Abhiya--Was it raindrops or i just heard my heart beating?

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

areee who told u not to post...post jaldi jaldi...we are waiting eagerly...hey that rhyms😆

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Post Updated!!! 😳 pms later..

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wow nice story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

feel the raindrops and wash away the dirt of ur daily life!!

feel the sent of wet soil spreading into the air and forget all pain,all sorrow of life.

feel the inadvertent shower falling from the sky glowing like pearls.

feel the sound of ur heart mixing up with the rythm of showers!!

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sorry for the crap poem!!!😆...i know it won't get into anyone's mind.but ur writing made me emotional!!so it came out naturally..😆

jokes apart!!i am new in this forum!!😃i was always being a silent reader of ur works!!😊...but this writing caused me to break my silence!!!

it was just like the fresh breath of air!!a real relief just like a small raindrops in the hot sunny day!!😳loved it to the core!!!<3

sorry my like button is not working😭.

i want to say so many things but i cldn't find appropiate words to describe how much i love this!!😳

cont asap...plz don't make us wait so long!!!😭

Edited by ifians - 12 years ago

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

indu that was mind blowing
the way u describe the abhiya feeling i m speechless 👏
very well written piece... just loved it when both confronted
cont soon ... waiting

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captainplus

@captainplus

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awesome

loved it

continue soon

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Aaliyah

@--Aaliyah--

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Really really loved it .
It was so heavenly and romantic .
The songs and the last part
Continue soon , really eager for the next part .😃
Thanks so much for the pm . Once again really loved it .

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Induuu *runs and gives her a tight hug and tackles her to the ground*

eee!!!
I so wanted a rain scene in PKYEK... You did it!
And oh bechara Abhay trying to change the songs...yet falling in worse trouble!
And yay he kissed her :D

continue continue jaldiii!!

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

kuch log kabhi nahi change hote and abhay kabhi apna stay away mission nahi chod sakta...
indu u never left any chance to amazed me with ur writing...