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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: koli97
wahooo my heart cluching in pain,Abhay pain😭I remind tht pain which I feel in pkyek our Abhay pain😭Chand 😡is sooo selfish...tht Nikhil🤢...hope Abhiya together again😭plzz continue asap...thanx 4 pm me😊

aww..dont cry dear..😊yes dear abhay is in too much pain..yes dear..will continue soon..you'r welcome...😊

Originally posted by: meerubzara
amazing update
every pain & emotion is very beautifully described thanks a lot meeru 😳
nikhil is really very bad & dangerous boy i just hate him yes dear nikhil is total negative..
hope abhay get pia soon lets see...
eagarly w8ng for next update will update asap..
thanks for pm welcome..😊

Originally posted by: .tanu.
Awesome update 👏 It was not boring at all. thanks tanu..am happy that you liked it...😳 So Aarti is Nikhil's mom as written in the cs and so that means Abhay was protecting Nikhil? yes!! Maybe there was some relation that forced Abhay to make these sacrifices. I feel really bad for Abhay and you describe his pain beautifully. thank you.😊 I loved the Abhiya part and Piya's trust for Abhay. glad you liked that part dear.😊 yes pia has unbounding love n trust on abhay..
I think she took the blame and somehow landed in the asylum 😔 Oh I so hate Nikhil already 😡 he sounds really dangerous. yep..he is..! Cont asap:)

will update soon..😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Great upd Indu , sorry for short comment 😳 but loved it from core , u great writer 👏

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

@lost_in_love: Awesum n superb SS!!!!😊

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

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I know indu it has been ages since u updated but my inbox was full of 200 pm's, so it was hard to find this one, atlast i found it now, i will read and comment by toni8, really sorry dear.
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Indu my dear this is awesome dear!!! How could u call it crap, i just loved it. The best thing about ur writing is that you are too good with human raw emotions, your words explain them clearly and makes one go through them, that is what i love about your writings most!!!
The first starting scene was so really described very well, i guess Arti is Nikhil's mother or is it so?? Well i still confused why abhay hates her, will wait for u to solve this soon. Abhay's pain, anguish was described really wonderfully dear, hats off to to for that!!!
Coming to the next part, i felt so sad for both abhiya, it was heart wrenching seeing a desparate piya pleading to abhay to fight for himself but alas abhay can't listen to her obviously he have his own reasons but that scene made me cry. 😭
who is this anjali now?? She have some imp link to all this mishaps i guess.
chand and abhay part was written very well. Chand is selfish kinda person here i guess. Nikil is his son. Abhay sacrificed so much and now piya did the same and landes herself in a asylum, feeling really bad for abhiya.
I hate this guy Nikhil, instead of being grateful to Abhay, he was behaving so selfishly with Abhay arghh😡
Abhiya scene at last was the best part of the update i would say, i hope abhay really can keep is promise i think he will.
Once more just fab job dear, brillian update!!! Plz update next part soon and again really sorry for commenting so late!!!
Thanks for the pm!!!

Edited by Rmuk - 12 years ago