'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Superb update.
u have described both abhiya's turmoil beautifully.
U are an awesome writer.
so, had abhiya broke up ?
kate is abhay's gf or what?
pls continue soon. I am loving ur ff dear.
Thanks for the pm.

thanks a lot romi😳
yep!thy hv broken their friendship!!
ya..as of nw..kate is abhay's gf!!
Once again thnx 4 ur lovly words dear!! 😳
will b updating soon!! u'r welcome!! 😊

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Beautifully written Indu 👏 U have expressed their feelings so well. Loved it 😳 Who is Ayush yaar? I dont remember coming across tat name in CS. Yaar yeh kya? Starting mein hi dono juda hain? 😭 It was lovely but my hearts hurts for Abhiya

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bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

u did a superb update yar...
explain abhiya feeling so gud...
both were heart broken...
y they were alone now...
kate & ayush were their gf bf na...😒
y they apart now...
cont soon
waiting to read more of them...
thksss 4 pm yar...

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
brilliant start.it was beautifully wrtn.both abhay & pia's conditions have been depicted well.do pm me nxt tym ven u update

thanks megha..will surely pm u! Thanks again for liking! 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
awesum updt..u explained their pain very well🤗

thanks 4 appreciatng!! 😊 and may i knw ur name pls?

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: abc123chiti
<font size="2" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">awsome...!!!!! 👏 👏 👏</font><div></div>

thanks a lot dear!! 😳

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Prima :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
thanks 4 appreciatng!! 😊 and may i knw ur name pls?

i'm prima

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Anj01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

it was amazing update!!!!!
u r fantastic writer...the way u described their inner turmoil was amazing!!!
continue soon.

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
awesome update
loved it

so Abhiya are not together n have broke up

It seems like Abhay was not sure of this relation

Beautifully written

loved the way u took rain as the basis to express Abhiya's feelings

cont soon

thanks for the pm

thanks a lot pari..glad u likd it!! 😳
yep dear!! :((
yes,he is yet to knw hs own feelngs 4 pia!! Bt he surely will.. 😊
once again thanku 4 such sweet words!!
U'r welcome! Wil b updatng tnyt!! :)

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: taz90
Awesome update!!!
The feelings were described beautifully...
So sad Abhiya separated...
Can't wait to find out why...
Cont soon n thx for pm😊

thanks fr liking dear!! 😊
yep..it is sad! U wil soon knw d reason!
Thanks again!! Wil try to update tnyt!!

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