'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 17

wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

Ok... So there was a fight between Abhay and Piya and she went away somewhere or what? No doubt Abhay does feel something more than friendship for Piya though. Continue soon you did a great job!

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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<font color="#000099">awesuuum...update tora..🤗just fav...👏...i cherished reading it!!!</font>

<font color="#000099">both of there emotinal turmoil were superbly potrayed...😳.</font>

<font color="#000099">nxt abiya meeting will b a blast hann?!!😉</font>

thanx my sweet fairy...glad u enjoyed it!!yup abhiya meeting vl b fab...n u r writing it...hehe

Originally posted by: cccppp

<font size="4">wow lovely update!!

thank god ayush is child..😆😆 i am in fear that he is pia's bf..🤣

so its all because of kate..😡😡 bombos..😆

u really write well tora and ria's part is good...hope abhay understand soon..i fill pia love abhay..😃 and abhay also but dont know his filling..

waiting for another update..😊
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thanx yaar!!!haha...yup ayush is an innocent child...ya their realization will take some tym...

Originally posted by: flora212

Man u guys rock!
Superb but why they apart? And why didnt they realise thier feelings? Pls i cant wait...make them togather soon. I know it will take time but phir be i dont hv patience.
Update soon!

glad u liked it nafi..their realization will take sum tym..u see,sumtyms we dnt realize what we hav until we lose it..bt let's c what's gng 2 happen:-)

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

<font color="#ff0000" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Wow Tora awesome update I loved it.So r Abhiya still frnds or not.I mean they had fight a week ago only.Oh why kate have 2 make an entry.I guess it would b lke jaane tu ya jaane na.Abhay is happy wid Kate or may b wht he thinks but as soon as Pia's BF will make an entry he'll realize his love 4 her.Plzz cont..😳</font>

thanx shrish.ya they avoid each other bt dnt worry..true luv always finds a way!!

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

thanx dear...will update asap.

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay

<font size="6">wow very very nice story ,i am enjoying to read</font>

glad u r enjoying reading it dr:-)