SS : CAPTIVE SPIRITS UPDATED ON PG 36- PART 9*aniversary special* - Page 21

Originally posted by: sweety_crazed

finally my pestering paid 😎😆...good one nafi..😃u know i cant say u know😉

bechari piya...u shld hv made her more scared😈..tht part was good..hawww u want piya to be scared more😲😆

i soo wanna knw who killed tht girl n if she was a look alike..maybe maybe not😉

tumne jeh ko cry baby aur nautangi banadhiya😲🤣..i miss chand's neck dance re😭..u knw my chand luv na🤣...yea yea i know😛...jeh is kind of funny here😆

witchy thnx fr d pm n d remainder in fb😳...jaldi continue kar n muje isi tharha pm aur fb mei yaad dilaakey rehna😛...precap sounds romantic..n exciting..hope i can except a by mistake wala kiss😉...n tht bilue eyes??..abhay?lets see what happens.😉.sure i will continue doing that😛

Originally posted by: Bisweswar

di pls tell me ur updating.

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

oh ho bechari pia kitna daar gayi thi...party time..yipee!! I know arnab piya aur abhay ki engagement announce karne wala hai😉

Originally posted by: Jane523

nyc update dear...[/QUOTE]thank u

[QUOTE=ifians]omg bechara jay!😆

poor pia!!😭dar gayi bechari!!

ab party mein kya hone wala hain?!!😳

Originally posted by: janvie

Awesome Update dear!!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it alot.❤️thank u
Pia ka reality check ho gaya.That Atma/look-alike of her really scared her alot. 😡 😆 I wonder if the bhatakti atma is trying to convey something to Pia about who killed her and all. 😉 😳 😳 amm no that atma isnt trying to convey anything
And OMG My Poor Jeh. 😭 😆 🤣 Kya se Kya ho gaya Surprise dete-dete Baccha ghar se bahar ho gaya. 😲 🤣yeap he is funny here😆
And Party me Abhay-Piya engagement declare hogi I guess.That is the Special thing Arnab talking about na? 😉 😳 😳Along with that Misha-Jeh ki bhi jaldi sagai kara dena,Then Family complete.🤣 🤣wwell u cant be so sure of engaement thing...it can be ulta too😉
I hope Arnab Pia ki shadi Jeh se na kara de. 😡Uska koi bharosa nahi hai mujhe.😡 🤣 😆 maybe arnab will do that
Dark Blue-Eye Sketch, 😲 I hope Abhay is not that Killer. 😭 😉 😆 the killer raaz will come out later
Eagerly waiting for the party...Pls Continue Soon This Time. 😳 😳
Thanks for the pm. 😃

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

awesum nafi!👏 the horror part was written very well!! 👍🏼
So whats the mystery behind all thats pia witnessing?
Eager to read the next! Party sounds great! 😊 Sumthngs gonna happen there i guess..!
Continue plz n thanks 4 pm. :)

Originally posted by: ...mano...

Grr88888888 chap!! loved it...👏thanks

Plz dear update rapidly you know i seems you have stopped writing i wait desperately for your PMs. 😭😭 plzz dear jaldi likha karo aww sorry but i am really busy nowdays but i try my best!! and no i didnt stop writing

😉 i love Jeh here and hate this stupid arrogant chand 😡 koi apne betay k sath aise karta hai kya?

Abhay is a sweet brother😊yeap he is sweet...chand is strict😛

Thank u so much for the PM. 🤗

Plz do. cont. soon

Originally posted by: ashu1909

nice update.poor piya she was really very scared.well there were no abhiya in this update but hope the next update will be more of abhiya.

Originally posted by: bellaaa

nice update
poor jeh ... abhay is so good bro
aww misha also didnt understand piya
well waiting for abhiya meeting
cont soon