Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: flora212

tanzie r u updating today???


Nope, not before wednesday. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: meerubzara

awosome

superb
fabulous
hope pia finds abhay soon
continu soon
thanks for pm


Thank you. Pia will but it wont be their reunion... the reunion will be unexpected.

Originally posted by: SheDevil

Awesome update Tanzie.I loved it.Seriously wht an Irony?The killer machine Abhay's hand was shaking out of fear while holding a gun & Pia the angel was confident.They both changed themselves 4 each other.Their love was pure & divine & thts y they r epic in true sense.Not only Pia evn I felt proud 2 hear Abhay saved dami's womanhood.He protected her & freed her.I hate eric & abrahmin wht so ever.They all suck biig time.Oh Abhay is so helpless he'll has 2 join Mafia world unwillingly jst 4 his Pia's safety & Pia is putting her life at risk 4 Abhay.Abhay dont evn know Pia is pregnant wid his baby.Plz cont...

Love u🤗
I changed my name frm Cuteshrishti 2 SheDevil


Thank you 😳 The orny of fate was to show doesnt matter how far destiny brought them, they love each other dearly and intensely. There are plenty of people like Eric and Abraham in real life and you know it
I know you changed your user name 😛 even before you told me your writing style and font took 2 mins for me to recognize 😆
🤗


I did 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Thnks 4 pm😊 awesom chapy!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: sweet_neetu

fab tanziesorry for the late commentit was so beautifully pen down the feeling of abhay and piaon one hand, abhay not ready to pick the gun n pia fearessly did it for her lovehope abhay knows soon about the babythnxx for pm


Thanks dear. no problem. Im happy you got time to comment 😊 It was to show how people can change each other. it will take some time.

Originally posted by: koli97

Really nice update...my heart crunching pain 4 Abhiya...😭🥺...really we r sooo safe in our parents guide,love & care...God give us sooo precious gem parents who take all responsiblity ,sacrifice 4 us...😊I really scared 4 them who miss tht sooo much...& life sooo cruel 4 them...really ur story give me tht imagine 4 their life...a distance may b we hate them but not feel their pain...if anybody kill a human really hate in heart no forgive show tht heartless people...but we don't think tht may b we creat them tht situation...


Thank you. I know these days updates are too sad. it will go for a while and then I will make everything right. Life is indeed cruel in real life. and there are lots of shade in every human being. whoever it is doesnt matter, there is goodness hidden within and some1 is needed to bring it out. here, Pia is the person who brought that out for Abhay.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: bellaaa

wow tanize really well desirbed part yar
loved the way abhiya feelings u pour in this updtae
hope soon abhiya came face to face
cont soon


Thanks Beenish. Abhiya will come face to face but the situation will be unexpected.

Originally posted by: FeistySoul

Fate makes a joke out of us sometimes, cruel joke.
But every night has to turn into a day.
Another brilliant update.
Have to agree with Mandy, you have become great at writing.


Hey Nidha. Nice name. I liked your name user name too 😳
Thanks a lot, trust me without you people's inspiration it would never be possible 😳 irony of fate was to show doesnt matter what destiny does to them, it cant remove their feelings from heart. and Mandy always floors me with her praises.. 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy

You know when a rubber band is stretched much beyond it's capacity, it snaps? That is what has happened with this update. Tanzie, you've made me emotional and teary-eyed so many times with this SS, or I should say the newly promoted mini FF, but I don't know what this update had that I just burst into tears, like the proper 'phoot phoot kar rona' :'(

I think I'll have to come back and edit this tomorrow when I find the right words.

Congrats on Book 2, BTW (:


Awww... im so sorry for making you cry. ... come here... a big hug 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
I know you are very emotional and dont know how you will read the upcoming chapters... i have to be careful
Dont be sad...things will be alright soon 🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Chinky-

Darling, do you have any idea how much it touched my heart ?? Sigh..i am not good at expressing. I really cant describe how I felt after reading the last two chapters. You did bring tears in my eyes and I literally mean it. All the time the name IF crossed my mind while I was absent, the first thing I used to miss is reading your ffs. I completed reading all the pending chapters 3-4 days ago but I couldnt comment immediately. I was like 'what did I just read !' I had never thought that love story of a killing machine can be this touching.. A big hug to you tanzie🤗 thanks so much dear. i Missed you too. 🤗 I was wondering you mus be busy but you will jump in any day 😆 thanks a lot. I tried my level best to make this story realistic because I always strongly believed, there's some goodness hidden between everyone but in some cases, someone is needed to bring that out and Pia did the job for Abhay.

Its sad yet true that women like dami suffer so much..they cant even file complaint against the rapist..:'(
What to say about abhay and piya ? I wont talk much because I cant describe as beautiful as you did. I can feel their pain.. My heart just went out for abhay. How they were torturing him :'(
It was such a heart wrenching update :'(:'( thousands of people like Dami survives in real world and some end up being dead. not all even come out alive from there as they wont find Abhay there Abhay's action showed he was always somewhat good but offcourse he never paid any attention to that because he never thought of coming out. he had no reason since he believed he has drown himself into darkness until his light Pia came into his life.

I am loving this piya. She became a tigress for her love. And you wrote it beautifully..

Irony of fate: Destiny mocking them. Playing dirty games because the killer has thrown his gun away but the angel has picked it up. Because she has to set the killer free for her soul' what an irony fate plays..!!

My most fav line.. Indeed fate plays such irony.! thanks a lot 😳

Needless to mention, it was the best update of this ss according to me. I wont mind reading it again and again even if it will make me cry.

Love you unlimited for writing this. Actually thank you :)

Congratulations for your book-2 though I am not surprised 😆 I will finish this in Book 2.. it was supposed to be a SS 😆

And wow..you are a sizzler now. Congrats ! Even I became a dazzler recently..i never thought I would be one keeping in mind my activity 😆 you are sizzling and I am dazzling 🤣 Yes yes Im sizzling and you are dazzling 😎 🤣

Love you tons and tons 🤗 Love you loads tooo 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow tanzie...mind blowing!!! eid mubarak to u too.. .ah i am loving the way u r moving!!! but i felt crying fr bixie!!! poor her😭( wait bixie ladki thi na😕😆) that bloody b****ered!!! arrrggghh...oh abhay saying to pia that he is dead was heartwreaching!!! u hv really well described the emotions fr both abhay and pia... and chand..ah he can deny but i guess he stiill has soft corner fr pia!!! now waiting fr the real conversation of chand and pia... and ofcourse waiting fr interesting precape!!! update sooonnn 🤣
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