'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 13

Originally posted by: flora212

Oh i was crying while reading it...really man, u wrote inner turmoil very well!
Was abhiya in love before? And why they apart! Hope to see them togather again...update soon.

thanks a lot nafi...😳 gud to knw,tht i did justice..😊 nope dear,they were nt couples,bt were bff...offcourse thy shared a bond whch ws mre than just a friendship!!
Yep!! Dear me too want thm to b tgthr soon!!
Will b updatng asap..nd the nxt update wil b done by tora.. 😊

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay

<font size="5">very nice story ,thanks for pm </font>

thanks dear! Welcome!! 😊

Originally posted by: raichandroxx

very nyc update...u showed their inner troumle very well...continue soon thanx for pm😊

thanks a lot dear!! 😳 yep..tora will b updatng the nxt part soon!! 😊 u'r welcome..

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Good job you really described the pain very well. Continue soon girls

thanks for liking sreya!! 😳 tora will b givng the nxt update soon!! 😊

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29

Wow its was amazing
you described their inner turmoil really well .
its simply mindblowing
i love the way you write
who is ayush by the way?
thanks for the pm
and continue soon.😊

thanks a lot shivani...glad u liked it!!😳 gud to knw tht i ws able to potray it...😳 ayush is a small boy,whm pia loves n adores..wil gt to knw abt hm n d nxt update!!
Will try to continue asap!!
And thnx again 4 ur sweet words..😊

Originally posted by: SheIsTheOne

Really nice👏...You explained their feelings beautifully🤗...Liked it a lot...Please continue soon...😊 And ya...thanks for the PM...😃

thanks 4 ur appreciation dear! Thanks a lot!! 😊 will try to continue asap!! Most Welcome!! 😊
B/w..dear,may i knw ur name pls?

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

<font color="#0000ff">Beautiful and painful update hoping to read more soon</font>

thanks snigs!! 😳 yaa.. Tora will b updatng soon!! 😊

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

<font color="#ff00ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">oh so abhiya have broken up kya? i wonder why? and i hope they reunite soon enough</font>

ya,thy broke up!! Bt thy were just v.gud friends,nt couple!! Ya..thy wil reunite nd dis tym wth mre stronger emotions..bt it wil tak mre tym, nt so soon!!

Originally posted by: luckdiya

<font size="4"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">jst 1 wrd... <font color="#FF0000">"WOW!!!!!!!!"
<font color="#000000">u hv described d inner turmoil of abhiya beautifully... heart-touching... kate is abhay's gf rgt...oh!!!!!!! waiting 4 d nxt prt :)) update soon & thx 4 pm </font>
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thanks a lot diya..glad u liked it!! 😳 yep,she's abhay's gf!! Bt who knws hw lng she wil b!! 😉
wil try to cntinue soon!! Depends on tora..most welcome! 😊

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

nice ss... please contine soon... full of suspense... update...

thanks dear!! And may i knw ur name?
Wil try to update soon!! 😊