Indu, honestly I am tired of ur rants 😛 Tell me one thing - is it habitual for u to find ur amazing updates crappy or boring? 😡 For me this was anything but boring U r turning out to be such a fine writer n ur updates just keep getting better n better n I really wonder how on earth will I ever be able to match ur writing skills? Doing joint updates with a fab writer like u gives me jitters coz no matter what u say, there's no way I shall ever be able to portray the raw human emotions like u even 10% as beautifully as u do
Coming to the update it was really beautifully portrayed 👏 U always keep the air suspense hanging n unfold the story at the right moments n tats a feat in itself in terms of story telling which will keep the readers glued n guessing as to what might have happened after all 👏 The opening convo b/w Abhay n Aarti was very well written. I am guessing Aarti is Nikhil's mom n she is feeling bad for what Abhay is going through bcoz of her son. No wonder she envies Abhay's mom for having a gem like him for a son Abhay seems to hate Aarti but I want to know how Aarti is responsible for what happened? Was she the one to force Abhay into some kinda obligation? 😕 Abhay's angst n despair was portrayed beautifully 👏
The next scene was heartbreaking where a desperate Pia was pleading with Abhay to not do this to himself as his future was not his alone 😭 Pia's undying love n faith on him was so beautiful but heartbreaking at the same time 🥺 I am sure Pia took the blame on herself to save Abhay n this must be far worse than going through with this by himself for poor Abhay 😭 Who is Anjali? Was she molested by that creep Nikhil? 🤢 Looks like it n I hope Abhay beats the daylight out of him someday 😡 I loved Pia's parting line where she said she'll go to any lengths to get him out of this which is the testimony for the love she has for him 😳
Loved the way Abhay took his frustration out on Chand 👏 Brought out the fiery lover in him. He is willing to go to any lengths himself to get to his love n I hope he succeeds in that 👏 I hate that creep Nikhil 🤢 I hope Abhay teaches him a lesson someday. Abhiya r suffering bcoz of him while he's mocking at Abhay n Pia? 😡
Abhiya moment was the show stealer of this update ⭐️ Was very well written 😳 it depicted the amount of love they had for each other. Pia was feeling insecure not bcoz she doubted his love but bcoz she loved him so much that she feared anticipating the future of her relationship I hope Abhay keeps up his promise n reaches out to her 😊
Outstanding update dear 👏 This was by far THE BEST update of this FF ever 👏 Keep up the gr8 job 👍🏼 No more cribbing warna u know wat I will do? 😆
Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago