Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 5

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read
thanks for the pm

Tanzie like always outstanding update

fab update.the title was so apt 4 d chapter.it was indeed courageous f pia to hold dat women on gunpoint even though she was shaking wid fear & abhay he jus couldn't hold d gun in his hand.abhay is repenting on all d things dat he has inflicted upon his victims,dat part was heart renderin. it was outstanding bt d precap sounds scary.m sure d guy who held her hand would recognise her. Mre troubles ahead 4 pia in her search mission.hope sum1 would help her.

fantastic update!!
liked i very much. you protrayed the reality n darkness of mafia world brilliantly.
feeling bad for pia n even more bad for abhay..he has to go back to that dark life.
waiting for chand's reaction when he will come face to face with pia

very nice dear ,just loved it ,thanks for pm

i like it very much ,waiting for next ,thanks for pm

o! tanzi u r rite irony of fate our karma come bck to us... i knw both r suffering badly and most important thing i like in ur ff is this pia who show true color of women in luv and she can go any extent to protect her love, i love d tigress in dis angel who pick d gun thrown by her assiassn lover to protect him and i appericiate abhay 4 not let himself to engulf by darkness he is nt able to kill any inocent. u knw wat mujhe updt padhne se phele daar lag raha tha ki aab kya hoga bt nw me happy
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What an Update Tanzie!!! Which adjective i shud use? I m practically at a loss 4 words!!

Every emotion,every situation was described beyond perfection! 👏 I cud feel d helplessness nd pain of Abhay 😭 i mean every thing was surreal!When they showed him d video of crying piya with her dog,her loneliness her pain was eating his inner soul.

As title said it so well,what an irony! While Abhay was mentally apologising 2 piya 4 not being able 2 fulfill his promise nd esp his own wish of having a family wid her,Piya was fighting like a tigress 4 him n their baby!!!
Loved d femme fatale avtar of Piya,she has become fearless 4 abhay while abhay which means fearless is being surrounded by fears!
Last part,i just loovvveeddd it!
Piya feeling proud of being mother of Abhay's child.well this will inc her dedication,desperation nd determination 2 bring Abhay bak frm dat world of living deads!

Precap has just increased my desperation 4 d next update.so d irony n bad fate of abhiya continues as everyone will know abt her cep Abhay!
Hope she remains safe along wid d baby!