An AbhiyaSS: What lies beneath30thsept page-21updt - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Amazing indu!!!!
I hope u are fine now, good to see u back, missed u dear, be perfectly fine soon ok.
Now coming to the update just fab!!!! thanks romi dear...😳
U described abhay's pain very well, each and every emotion he felt was written brilliantly.
Piya loves abhay still. ya...!!
poor abhiya.
Raj sounds a good person here, I liked him. ya..he is a gem...
waiting to know what happened in real between abhiya.
once again awesome update and do take care of urself. No need to stress. Update whenever u can ok.
thanks dear...and sorry dear, i missed ur comment last time so replying it now...
Thanks for the pm.

u'r welcome...😊

Originally posted by: meerubzara

awosome story thanks dear..😳

nice update...
plz pm me when u update ofcourse i will...😊


Originally posted by: piggi_Babes

Hey wonderful yaaar go for it... plzzz continuee... its amzing indu thanks dear...may i know your name dear?😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remona

Hey...lovely ff... thanks remona..😊
I loved reading ur ff... thanks for reading dear...😳
Can u please pm me... ofcourse will pm you..😊
Pm me...


Originally posted by: urmita

good to see u back indu... thanks dear.

hope u r alright now... thanks,yep.am fine now..😊
nice update...
interesting story... thanks urmita...😳
continue soon... ya will update soon...


Originally posted by: --Rose--

Omg:-D Wowww its Awesome dear:-) and very interesting:-) loved it:-):-)

thanks dear...glad you enjoyed it...😳

thanks dear...😊

Originally posted by: pkyekrox

Nice beginning!! Upd8 soon!! thanks gauri...😊
-Gauri

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Posted: 13 years ago

Indu, honestly I am tired of ur rants 😛 Tell me one thing - is it habitual for u to find ur amazing updates crappy or boring? 😡 For me this was anything but boring U r turning out to be such a fine writer n ur updates just keep getting better n better n I really wonder how on earth will I ever be able to match ur writing skills? Doing joint updates with a fab writer like u gives me jitters coz no matter what u say, there's no way I shall ever be able to portray the raw human emotions like u even 10% as beautifully as u do

Coming to the update it was really beautifully portrayed 👏 U always keep the air suspense hanging n unfold the story at the right moments n tats a feat in itself in terms of story telling which will keep the readers glued n guessing as to what might have happened after all 👏 The opening convo b/w Abhay n Aarti was very well written. I am guessing Aarti is Nikhil's mom n she is feeling bad for what Abhay is going through bcoz of her son. No wonder she envies Abhay's mom for having a gem like him for a son Abhay seems to hate Aarti but I want to know how Aarti is responsible for what happened? Was she the one to force Abhay into some kinda obligation? 😕 Abhay's angst n despair was portrayed beautifully 👏
The next scene was heartbreaking where a desperate Pia was pleading with Abhay to not do this to himself as his future was not his alone 😭 Pia's undying love n faith on him was so beautiful but heartbreaking at the same time 🥺 I am sure Pia took the blame on herself to save Abhay n this must be far worse than going through with this by himself for poor Abhay 😭 Who is Anjali? Was she molested by that creep Nikhil? 🤢 Looks like it n I hope Abhay beats the daylight out of him someday 😡 I loved Pia's parting line where she said she'll go to any lengths to get him out of this which is the testimony for the love she has for him 😳
Loved the way Abhay took his frustration out on Chand 👏 Brought out the fiery lover in him. He is willing to go to any lengths himself to get to his love n I hope he succeeds in that 👏 I hate that creep Nikhil 🤢 I hope Abhay teaches him a lesson someday. Abhiya r suffering bcoz of him while he's mocking at Abhay n Pia? 😡
Abhiya moment was the show stealer of this update ⭐️ Was very well written 😳 it depicted the amount of love they had for each other. Pia was feeling insecure not bcoz she doubted his love but bcoz she loved him so much that she feared anticipating the future of her relationship I hope Abhay keeps up his promise n reaches out to her 😊
Outstanding update dear 👏 This was by far THE BEST update of this FF ever 👏 Keep up the gr8 job 👍🏼 No more cribbing warna u know wat I will do? 😆
Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mysterious & sad updt
piya is in mental asylum & abhay is hlpless bt i knw he vil nt let her bear dis pain anymore ...
scene whr piya ws pleading 2 abhay nt 2 destroy his lyf... & he cnt do dis ws really touching 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 dat scene clearly shown her luv & faith 2wards abhay...d person she is in luv with❤️
nikhil 😡 adding oil in d fire ...
xcited 4 d nxt updt
Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update indu👏 Every emotion every pain is described so wel😳 loved it❤️ Oh poor abhiya😭 both r in so much pain😭 this nikhil seems a pshyco to me...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update
Abhiya are in so much pain
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful.
I love the way you wrote the whole thing and oh i really want to slap nikhil hard! Please get Abhay to Pia soon...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Outstanding.da way u r going is jus amazing.i hate dat nikhil.i thnk he is responsible for abhyia separation.piya is in asylum nd abhay totally helpless..nd dat prof.he seeems to b a cultript too.da story is progressing fabolously.da past nd presents presentation is fantastic.great job.thanx for pm.continue soon.

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