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Divya6696

@Divya6696

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

another beautiful update Indu.. *claps* you described everything brilliantly.. loved all of it.. but the best part was Abhiya convo.. I know he will get her back to him.. but the question is when and how..??
argh that Nikhil.. :@ eagerly waiting for the next chapter.. update soon..! :))

Oh and wait.. I had a doubt.. why do you think that long updates are boring..?? I mean.. we readers are waiting for you to update and long ones are cherries on the cake..! just like a treat..!! update soon.. :))

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

nice update.likd the way u describd feelings of abhay.hope abhay get pia soon.nikhil,um,he is a bad bad guy.lol.continue soon.

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

fab update.so i suppose chand forced abhay 2 take blame 4 sum murder dn by nikhil & pia saved him, bt why is she in asylum?nikhil was pathetic,disgusting guy vid not even an ounce f humanity,making fun f sum1's pain. Abhay iz indeed a nyc guy , i do hope he gives nikhil a good reply later on. Thanx 4 pm

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

i am looking 4ward to knw wat mysterious thing result in dis misery of poor couple... where is haseena n hw pia proof herself mental... wat dis moron nikhil did, hope get pay 4 his sin... i apperitiate anjali to support and motivate abhay to think abt himself but i could not blame chand 4 wat he did as its not easy 4 parents to chose rite or wrong when it come to their heir and who chose rite are rare... natural human instinct...

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kanya007k

@kanya007k

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Flashback was good it seems like they are madly in love
what happened between them?why she is in asylum?
it was nice update & not boring at all
update soon

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

wahooo my heart cluching in pain,Abhay pain😭I remind tht pain which I feel in pkyek our Abhay pain😭Chand 😡is sooo selfish...tht Nikhil🤢...hope Abhiya together again😭plzz continue asap...thanx 4 pm me😊

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zara

@meerubzara

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

amazing update

every pain & emotion is very beautifully described

nikhil is really very bad & dangerous boy i just hate him

hope abhay get pia soon

eagarly w8ng for next update

thanks for pm

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653787

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Awesome update 👏 It was not boring at all. So Aarti is Nikhil's mom as written in the cs and so that means Abhay was protecting Nikhil? Maybe there was some relation that forced Abhay to make these sacrifices. I feel really bad for Abhay and you describe his pain beautifully. I loved the Abhiya part and Piya's trust for Abhay. I think she took the blame and somehow landed in the asylum 😔 Oh I so hate Nikhil already 😡 he sounds really dangerous. Cont asap:)

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vampire123

@vampire123

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

I enjoy very much while reading ur ff But this chapter is very long Make little chapter so anyone can read easily

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

indu mind blowing update...just loved the abhay and chand conversation...she is in asylum but why did she do to save abhay?...loved the way piya trusted abhay and held her strong and didnt believed what abhay do? but what was happened wated to know soon...nikil seems really evil but why abhay is helpless...sweet abhiya scene when abhay remembered the past of piya and his...cont soon

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