'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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diana

@vampireking

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1011

First of all thanku so much for giving us such a fantastic 👏 ,mindblowing update👏 !!i loved it😳!i mean the way you write piya and abhay feelings 😳for each other !!i should clap for you👏 !!specially adding sbs ,sbb and if in this awesome story is a very creative idea👏 !i must say!one question is just revolving in my mind that piya love advik or not😉??huh😉!plzz update cant wait read the next update 👏 😉 😳

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1012

amazing update

abhay and pia both are longing for one another but puts up a fake front whenever they are face to face...both r stubburn idiots and i really wish risa and tora do knock some sense in them.

the turmoil , confusion and the feelings of both abhay and pia was very well written.

loved it.

thanks for pm

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1013

OMG *faints* our rxn wud hav been similiar hai na? *sigh*

RES...

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1014

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finally after a long time you guys update. superb 👏 I guess the consequences of this public revelation is going to be deeper than its looking now. Poor n dumbo abhay n pia 🥱 off course both are in love with each other but their situation and past history isnt helping n offcourse as a good person piya jus cant dump Anik for abhay who is always good to her. its complicated seriously. n things has to be more complicated as abhay n pia will be shooting together now.

most hilarious IF reaction of fans n i can totally see it.. soo true 🤣

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--geny--

@--geny--

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1015

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can I say-It was Brillient Episode.Written so well.I was waiting for this ff long agoa.u know toraa...

kha se shuru kru...m crazy for ViSu tora...hn apne doston ko jaldi reeel k sath real main bhi ek kr do...na..😆

loved update.a.w.e.s.o.m.e.loved both ki feelings...ya pia is over reacting...!!abhay ws so bindass.loved it.

kya jawab diya media ko like this-

loved it.

kehte hai sapne sach ho jate hai...ek bar-ek fiml li hai hn promote krne k liye Hum Ek Couple hai-muze pkyek ka scene yad aaya ,jb abhay kbir ko bolta hai ki they r together..
Maja aayega...ye FF lambi chalne de na..wud love to read more n morre with this story...

loved u written saas bhu aur sajish n sbb-haye my visu-

film ko promote krne k liye..visu my jaan...

koi aisa scene movie main chal skta hai na...

main root se bhahr ja rhi hun..k.stop me.

jim..uhmmm..iss ladki ne weight gain krna chaiye...she needs..abhay itna y nt she..bubbly cutie..

i loved this...humara bhi nam dalna tha na...
u know...i really wish still ...bt.k.

pia k dil ka haal...awww

anik shud b like this-i lov jalkuda abhay a lot...

sbs n sbs with india forum rocks...

eagrly waiting for nxt episode!!!

thanx tora n Indu romi!!!!!

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1016

wow tora brilliant update👏 👏 Awww...piya too wished that they were a couple in real tora and risa will be the cupids😃 Eagerly waiting for the shooting to start...😳

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1017

Awesome update tora
Abhiya.r stubborn & mad
Both love each other like mad
Lol Abhay thinks Pia is dating anik & hence is holding himself back while Pia thinks Abhay don't love her
Oh God give them brains

Plz cont..