Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 60

Originally posted by: didlr

this was more than wonderful ...n alas! Its over

I'm glad i came across this story. The entire plot,charaters,writing ...everything about this story was truely amazing.

I liked the ending, the way u left it fr the readers to decide fr themselves abt athena and her parents.

In all it was a great experience, to read this. Hope u'll get it published some tym soon:)

Ps- plz do write more n probably on some similar concept

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

what a beautiful ending to this ff.

i read the last two parts together. thanks so much megha and thanks a lot for always being my loyal reader 🤗

abhay and pia's suffered a lot of hardships before they could actually find peace in their lives.it was ironical that abhay was never caught for the murders he had committed while he was an assasin but was forced to live in jail on a false charge. it must have been too traumatizing that the strong abhay actually lost his mental balance for sometime. how did pia survived in such conditions...they were new to the place with nobody to help them when she was pregnant. those 3 months would have been the hardest part in abhay-pia's life coz they couldn't meet each other which would have given both of them strength.

the entire scene of abhay seeing athena for the first time was lovely.it was written so well.it was like as if i am watching some real scene and not reading.his emotions came out in form of tears when he saw her...no words to describe how awsum it was.

i am glad that abhay pia finally conquered all the struggle and got a life they both wanted for themselves and their kids.

what a possessive father abhay was.he beat up athena's bf???no wonder no guy ever approached her after that but that's how father's are. thanks so much Megha. yes Abhay and Piya went through hell and though my initial plan was always to end them both somehow seeing their hardship and impossible lovestory I couldnt kill them and I wanted to see them happy. their pain was somehow mine.. the way i connected to their story I just couldnt kill them.

athena seems to have inherited her mother's detective skills. she is too smart to put together all the things in such a short span of time. initially she was kind of angry on her parents which i didn't like but i guess that's was initial shock she got so it was kind of an obvious reaction but i am glad that she was able to see the love abhay and pia have showered over her for years .

the scene where arnab is shown to kept a pic of madhu and pia on his desk was surprising.though he has mellowed down i didn't expected him to accept pia but it's good to see he does have some regret in his heart at the way he has been with the both of them. if nly he could have done things differently but can't blame him completely. she is smart and she got both of Abhay and Piyas good skills. yes her reaction would be normal because she will think from a daughters pov whos parents lied about her entire life so its kinda normal but i wanted her to understand no drama.so thats how i wrote it.

the last part was wonderful and the best part was abhay's speech. i am hapy to see them as a normal couple with pia worrying over his bp. abhay was to scared with the mere thought of athena hating him . pia calmed him down and loved how he was teasing her...they truly had an amazing love story with so much trials and tribulations but in the end a happily ever after. thanks so much. in so many years Abhay learnt to be a bit outspoken and yes they deserved some happiness and their children are extrmly important to them. thats all they both got.

loved to see that both of their kids put in their efforts to make it memorable for them. abhay's speech summed up everything about their life and no wonder athena too accepted it.the last scene was wonderful. both abhay and pia sitting together and decided to confront everything together just like always.

i am sure athena would understand and accept abhay and pia when they will talk about the past as pia had said it.

it was a brilliant piece of writing tanzie.one of my most fav ff on if and among all of your's too.

it was sheer brilliance and a dark love story in all aspects.i so loved reading it and i am so gonna miss it.

you have done a fab job in presenting and keeping us connected with the story.thanks tanzie for such an amazing story.

p.s. this is my longest comment ever i think tanzie . thanks a lot Megha. it was my fav too and I guess all of you know how much i loved it 😳 i will miss it too i wanted to give an happy ending but not obvious kind of open ended so i kept it this way. im glad u liked it Megha and thanks a lot for being a part of it 😊