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Posted: 13 years ago
just loved it😳 u have written it beautifully😛
i have sent u a buddy request so do pm me😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
poor abhay bearing alot yar
he love piya and piya too
but than what happened that piya away form abhay
loved the office scene and sincerity of abhiya
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow wow simply amazing update indu. I just loved the way u showed all the emotions of abhay. His sweet little moments with piya was so dreamy, beautiful memories of past. I must say u simply are a amazing writter yaar. Hmmm I feel so bad for abhay o god he suffered so much yaar. I wonder what happened with piya and why she don't want to talk with abhay. Abhay loves piya a lot but what happened in past?? I know all these will be answered as the story will move forward so I better wait for ur future updates. Sorry for small comment but u know na I am busy coz of studies, so hope u pardon me for that, after exam will give big comments for sure. Once more just brilliant job yaar, update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vmpy

wow an amazing update and a v emotional one.u described abhay feelings in a v heart touching way.great work nd keep it up.thanx a lot for da pm.continue soon.

thanks dear..glad you liked it..😳.u'r welcome dear...yep..will try to update soon...😊

Originally posted by: rosamale

amazing as always👏what happened to Abhay and Piya? they both are suffering alot😭 update fast plshhh😊

thanks dear...😳you will know that soon...ya both are going through immense pain...yes dear will try to update asap!! 😊

thanks sofia..😊

thanks a lot dear..😳

Originally posted by: spn-abhay

Awesum update.lovd the flashbacks.they were cute.it was quite mysterious too.

thanks for liking dear...glad you enjoyed it...😳

Originally posted by: kanya007k

Beautiful update thanks dear..😊
what happened between abhiya? that you will know in the coming updates...
continue soon sorry i can't send you a buddy req. Because my a/c has not validated yet

its ok dear,i had send a buddy request,accept it...yes will try to update asap...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
QUOTE=MS-meghasharma]amazing update thanks megha...😳
both love each other like crazy...wonder what lead to this. you will know that in the coming chapters...
thanks for pm u'r welcome...😊

Originally posted by: .tanu.

Nice update. thanks tanu...😊Abhay is in so much pain... yes he is suffering a lot ...I wonder what happened in his life. So there is some woman who's son he is protecting and he looks quite irritated by her. you will know soon who is the person ...And then Abhay's mom has also left him? hmm..yes dear...It's very mysterious and that is what I love about this ff. I liked Abhay's flashbacks of Piya. Cont soon:) thanks a ton for liking dear...😳 yep will try to update asap...😊


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sukugeny

jst awesome updte induu...love u thanks a ton dear...🤗
jst loved all emotions of abhiya..bt actually hua kya hai..poor abhiya...suffering a lot...
to whom abhay is protecting...i guess..n y yr..his dilog.neithr can i live nor...aww my abhay..y pia is leaving him.. you will get to know everything soon...😊

eagrly waiting fr nxt update.

yep will b updating today!!

Originally posted by: Aish-Naksh

amazing update,.i love ur writing style.. thanks a lot dear... 😳keep it up...n continue soon asap..thanks 4 pm..

u'r welcome..will update soon...😊

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Nice one Indu, I am waiting for your next update. thanks harini..😊 if i am not wrong this is the first time you are commenting...is it? 😊By the way, is Abhay's mom - Haseena dead?

no haseena isn't dead ...you will get to know everything soon...😊and thanks a lot for reading...😳

Originally posted by: meerubzara

lovely update thanks dear...😳continu son thanks for pm

u'r welcome..will update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

nice update Indu thanks dear.😳who was Abhay talking on d phone ? n who was that in d end ?

you will know everything in the next update...😊

Originally posted by: .rumki.

nice update thanks rumki..😊
whom Abhay was talking in the phone😕?...poor Abhay suffering so much...liked flash back part👏...glad you enjoyed it dear😳...wondering what happened between Abhiya😕

you will get all your answers in the next update...😊

Originally posted by: ilove99

who is the nw one? you will know soon...😊 abhiya seemed amazing!

