Abhiya--Was it raindrops or i just heard my heart beating?

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Comments updated.

@Juhi, Mandy *sticks out tongue*

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

a really beautiful masterpiece indu. truly well written.

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diana

@vampireking

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

thanku so much for the pm !!!

i cant tell you how much i liked it !!!!

it is like seeing pkyk live !!!!

i dont know your name sorry coz i never read anything of your 😭😭

the update is so good😭 mind blowing 😭i don't have words to explain my feelings after reading this

this !!!😭

thanku so much for the pm if you did not have pm me !!!i would have never read it !!!!😭

thanku so much !!!!😳

plzzz cant you just continue it Please please please

plzzz don't end it here !!!

i want to read more !!!!pzzz its a request !!!!

ekta mam ne toh pkyk season 2 nahi diya but i hope you will extend some chappy in it !!!!😭

i know you will not gonna do it!!!but still its a request ...

plzz plzz plzzz ...

i read both the chappy !!!!and you write like a professional writer !!!!😭

hatts off to you

Edited by vampireking - 12 years ago

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sain (nick name)

@abhaylovepia

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

thank you so much to read this is like a treat know
i am so much missing PKYEK
i think its going superb
keep it up doing great job

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Bisweswar

@Bisweswar

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

uff di.i had tears in my eyes .i always imagined abhay like this.it was too intense.i loved how u potrayed piyas emotions.mind blowing update and thank u sooo much for the pm.kaash ekta mata apko script writer bana deti kamse kam repeated dialogue se toh bach jate.

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

wow abhiya- an unsolved mystery... really indu its beautifull the way u write pain, agony, carving, trouble and confussion of two soul... its unsaid...

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

It was FANTASTIC!!!!!!

So beautiful, amazing, awesome, superb.

I loved the way you described abhiya's feeling specially abhay's feelings. one thing always missed in the show is that they never showed any emotional face to face conversational between abhiya and whenever they had fight CV's didn't care to sort things out between them in mature way. abhiya never came in open with their emotional turmoil. I always wanted them to confess all their feelings, fears with each other...but that never happened.

But thanks a lot to you that you made it possible in your amazing OS.

Really loved it. keep writing more such things.

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

beautiful,mervelous,fantabulous,out of the world each and every word seemed short for this update!!

the way both abhay and piya's feelings were portrayed was just so beautiful!!relived pkyek through this update!!vadly wished if this happened in real show.

just want to say at last,

if a small rain in ur pathway leads u to imagine and pen down such a beautiful story then i wish this moonson season stays for always.

and the songs selection were so beautiful!!!

the last part dialouge was so beautiful when abhay said how far he wld go he wld always love her deep core from his dead heart!!

take my gratitude di for this so beautiful piece and keep writting always!!

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ha ha reading the story five times till now!!!c'nt get over yet!!

Edited by ifians - 12 years ago

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

that was beautiful indu. This gave a prefect insight of abhay's thoughts. I haven't reads anything better than this. You just potreyed every thing with upmost excellence:D

all those fights of thouggts taking place in both pia's n abhay's mind were beautifully depicted. I had tears in my eyes reading it.

Thank u so much for the pm

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jack-12

@jack-12

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

that was amazing indu. just read the two updates. very well written. the entire rain plot was awesome, giving a great taste to the entire work. it was so well written that it made me feel i'm witnessing the entire thing:D

n that was a wonderful title

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