An AbhiyaSS: What lies beneath30thsept page-21updt - Page 17

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Indu, honestly I am tired of ur rants 😛 Tell me one thing - is it habitual for u to find ur amazing updates crappy or boring? 😡 look who is saying..!!! 😛 For me this was anything but boring U r turning out to be such a fine writer n ur updates just keep getting better n better n I really wonder how on earth will I ever be able to match ur writing skills? Doing joint updates with a fab writer like u gives me jitters coz no matter what u say, there's no way I shall ever be able to portray the raw human emotions like u even 10% as beautifully as u do thanks a ton dear...😳 you have no idea how much your words mean to me...😳 but your exaggerating dear,there is nothing like that.please dont embarrass me..😳 infact am fortunate that i have got the opportunity to write with you...n thanks for that..🤗

Coming to the update it was really beautifully portrayed 👏 U always keep the air suspense hanging n unfold the story at the right moments n tats a feat in itself in terms of story telling which will keep the readers glued n guessing as to what might have happened after all 👏thank you dear.😳

The opening convo b/w Abhay n Aarti was very well written. I am guessing Aarti is Nikhil's mom n she is feeling bad for what Abhay is going through bcoz of her son. yep,you are right! No wonder she envies Abhay's mom for having a gem like him for a son not only that but also she has a very special place for abhay in her heart.. 😊

Abhay seems to hate Aarti but I want to know how Aarti is responsible for what happened? Was she the one to force Abhay into some kinda obligation? 😕 hmm..ya abhay has some reason to behave the way he did but its not exactly hate. you will know that with the progress of the story..

Abhay's angst n despair was portrayed beautifully 👏 thanks..😊

The next scene was heartbreaking where a desperate Pia was pleading with Abhay to not do this to himself as his future was not his alone 😭 Pia's undying love n faith on him was so beautiful but heartbreaking at the same time 🥺 I am sure Pia took the blame on herself to save Abhay n this must be far worse than going through with this by himself for poor Abhay 😭 yes,all i can say now is both are going through unbearable pain. Who is Anjali? Was she molested by that creep Nikhil? 🤢 Looks like it n I hope Abhay beats the daylight out of him someday 😡 read the character sketch dear,you will know..hmm..you will know that in the coming updates..

I loved Pia's parting line where she said she'll go to any lengths to get him out of this which is the testimony for the love she has for him 😳 yes pia can go to any length for abhay n she will...but that will be more heart breaking...

Loved the way Abhay took his frustration out on Chand 👏 Brought out the fiery lover in him. He is willing to go to any lengths himself to get to his love n I hope he succeeds in that 👏 I hate that creep Nikhil 🤢 I hope Abhay teaches him a lesson someday. Abhiya r suffering bcoz of him while he's mocking at Abhay n Pia? 😡 abhay loves pia beyond limit but its his goodness that made him bear all the obligation that were thrust on him but there is nothing that can keep him away from pia...n if someone tries to he will cross any n every boundary.. nikhil is a total negative character..🤢.hmm..lets see what happens..

Abhiya moment was the show stealer of this update ⭐️ Was very well written 😳 it depicted the amount of love they had for each other. Pia was feeling insecure not bcoz she doubted his love but bcoz she loved him so much that she feared anticipating the future of her relationship I hope Abhay keeps up his promise n reaches out to her 😊 ya pia has immense faith on her love,both are aware of the depth of each-other's love..pia was aware of the life abhay was leading so she feared that oneday it might cost him everything...

Outstanding update dear 👏 This was by far THE BEST update of this FF ever 👏 Keep up the gr8 job 👍🏼 No more cribbing warna u know wat I will do? 😆 glad you loved it so much...😳 no..i don't know but i want to know...😛 😉

thanks a lot for this beautiful comment dear...🤗

Originally posted by: luckdiya

mysterious & sad updt

piya is in mental asylum & abhay is hlpless bt i knw he vil nt let her bear dis pain anymore ...

scene whr piya ws pleading 2 abhay nt 2 destroy his lyf... & he cnt do dis ws really touching 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 thanks diya..😳 dat scene clearly shown her luv & faith 2wards abhay...d person she is in luv with❤️ yes her love knows no bound...😊

nikhil 😡 adding oil in d fire ... yes, nikhil is worst..!

xcited 4 d nxt updt will update soon dear..thanks for commenting...🤗

Originally posted by: vmpy

Outstanding.da way u r going is jus amazing.i hate dat nikhil.i thnk he is responsible for abhyia separation.piya is in asylum nd abhay totally helpless..nd dat prof.he seeems to b a cultript too.da story is progressing fabolously.da past nd presents presentation is fantastic.great job.thanx for pm.continue soon.

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal

dat was amazing,
carry on..

Originally posted by: spn-abhay

nice update.likd the way u describd feelings of abhay.hope abhay get pia soon.nikhil,um,he is a bad bad guy.lol.continue soon.

Originally posted by: kanya007k

Flashback was good it seems like they are madly in love thanks kanya.yes dear, they are! 😳
what happened between them?why she is in asylum? you will know soon...
it was nice update & not boring at all thanks for liking dear..😳
update soon