'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 104

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

really well written chapter tora. and ye abhay pia dono dumb hain. pata nahin inhe ak kab ayegi

Originally posted by: vampireking

First of all thanku so much for giving us such a fantastic 👏 ,mindblowing update👏 !!i loved it😳!thank u so much😊i mean the way you write piya and abhay feelings 😳for each other !!i should clap for you👏 !!glad u liked it😊specially adding sbs ,sbb and if in this awesome story is a very creative idea👏 !i must say!one question is just revolving in my mind that piya love advik or not😉??u will come to know soon enough😊huh😉!plzz update cant wait read the next update 👏 😉 😳

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update

abhay and pia both are longing for one another but puts up a fake front whenever they are face to face...both r stubburn idiots and i really wish risa and tora do knock some sense in them.yep..they need to accept their feelings first..only then can they confess..

the turmoil , confusion and the feelings of both abhay and pia was very well written.

loved it.glad u liked it😊

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

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Awesuum..awesuum...awesuum..tora!!!👏 👏thank u fairy😊
Mindblowing princess!! You rock!!!🤗so do you🤗
you know you have described everything so perfectly! I loved the car convo. N the tension btw them! Abhay defended hmself. His choice of words were apt! The part where he cntinues to look at her..till the signal turns green, speaks so many things!bravo!!👏
tora-risa cnvo was too good! Waiting to see what they do..😉
you have explained abhay n pia's inner turmoil soo well!! 👍🏼
the forum outbreak was soo natural..and ur depiction made it even more spectacular!!!👏ya i'm all too familiar with the forum ways😆

Loved the gym part! Wow tora! U knw the way u explaind abhay's physique..i cnt have words! It was damn good!! Like..really..i can never write like that you know..? You are an Ace!! U made it live!! Your descriptn infused lyf to the scene!! ⭐️thank u...😳 i know u will never accept this...but u write just as well😊
and nw am eager. Lets see..whats awaiting...😉
and thanks a ton dear..🤗 i could have never been able to take the story this far..wthout you.😳 hey..you know u play an important role even when i'm the one writing the update..i ask u what to write more times than i can count😆and u patiently explain each time😊thanks!🤗thanks to u too🤗

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

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finally after a long time you guys update. superb 👏 thanks tanzie😊I guess the consequences of this public revelation is going to be deeper than its looking now. yep..let's see what's gonna happen nowPoor n dumbo abhay n pia 🥱 off course both are in love with each other but their situation and past history isnt helping n offcourse as a good person piya jus cant dump Anik for abhay who is always good to her. its complicated seriously. n things has to be more complicated as abhay n pia will be shooting together now.yep both complicated and interesting😊

most hilarious IF reaction of fans n i can totally see it.. soo true 🤣hain na?😉

Originally posted by: sukugeny

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can I say-It was Brillient Episode.Written so well.I was waiting for this ff long agoa.u know toraa...glad u liked it..and first of all thank u for this big and wonderful comment😊

kha se shuru kru...m crazy for ViSu tora...hn apne doston ko jaldi reeel k sath real main bhi ek kr do...na..😆

loved update.a.w.e.s.o.m.e.loved both ki feelings...ya pia is over reacting...!!abhay ws so bindass.loved it.

kya jawab diya media ko like this-



loved it.

kehte hai sapne sach ho jate hai...ek bar-ek fiml li hai hn promote krne k liye Hum Ek Couple hai-muze pkyek ka scene yad aaya ,jb abhay kbir ko bolta hai ki they r together..
Maja aayega...ye FF lambi chalne de na..wud love to read more n morre with this story...yup..this story has a lot more to come😊

loved u written saas bhu aur sajish n sbb-haye my visu-




film ko promote krne k liye..visu my jaan...

koi aisa scene movie main chal skta hai na...let's see😛


main root se bhahr ja rhi hun..k.stop me.

jim..uhmmm..iss ladki ne weight gain krna chaiye...she needs..abhay itna y nt she..bubbly cutie..





i loved this...humara bhi nam dalna tha na...aww..ok next time if there is any IF part..u will b included😊
u know...i really wish still ...bt.k.

pia k dil ka haal...awww



anik shud b like this-i lov jalkuda abhay a lot...

sbs n sbs with india forum rocks...

eagrly waiting for nxt episode!!!will update asap

thanx tora n Indu romi!!!!!

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

wow tora brilliant update👏 👏 Awww...piya too wished that they were a couple in real tora and risa will be the cupids😃 Eagerly waiting for the shooting to start...😳

Originally posted by: SheDevil

Awesome update torathanks shrish😊
Abhiya.r stubborn & mad
Both love each other like mad
Lol Abhay thinks Pia is dating anik & hence is holding himself back while Pia thinks Abhay don't love heryep things are a lil complicated
Oh God give them brains

Plz cont..

Originally posted by: captainplus

awesome chappy ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️thanks😊

lo❤️e abhiya !

bt i doubt if piya n anik's relation is real 😕things are all very complicated here

lo❤️ed sbs ,sbb headlines n IF reactions

egarly waiting 4r the nxt part 😛

tnx 4r the pm 😊

Originally posted by: bellaaa

that update fabulous guys... great work u did boththanks beenish😊
just loved this update... best dialogue we r couple 😳...
so both have feelings for each other but wonder when will they disclose it?it will take time..😛
cont soon