'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 105

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Omg u guys updated pinch pinch yeah we r back😉

Update sooner next time like once a month sure😆

Beautifully written and loved it allglad u liked it😊

When will they accept there feelings

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: --peehu--

i think i am commenting after a long long time...ya seeing u after a long time😊

read last 3 chaps in a go..

OMG!!! the update was awesome...i so loved it...thank u

abhay declaring them as a couple..

piya fighting...

media creating hype..

that was just prefect...

these two are so made for each other..and yet in denial mode..

god help them!!only they can help themselves now😆

thanks for pm...

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

awww lovely update...Abhiya couple love itcontinue asap

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani

What a lovely upd ! so obvious both are in love , when will they realise and confess 😆 Can't wait for movie shooting to start . 😆

Upd soon please

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

loved it

Originally posted by: ...mano...

omg!!! indu and tora u rock girls :Dthank u dear😊
I just red all chaps in one go n its damn interesting ^_^
commenting to the last update... m falling short for words.. just amazing!! :)glad u liked it😊
IF part was kinda funny :D it reminded me of "dhamaal in abhiya wedding night" all forum girls LOL
gym part was mind blowing... u described his body like that I felt I was watching him live :P and piya was described beautifully :) I just can imagine what piya's condition was *blush* hayeee... ^_^ such a cute scene.
god these two irritating people >_< when will they say to eachother? stupids!! :v :v
they are head over heels for eachother but too stubborn I say it. :P yup they r very stubborn😆

the best thing is that you are not adding that bitchy Kate. thank god !!! :D I dun wanna read her. she will come soon, i'm afraid😆

I am new reader and commented first time. :) we r really happy to see ur comments😊plzzz tora and indu pm me guys plzzz..yes, sure we will😊.

do cont. as soon as possible dear! *hug*

Originally posted by: anjali0111

sorry for late replyits ok😊

it was superb update.
i liked it very much.
i liked that part where risa and tora were talking over phone about their idiot friends.😆
and the media and fans reaction about the news seemed so realistic.😆
and yes the whole gym scene was wow😳glad u liked reading the update😊