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Posted: 12 years ago

THANKS FR LIKING AND COMENTING ON PREVIOUS PART...SORRY COULDNT REPLY TO ALL...I AM REALLY BUSY NOWDAYS...WILL TRY TO REPLY NEXT TIME!!! HERE GOES NEXT PART!!


PART-7



Pia was now standing in middle of main hall breathing heavily!!! Pia was looking upstairs all scared….she was literally shivering due to what she saw just now…

Her brain was not working at that time to thing any thing….pia began to walk backwards still looking upstairs!!

Suddenly the window of the main hall opened and the air blew pia curls to front!!!

Pia froze on the spot….she slowly turned around to see the window opened…

Pia walked to the window….and checked outside…..

Pia stammered- w..w.ho is th..ere??? who???

Suddenly she heard some footsteps coming towards her….pia's body became totally cold….her hairs stood on end….the footsteps were heard much near…..pia gulped hard!!

She turned quickly to see who was it….and froze on spot and screamed out loud…..!!!!!!!

Pia saw misha standing with shocked face….

Pia shouted- go away….dont come near me!!! Go…

Misha was totally stunned with pia behavior!!

Misha shocked- pia what happen???

Pia was sweating- pls spare me….gooo!!!

Misha was worried now….she went near pia but pia backed out and hit with window….she was hoping on that time that somehow she get vanished into the wall!!!

Misha holds pia shoulder and she jerks it….

Misha got more worried to see pia 's weird behavior and tries to hold her hand in which pia tries to escape from that place…..misha hold her hand tightly and pia began to cry begging to leave her!!!

Misha – whats wrong??? Stop fidgeting!!! Why u r scared of me!!!

Pia crying- don't kill me….leave me!!! Plzzz

Misha got suspicious and thought that pia must hv nightmare and is doing sleep walk around the house and must hv thought her as ghost!!

Misha hold pia face and tries to assure her- pia hey….its me!!! R u doing sleep walk?? Look hold me….i am misha!!

Pia was still struggling to get out from misha grip….but suddenly she noticed that she indeed could feel misha…while in upstairs misha was transparent …..

Pia was shocked…..she began hold misha and was crying!!!

Pia stammered- u r real….real!!! misha u r real!!

And she hugged stunned and shocked misha tightly and start sobbing!!

Misha was not getting what to do….why pia was crying!!! Pia was shaking with fright !!!

Misha pulled apart pia- whats wrong pia??? Why r u crying??

Pia sobbing- mi…misha…t..t..hat…

Misha was loosing patience- kya hua pia??? Tell me….

Pia indicating upstairs- waha….there….t…here s..o..meone!! some one is in my….r…ooomm!!! Bllloodd…

Misha was not understanding what pia was saying!!

Misha confused – what r u saying!! Upar kya he!!

Pia crying- blood misha….tum bi waha thi!!! U were….fuull in blood…

Misha irritated- what the hell yaar…koi bura sapna dekha kya!!!

Pia nodding her head in no- come with me….i will..show u!!

Misha trying to reason- pia u r not in sense…pia…

Pia drags misha to upstairs and both stands little far from pia room….

Pia pointing towards door- look inside…blood!!

Pia then point to floor where the blood like mass of body smashed…but to her surprise there was nothing not a single spot of blood!!

Pia was shocked but still she was not ready to accept so she dragged shocked misha near her room…

Pia nervously- see inside misha the room is full of blood, go and see!!

Misha was staring at pia as thinking pia has gone mad!!

Pia angrily- what r u looking at me!!! Go inside the room…

Misha walked in room and was stunned to see…

Pia thought misha saw blood and ran to her….

Pia frighten – did u see the blood….whats happening misha!!! Something is wrong in this house…

Misha still with shocked expression- yes yes there is blood….red, blue, white….

Pia irritated – stop it misha!! Don't joke….

Pia pulled misha aside and looked inside room herself and was shocked …..to see that everything is normal….there is no blood or anything!! Pia looked at mirror and found it hanging at its place …its not even broken!!

Pia put hand on her head- how is it possible!!!

Misha laughs….

