Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
awesome update. i have no words to describe how i felt.. pia courage is amazing.. abhiya is to good and there love is so strong..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Tanzie I don't know what to say? What are u? How u manage to give such thriller update each time? I am just out of words!!!!
This update was hell painful, but yet beautiful!!!!
I feel so bad for abhay, piya and that girl dami too. Poor soul, that ruthless men are😡
Really what a irony of fate, I just love those lines at last. The way u potrayed everything only a god blessed writer like u can do.
I loved each and every part of this update. so piya in save abhay mission now, and will see the real mafia world now. Precap seems interesting, plz update soon.
once more amazing, brillant, awesome, superb and beautiful update. U just made me cry, dear but loved it!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
awosome
superb
fabulous
hope pia finds abhay soon
continu soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Awesome update Tanzie.I loved it.Seriously wht an Irony?The killer machine Abhay's hand was shaking out of fear while holding a gun & Pia the angel was confident.They both changed themselves 4 each other.Their love was pure & divine & thts y they r epic in true sense.Not only Pia evn I felt proud 2 hear Abhay saved dami's womanhood.He protected her & freed her.I hate eric & abrahmin wht so ever.They all suck biig time.Oh Abhay is so helpless he'll has 2 join Mafia world unwillingly jst 4 his Pia's safety & Pia is putting her life at risk 4 Abhay.Abhay dont evn know Pia is pregnant wid his baby.Plz cont...

Love u🤗
I changed my name frm Cuteshrishti 2 SheDevil
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
fab tanziesorry for the late commentit was so beautifully pen down the feeling of abhay and piaon one hand, abhay not ready to pick the gun n pia fearessly did it for her lovehope abhay knows soon about the babythnxx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Really nice update...my heart crunching pain 4 Abhiya...😭🥺...really we r sooo safe in our parents guide,love & care...God give us sooo precious gem parents who take all responsiblity ,sacrifice 4 us...😊I really scared 4 them who miss tht sooo much...& life sooo cruel 4 them...really ur story give me tht imagine 4 their life...a distance may b we hate them but not feel their pain...if anybody kill a human really hate in heart no forgive show tht heartless people...but we don't think tht may b we creat them tht situation...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
wow tanize really well desirbed part yar
loved the way abhiya feelings u pour in this updtae
hope soon abhiya came face to face
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Fate makes a joke out of us sometimes, cruel joke.
But every night has to turn into a day.
Another brilliant update.
Have to agree with Mandy, you have become great at writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
You know when a rubber band is stretched much beyond it's capacity, it snaps? That is what has happened with this update. Tanzie, you've made me emotional and teary-eyed so many times with this SS, or I should say the newly promoted mini FF, but I don't know what this update had that I just burst into tears, like the proper 'phoot phoot kar rona' :'(
I think I'll have to come back and edit this tomorrow when I find the right words.

Congrats on Book 2, BTW (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Darling, do you have any idea how much it touched my heart ?? Sigh..i am not good at expressing. I really cant describe how I felt after reading the last two chapters. You did bring tears in my eyes and I literally mean it. All the time the name IF crossed my mind while I was absent, the first thing I used to miss is reading your ffs. I completed reading all the pending chapters 3-4 days ago but I couldnt comment immediately. I was like 'what did I just read !' I had never thought that love story of a killing machine can be this touching.. A big hug to you tanzie🤗

Its sad yet true that women like dami suffer so much..they cant even file complaint against the rapist..:'(
What to say about abhay and piya ? I wont talk much because I cant describe as beautiful as you did. I can feel their pain.. My heart just went out for abhay. How they were torturing him :'(
It was such a heart wrenching update :'(:'(

I am loving this piya. She became a tigress for her love. And you wrote it beautifully..

Irony of fate: Destiny mocking them. Playing dirty games because the killer has thrown his gun away but the angel has picked it up. Because she has to set the killer free for her soul… what an irony fate plays..!!

My most fav line.. Indeed fate plays such irony.!

Needless to mention, it was the best update of this ss according to me. I wont mind reading it again and again even if it will make me cry.

Love you unlimited for writing this. Actually thank you :)

Congratulations for your book-2 though I am not surprised 😆

And wow..you are a sizzler now. Congrats ! Even I became a dazzler recently..i never thought I would be one keeping in mind my activity 😆 you are sizzling and I am dazzling 🤣

Love you tons and tons 🤗

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