'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 103

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Posted: 12 years ago
that update fabulous guys... great work u did both
just loved this update... best dialogue we r couple 😳...
so both have feelings for each other but wonder when will they disclose it?
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww lovely update...Abhiya couple love itcontinue asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome sbs sbb if people sab kuch include kar liya
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a lovely upd ! so obvious both are in love , when will they realise and confess 😆 Can't wait for movie shooting to start . 😆
Upd soon please
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!!! indu and tora u rock girls :D
I just red all chaps in one go n its damn interesting ^_^
commenting to the last update... m falling short for words.. just amazing!! :)
IF part was kinda funny :D it reminded me of "dhamaal in abhiya wedding night" all forum girls LOL
gym part was mind blowing... u described his body like that I felt I was watching him live :P and piya was described beautifully :) I just can imagine what piya's condition was *blush* hayeee... ^_^ such a cute scene.
god these two irritating people >_< when will they say to eachother? stupids!! :v :v
they are head over heels for eachother but too stubborn I say it. :P

the best thing is that you are not adding that bitchy Kate. thank god !!! :D I dun wanna read her.

I am new reader and commented first time. :) plzzz tora and indu pm me guys plzzz...

do cont. as soon as possible dear! *hug*
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for late reply

it was superb update.
i liked it very much.
i liked that part where risa and tora were talking over phone about their idiot friends.😆
and the media and fans reaction about the news seemed so realistic.😆
and yes the whole gym scene was wow😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Haaye haaye OMG OMG OMG *dancing*

Pleeeaaase update this sooner! This is kind of my favs! Do you know, I forgot the title of this story...then read the last chapter and I was like OMG that one... Finally!!!will try updating sooner😆


Update was superb. Typical Abhay to be detached outwardly and sigh inwardly. He will never learn to improve 😆 Haaye haaye Piya checking out Abhay *starry eyes* are koi toh rok lo :Pglad to see u enjoyed it soo much..😛
and and and... I am there!!! So is Indu...and Dishu... *dancing*
sorry I'm just not very coherent now...too happy with the update...now update soon..preferably within a month..or a week... I won't complain. :D


*goes to read again*

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luckdiya

updt ws superb 👏 👏 👏thank u
xcited 4 nxt
bth r in luv 😆 nw d ques which is hovering over my mind is "who vil propose 2 whom & wen?"that remains to be seen..and we have a long way to go till we reach there😊
sbs,sbb,IF ppl,gym... i cn visualize d whole scene & dis is d bst thng in ur writing⭐️glad u liked it

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ririrararaatry

amazing update..damn abhay..why he doesnt confess his love for piya..i dont think piya has a deep feeling for anik .she also feels for abhay..it isn't easy for either of them...they need to overcome their hesitations..and accept their love for each other firstwaiting for their shooting track😛
btw that if part was funny😆hope u liked it😉

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