Abhiya--Was it raindrops or i just heard my heart beating?

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

I wuld lik 2 say its truly magical update indu
sng selection ws perfect acc. 2 d situation
abhiya in Rain wowoowoowww!!! I always wanted 2 c dis typ of situation in d shw..thk u so much
*hug*

Edited by luckdiya - 12 years ago

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Awsomeee Indu...Abhay & Pia feeling made me😭sooo Intense love feeling eachother...Lovely dear...Love it🤗

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

i will reply properly after i am done crying. nostalgia *sniff*

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Indu, what should I say. i honestly dont have words t describe how beautifully you write. it was soo soo poignant piece of writing, I loved it and it brought tears in my eyes . so emotional. 👏 like i said before, you understand Abhay so well and I love how you wrote about his feelings, i feel the same so i can connect with your writing easily because this is how i see Abhay too. his inner turmoil, that yearning, Pia's longing and selfless unconditional love - you write everything so so beautiful. mesmerzing and magic of words 👏 ⭐️ I have no words enough to praise you. it was so beautiful. i read it thrice.. gonna read more.. loved it Indu 🤗

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Sanderalla

@Sanderalla

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Simply amaxinggg...!!!!!!?!!!!!!???⭐️👏

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captainplus

@captainplus

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

beautifully written ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

even 4r a moment i didn't feel tat i ws reading an os written by a writer

it felt like m seeing the scene live in front of me n abhiya r speaking their heart out

it seemed like u actually went deep inside their heart n got their feeings out

awesome job 👏 👏 👏

sorry , i xactly don't kno wat 2 say 😕

bt 1 thing m 100% sure of is tat ,u definately deserve a standing ovulation 4r this

tnx 4r the pm 😊

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@--Janvie--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

I'm lacking words for appreciation. 😭 😭 This is Beyond Excellence and Perfection Indu!!Just Outstanding Work,Hats Off to you Man.👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it to the core of my Heart.❤️ 😃 😳
I really don't know what to say,The way it's written I could feel their pain,helplessness and the whole scene was just running in front of my eyes. 😊 😳 😳 I really don't have words and don't know excactly what I'm typing,But All words like Amazing,Awesome,Superb,Beautiful,Bravo,etc,All words are less to appreciate you and your Mind-blowing writing skills. 👏 👏 ⭐️You should have to be some Proffesional writer writing some Novels and Books and You should be the script-writer for Season 2, 😉 😃 You deserve that position and even much higher than that.(Atleast Then We'll be spared from the Dull CV's of the show. 😭 😆)
Thankyou so much for the pm. 😃

P.S.:- I know comment is kind of weird 😕 😆 But as I said above I don't know what I'm typing and Just SPEECHLESS in front of your Marvellousy Fantastic Creations and Out of this world Writing Skills.👏 👏

P.P.S.:- Really Never seen Someone who can Write so Wonderfully Beautiful and Describe Emotions in such an AMAZING manner. 😳 ⭐️ Just Keep Writing,Especially on Our Abhiya and PKYEK more and more. 😃 😳 😳

Edited by janvie - 12 years ago

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

lovely...superb update👏
I have no word to praise u

Edited by .rumki. - 12 years ago

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

OMG I m speechless!!!!!!!!!!!👏,👏,👏,👏,👏,👏.

This was pure bliss!!!!! I m telling u i was discussing this only wid Shreya yest. I felt as if i relived dat forbidden relationship of Abhiya while reading this!!!! I mean d way u describe Abhay's inner conflict, over whelming emotions bt yet his desire to control them, his un conditional love 4 Piya i feel as if U r Abhay himself coz no one can ever describe some one else's state of mind n heart so deeply n perfectly!!!!👏. I felt my eyes welling up when Piya was thinking otherwise while Abhay was reading her thoughts n was getting frustrated n dat last hug of bliss, a salvation, momentary though bt was soo heavenly n complete👏,. A fantastic piece of writing!!! Indu plz do write more stuff like this. U r an ace at Forbidden relationships esp Abhay's state of mind!!!

Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 12 years ago

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

amazing update. Both pia & abhay r thinking about each others happiness only. The battle b/w abhay's heart & mind is described so superbly. Luvd hw pia literally stopped thinking so that abhay doesn't feel bad. The last part was too good...lvd how abhay for once let his guard down & enjoyed with pia. Abhiya hug was beautiful.

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