thanks meera...glad you enjoyed it...😛

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

nice updte indu... thanks dear...😊

sorry i late comment but u knw wat i am excited to read dis one... its alright. dear..glad to know that you are enjoying this story...😊

wonder wat actully happen to haseena and y pia and abhay r in so much pain and abhay's agony and past memory left me wid tears aww...am sorry for making you cry dear...the reason u will know in the next update...😊

who is dat female calling abhay and i think abhay was talking to chand on phone abut nikhil... hmm...lets see...😉

thanks 4 pm and dis beautifull update...

you'r most welcome dear...and thanks for such a big comment...🤗
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Originally posted by: SheDevil

Awesome update indu thanks a lot shrish...😳

So much of suspense glad you'r enjoying it...😊
Oh I feel bad 4 Abhay.Wht exactly happened wid him? you will know soon...
Where is Pia & why she dont wnt 2 talk 2 Abhay?
plz cont.. will b updating today...😊


Originally posted by: CrazyFanSuku

Just awe-some dear 👍🏼 thanks a ton dear...😳
I am happy you start one more abhiya ss ya,even i love to write on abhiya...😳
thanks for pm you'r welcome...😊


Originally posted by: shria

just loved it😳 u have written it beautifully😛 aww...thanks a ton shria. glad you liked it...😳
i have sent u a buddy request so do pm me😳 yep..i have accepted it,so no worries...will definitely pm you...😛

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Originally posted by: bellaaa

lovely update thanks beenish....😳
poor abhay bearing alot yar ya..
he love piya and piya too
but than what happened that piya away form abhay you will know that in the next chapter...
loved the office scene and sincerity of abhiya glad you enjoyed it dear...😳
cont soon yep,will update today...😊


Originally posted by: Rmuk

Wow wow simply amazing update indu. I just loved the way u showed all the emotions of abhay. His sweet little moments with piya was so dreamy, beautiful memories of past. I must say u simply are a amazing writter yaar. aww...romi thanks a ton dear... 🤗you always flatter me with your sweet comments...but am happy that you loved it...😳Hmmm I feel so bad for abhay o god he suffered so much yaar. I wonder what happened with piya and why she don't want to talk with abhay. Abhay loves piya a lot but what happened in past?? I know all these will be answered as the story will move forward so I better wait for ur future updates. you wont have to wait much longer,u will get ur answers soon... 😊Sorry for small comment but u know na I am busy coz of studies, so hope u pardon me for that, after exam will give big comments for sure. its okk...no worries dear. i completely understand..afterall studies come first...😊 Once more just brilliant job yaar, update soon.

thanks again dear...will update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy1024

That was such a beautiful update Indu 👏 thanks mansa... 😳 Poor Abhay, what had happened in the past that has left such an emotional scar on him? 😭 Poor Pia 😭 She loves him but still she cannot profess her love and she seems to be locked up in an asylum? 😭 In the beginning was Abhay talking to his dad? Seems like it. I suppose he cheated on Abhay's mom n then deserted her. hmm...you guessed it almost right...😲 you'r intelligent...😉But y did she leave Abhay? Didn she realise that he would be shattered? you will know everything soon dear...just wait for few more updates and everything will b cleared...

Indu I cant bear to see Abhay in so much pain 😭 Looks like he had already lost everything n now Pia too? Please dont let Pia leave him please 😭 hmm...sorry i cant promise anything right now dear...you will have to wait...lets see what happens...

Abhiya memory was so beautiful 😳 thanks dear...glad you liked it..😳 but when I think of the present 🥺 Gosh Abhay is inflicting so much of pain on himself. I wish u would have some mercy on him I am really curious to know what happened in the past 😭
Beautifully written Indu 👏 U know how to portray the raw emotions of a character so beautifully 👏 aww..thanks mansa...you always flatter me with your comments...😳 but thanks again for this lovely comment...🤗



Originally posted by: FeistySoul

Piya lies locked in an asylum but more so in her own agony!Poor thing.
Abhay is on the brink of insanity himself.
Raj? Hmmm, mysterious!
Engaging first update Indu! thanks a ton nidha...🤗 i always enjoy reading your comments...😳
Kudos!
Love
Nidha.


Originally posted by: vmpy

Sorry for being so late in commenting on such a fabolous update.keep it up.nd add me to ur pm list.

its alright dear...thank you dear...😊yep have added you already!! 😊
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