Misha says- pia u must hv nightmare….so just relax and go to sleep!!

Pia frausted- no misha….its not!!! I am sure its not….infact its not a nightmare!!! I saw with my own eyes….something wrong with this house….

Misha interrupts- pia u just saw a nightmare….just relax and go to sleep!!

Pia nodding in no- no misha….i saw it !! I swear!! I don't know how everything got vanish….i really saw blood….

Pia remembered blood drops fell on her dress…..

Pia exclaimed- look misha…..(pointing towards her dress)

But surprisingly nothing was there….pia became more shocked…

Pia trying to assure misha- trust me….i…there was blood drops on my dress….

Misha trying to calm pia- come on pia….there is nothing!!! it must be ur imagination then….maybe u r reading horror stories more nowdays!!

Misha cuckled….

Pia trying to say something but misha interrupts her….

Misha- pia go to sleep…..its midnight!!! Come….

Pia – but….

Misha- no buts….go to sleep….

Misha pulls pia to her bed- good night!!

Pia gets under her cover still in shocked state!!

Pia was lost in thoughts…..misha goes from there….

Before going out misha looks at lost pia worriedly….

Pia came out from her thoughts when misha said "close ur eyes pia" saying this misha switch off the light…..

Pia looks at the mirror once again which is just in its place all normal…..and pia drifts of to sleep….

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Jeh sitting on the bench outside raichand masion in the big garden!!

Jeh was all sad…..

(flashback)

Chand came to his study room….and jeh was hiding there!! He didn't know chand would arrive so soon….

Jeh tried to escape from that room….and just as he tried to get away behind the table….mistakenly he hit with ink bottle which spilled in chand file which was open making a sound….jeh was horrified now!!

Chand quickly looked back shocking and found jeh there…he was more shocked!!!

Chand – jeh u???u r suppose ti come at midnight na…

Just then chand eyes fell the file which is now deep in ink….

Chand became angry- what is this??? Jeh!!!

Jeh stammered- dad..I..I didn't mean…

Chand interrupting- shut up jeh…..what r u doing here?? U know this file is sooo important….u!!! u r not suppose to be here right now….

Jeh afraid- dad I just wanted to surprise u all….

Chand shouts- shut up….look what the mess u hv done!!! U will be sleeping out of the house for the remaining days u will be staying in this house!!

Jeh worried- but dad I am sorry….

Chand payed no head- better u get out right now…I don't want to see ur face!!! Out!!

Jeh had no choice but to accept what chand said….haseena was standing at the door listening to all these….jeh looked at his mom with sad face!!

Haseena went to chand- come on chand…he came after so long!! U r behaving like this with ur son!!

Chand glaring- look what has he done!! This file was of our next project and he ruined it all….better u too shut ur mouth…u wont understand anything!! Now u may leave the room now…

Haseena gritting teeth left from there along with jeh….

(flashback ends)

Jeh to himself- the worst day of my life….

Suddenly some one put hand on his shoulder and he looked up and saw abhay standing….

Jeh got up- bhai!!

Abhay smiled- come eat something…

Jeh grumpily- no….

Abhay sternly- I know jeh why r u sad….but I told u not to go to that study room!!

Jeh angrily- I just wanted to surpruise…and where were u!! u could hv saved me from dad wrath….

Abhay sighs- I was busy on phone…business matter!!

Jeh- shut up!!! U r always busy with ur business…u hv no time fr ur brother who came after so many days!! Huh….

Jeh turned his face to other side….

Abhay smiles- fine I am sorry….now come in and eat something!!!

Jeh shocked- come in??? u mad?? Don't u know what….

Abhay interrupted- I know what dad said…but u can jump into my room from back side!!!

Abhay winked at jeh and jeh grinned- bhai u r the best!!!

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Early in morning in dobrail house….arnab seams to be happy!!!

Madhu asked him- what makes u so happy???

Arnab grins- chand agreed to come to our party!!

Madhu casually- that's great…and did u call ur all other business parners??

Arnab – yeap…..

Misha who over heard of the party- wait a min….party in our house dad??? When??

