessness and his inner turmoil.That's Just Outstanding.I felt the scene clearing running in front of My eyes, just like watching the show. 😉 😳 😳
As far as I see,I don't find any other writer describing My Abhiya's Magical love and pain So Beautifully and Intesely as you do and make many fans nostalgic reliving Their GOLDEN time.Take a bow man!Take a bow!!!! 👏 👏 ⭐️
And Oh Ya,The song selection was Awesome! 😊 Dil Ibadat suits them the most,My ultimate choice for Abhiya.Thankyou so much for playing it. 😉 😳 😳And The Kiss was just so HOTTT. ☺️ ☺️
Eagerly waiting for a Part2. 😳 😳 Pls Continue this as Soon as you get time.😊 😳
Thanks for the pm. 😃

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

This was soo beautiful Indu. Did you write it out of the blue 😲 so romantic and subtle. typical Abhay's thinking and I wanted to say it lots of time that you understand abhay's feelings too good and you write about their forbidden relationship is such a beautiful poignant manner. it's ethereal. loved it and waiting for part 2. 🤗

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Thank you for reading guys! 😳 I will post the last part today. And don't worry,I shall reply to each and every one after i post the last part.actually am really having time issues but I don't want to keep you all waiting anymore,so will post it asap!😊 Once again thanks soo much guys. Love you all..🤗--Indu

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hema

@hema_rawat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

beautiful os ...

waiting 4 nxt part ...

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

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me first me first😉

edited:

Truly, truly amazed by the amount of insight you show in Abhay's thoughts. And your Abhay is so like the one I always imagine him to be!
Love you for that.. I guess we are on the same plane..lol
but i could never have written something as beautiful as this...the way you portray a whole scene in words..it was like I could see it!
Abhay's conflict, Piya's inner struggle... Too good *claps*

Take a bow, Indu. You never fail to leave me gasping for breath by the sheer intensity of your words n if I were a boy I would have fallen for you long back! 😆

Isshh..now I want to read more...:/
Bad Indu , making me addicted to your writing :/

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 12 years ago