Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26)

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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ChelseaForEver

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Me first 🥳 🥳

Tanzie when u were replying to everyone in Book1, it was morning n iw as continuously refreshing the page n then later in this thread Tanzie reserved n i was waiting for it 😃 Sorry Mandy 😆 U n Indu r habitual to be the first ones unlike me 😛 Dusro ko bhi chance do nah 😉

@ The update -

What do i even say !! Am speechless ... Am really proud that i started reading this FF even if i was late ... Tanzie i love u ... If ever Abhay & Pia portrayed humans, i would want this mini FF to be story line i mean it 👏 👏 👏 The update was definitely a sad one and a chill ran through my spine thats y i didnt unres my comment jus after reading it because i jus couldn't write .. I seriously i felt terrible n my heart was crumbling as i was reading n that could happen only because u penned it down beautifully Tanzie ... Pia has now become a tigress and am loving it ... I really really feel for both Abhay & Pia ... Fate plays dirty games 😡 And poor Dami 😭 She couldn't even file a complaint Donno whem men will stop thinking of women as toys 😡

I repeat, the update did make me sad but i loveddd it as it was yet another masterpiece from u 😃

Take care Tanz 🤗

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Pavi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😡 Looks like I have become greedy 😈 when it comes to having the first res in ur FFs Tanzie 😆 esp this one, this being my fav in the forum 😳

Now even after penning down such an amazing piece of update u still feel my writing style is better, well I honestly dont know what I can tell u 😛 There is no way I can even dream to write something like this thats's brutally realistic n at that same time so painful 😭 Gosh u make me cry all the time 😡 But I love ya for that 🤗 Doubt if any other writer in this forum can ever write anything that can remotely suprpass this magnificent piece of writing ⭐️ I dont care if u again say I am exaggerating 😛 but I simply loved this update to the core n well I cant even say how much. I liked it more than any update of this FF ever(Yep it beats even the passionate one by miles 😊) It takes a lot to pull off something thats realistic n barbaric but u make it seem effortless each time 👏 The way u emphasise on the minutest of minute details is commendable 👏

So Pia in her femme fatale avatar 😃 So loving this action oriented Pia I tell ya 😉 Wish Abhay could see his girl now 😆

Pia decking up as a cheap call girl was portrayed realistically. Loved the way u emphasised on the way she chose to mask herself in tacky attires. Loved this bold Pia who fearlessly held the woman at gun point whereas Abhay found it hard to do it despite the fact that he had done numerous times in the past. Pia on the other hand has become a tigress ro save Abhay n her unborn whereas Abhay now finds it difficult to go back to his dark past as Pia showed him the light 😳 Brilliantly portrayed. U had mentioned earlier on na that Misha spotting Abhiya will play an important role here? Waiting for that twist actually 😃

Post her encounter with Dami Pia got to know that Abhay never lost a part of humanity though he had been a ruthless assassin 😃 I hope this eradicates her insecurities regarding Abhay's love for her

It was ironic that Abhay thinks their dream of having grand children will never turn out to be true n he wished Pia could be the mother of his kids when she is already carrying his child

Coming to the last bit, it was beautiful ⭐️

Irony of fate: Destiny mocking them. Playing dirty games because the killer has thrown his gun away but the angel has picked it up. Because she has to set the killer free for her soul… what an irony fate plays..!!

It was so amazing. Gosh, did u pen it down? 😲 It was brilliant 👏

SUPERB UPDATE! 👏👏👏👏👏👏

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

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WOW...THAT WAS FABOLUS! SO NOW PIA IS ON SAVING MISSION... WELL SO SAD FR ABHAY!! HE EVEN DOESNT KNOW THAT PIA IS GOTNG TO BE MOTHER OF HIS CHILD! ABHAY ALWAYS HAD HUMANITY... AND I GUESS PIA IS NOW MORE DETERMINE TO BRING OUT ABHAY FROM THAT DARK WORLD ! NOW EAGER TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN IN NEXT CHAPPY??? WILL PIA MEET CHAND?? UPDATE SOON...

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Disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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what a brilliant update Tanzie. the way pia and abhay are both fighting fate as well as the world to make sure that the other one is safe, is really heart-wrenching.

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Tanzie , Wat an brilliant piece of upd yaar , simply amazing dear 👏

This ff Is my fav ff seriously and I m a fan of your writings , you show the feelings of each and every character soo soo well Serously 😃

The update was thrilling as well as painful

Seeing piya I felt like woah the tigress is awaken . Serously love this determined and bold piya , the way you showed her getting dressed in tacky wears and heliding dami at gun point was awesome . A preganant girl managing all alone in a big city roaming in cheap bars and dangerous places to find her love ,seriously I salute her for this . Abhay on other hand is sooo changed and I love this change , felt reall bad for him and wat a fate , the killer who used trap people in the room is now trapped in the same room and the way he couldn't shoot anyone was shown awesomely , the way you described how abhiya missed each other was very beautful tanzie 👏

And really feel bad for dami , but unfortunately this is reality of world

And the last line you wrote , was soo beautiful true Serously I kept reading tat line agai and again

Please conti soon tanzie 😃

Edited by Mohit-deewani - 13 years ago

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zara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

congo on book 2 ... tanzi

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621511

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Congratulations dear ...on book two

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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chapter updated page 4 🤗

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Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Congo for book 2 *hugs*so pia on mission aww for abhay she will go to that danger world searching for him...fab update...tanzie
P.s how r u long time no talk ...miss u

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