Arnab laughs- yes dear its tomorrow…..and I am planning something special too….

Misha and madhu in unison- what???

Arnab winks- wait and watch!!!

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Pia standing in the balcony which madhu opened recently after cleaning all dirt!!

Pia was lost in thoughts…last night she didn't had good sleep, light dark circles appeared beneath pia eyes ….pia remembered all incident happened after she came to this weird house!!

Pia to herself- whats all these!!! Its not right…..something is seriously wrong!!! But…goshhh….i will get mad if these things happen more with me!!! I cant tell to anyone….sab pagal samjhenge mujhe….now misha also must be thinking I hv gone mad!! But I saw it my own eyes…

Pia felt shiver thinking about last night incident!! She came out of her thoughts when she heard misha calling her…

Pia turned around- kya he!!!

Misha jumping- party time yepiiieee…..kal party he humre ghar!!!

Misha was continuously blabbering but pia paying no head as she was lost in deep thoughts….

Pia in her mind- I really need to find whats going on!!!

Misha clicked her fingers infront of pia- oye pia…kahan khoi ho!!! U r listening na what am I saying…..ok I need to call my friends to party!!!

Saying this misha ran from there leaving a worried pia….

Pia was about to leave from there when she found a page lying on floor…pia bend down and picked it up!!!!

It was sketch of dark blue eyes……!!!!!!!!!!!


PRECAP:- PARTY IN DOBRAIL HOUSE😉

P.S DONT FORGET TO PRESS LIKE AND COMENT...

flora212 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
PMS WILL BE SENT LATER
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yipeee me 1st🤪🥳Lovely Nafi dear...Pia get back reality...Poor Jeh😆...Dobriyal Party...& Pia get blue eye sketch...Is any conection with Abhay? continue dear🤗

Edited by Abhiya_eternal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this story mystery increases update to update
pia saw'blood all side in her room , poor pia when she said to misha she can't believe
waiting for party in dobriyal house
Continue soon
Edited by singhshailesh86 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally my pestering paid 😎😆...good one nafi..😃
bechari piya...u shld hv made her more scared😈..tht part was good..
i soo wanna knw who killed tht girl n if she was a look alike..
tumne jeh ko cry baby aur nautangi banadhiya😲🤣..i miss chand's neck dance re😭..u knw my chand luv na🤣...
witchy thnx fr d pm n d remainder in fb😳...jaldi continue kar n muje isi tharha pm aur fb mei yaad dilaakey rehna😛...precap sounds romantic..n exciting..hope i can except a by mistake wala kiss😉...n tht bilue eyes??..abhay?
Edited by sweety_crazed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh ho bechari pia kitna daar gayi thi...party time..yipee!! I know arnab piya aur abhay ki engagement announce karne wala hai😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg bechara jay!😆
poor pia!!😭dar gayi bechari!!
ab party mein kya hone wala hain?!!😳
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update dear!!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it alot.❤️
Pia ka reality check ho gaya.That Atma/look-alike of her really scared her alot. 😡 😆 I wonder if the bhatakti atma is trying to convey something to Pia about who killed her and all. 😉 😳 😳
And OMG My Poor Jeh. 😭 😆 🤣 Kya se Kya ho gaya Surprise dete-dete Baccha ghar se bahar ho gaya. 😲 🤣
And Party me Abhay-Piya engagement declare hogi I guess.That is the Special thing Arnab talking about na? 😉 😳 😳Along with that Misha-Jeh ki bhi jaldi sagai kara dena,Then Family complete.🤣 🤣
I hope Arnab Pia ki shadi Jeh se na kara de. 😡Uska koi bharosa nahi hai mujhe.😡 🤣 😆
Dark Blue-Eye Sketch, 😲 I hope Abhay is not that Killer. 😭 😉 😆
Eagerly waiting for the party...Pls Continue Soon This Time. 😳 😳
Thanks for the pm. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update.piya got scared a scary one indeed.da sketch? and party at dobriyal house wow.thanx a lot for pm and continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was awesome...the plot is filled with suspense n thriller:D
can u plz pm me from nxt updates:)

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