SS : CAPTIVE SPIRITS UPDATED ON PG 36- PART 9*aniversary special* - Page 20

awesum nafi!👏 the horror part was written very well!! 👍🏼
So whats the mystery behind all thats pia witnessing?
Eager to read the next! Party sounds great! 😊 Sumthngs gonna happen there i guess..!
Continue plz n thanks 4 pm. :)

Grr88888888 chap!! loved it...👏

nice update.poor piya she was really very scared.well there were no abhiya in this update but hope the next update will be more of abhiya.

superb update
poor jeh😆.he will have to stay outside the house
now I am really curious abt what with the house

nice update
poor jeh ... abhay is so good bro
aww misha also didnt understand piya
well waiting for abhiya meeting
cont soon

I am commenting after so long na.
Really sorry for commenting so late 😔
Coming to the update, read the last two chapters just now and i totally loved both the chapters.
Abhiya first meeting was unique and awesome lol. I enjoyed that part a lot. Superbly done!!!
The horror elements in the last chapter was really scary!!!
For few moments i got scared coz i really imagined all those happening infront of my eyes!!!
That mirror cracking, blood and imagining misha like that was really written very well!!!
Jay seems nice here.

Loved both the chapters!!!
So party time now and i guess abhiya will again meet in this party 😉
the ending of last chp left me wondering that who made that painting of those blue.
I have many questions hovering over my mind but will wait for u to disclose the mystery!!!
Update asap plz!!!
waiting for the next part!!!
thanks for the pm!!!
and once more gr8 work!!!

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

Yipeee me 1st🤪🥳Lovely Nafi dear...Pia get back reality...Poor Jeh😆...Dobriyal Party...& Pia get blue eye sketch...Is any conection with Abhay? continue dear🤗

thanks...hmmm lets see😉

Superb nafi

wow very excellent updates flora..wonderful..👏waiting for next update😃