Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#581

Aww, Tanzie! You proved yet again why I consider this SS to be a masterpiece! It's so dark and intense and it never fails to touch my heart. The confession has to be the most unconventional ever but it is their kind! They didn't even say 'I love you' yet it seems complete! I don't think the typical candlelight romance and someone going down on their knees would've justified them anyway because that is not the kind of relationship they share. The title of your latest chapter is apt. AbhIya here are in an unnamed relationship. Even after the confession, I can't call them just 'lovers' or even 'soulmates'. They're so much more than that and even I don't know what they really are. But whatever they share, it is extremely warm, sensitive, poised and palpable and the way you never leave it's essence is what makes you two brilliant writers for me. I confess I have never enjoyed reading anything as much as I love this SS. I am going to remember it long after you're done with it, mark my words!

And coming to Panchi, I hadn't expected this revelation that Madhu is Pia's biological mother. I don't blame the girl for feeling betrayed. It was so disheartening seeing her going back to her Princess PD ways but I'm glad Abhay brought her back in time. I hope he doesn't ruin it in the next update 'coz then I don't know what Pia will do. Although, his fears aren't baseless. The kind of past he has, it is not that easy to leave it behind, it will come back to haunt him sometime or the other and we can see Chand is already looking for him

It is too bad Heena willn't be continuing this with you but studies come first. I wish her the very best for her exams🤗

Continue soon, Tanzie❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
yay!!me 1st...! i m feeling very bad for pia😭 and wait a sec abhay said he knows that means is it chand😲😲???? last part was very nyc "no 1 can c u like this bcoz u r only mine" loved this dialog of abhay's... continue soon dear...

She doesnt know till now whos her father and she will be more sad once she knows. You will know with time whos her father. Glad u liked it. will update soon. 😳

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Me second... Not bad 😛

seriously, this was shocking! So who is Pia's dad? Wait a minute... Is it Chand?

Chalo anyways I am toh eagerly waiting for the next chapter so you can continue where you left off 😉

😆 You will know soon whos it. but most peoples guesses are pretty same 😉 I will surely continue where I left off 😉

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
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omg tanz!!!yyy did u stop there*pouts*...last part was so amazing...the passion,love...at last abhay is opening up...omg pia's past is sad..feel sorry 4 her..bt abhay is there 4 her na:-)aww heena,no probs...studies cum first:-)tc!

Sorry baba... i had to stop to make the next update more beautiful. 😆 Abhay and Pia will support each other 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: mandy1024
Tanzie yaar, everytime I feel this is your best update ever, you come up with another one that exceeds the previous update in its sheer brilliant story telling 👏 Do you want me to tell how amazing it is? Sorry I have run out of adjectives once again 😉Coming to the fashion show, I loved to see the 'J' streak in Pia for our Abhay 😆 That was kinda cute n Abhay's feelings for Pia was brilliantly portrayed. The insecurity, fear for the future n the fear for a possible rejection, all was portrayed very well 👏👏👏👏👏👏 The bit abt Madhu being Pia's biological mother was shocking 😲 I had never anticipated that Par tune Panchi ko Pia ki massi bana di? 🤣 Yaani ab woh Abhay ki bhi maasi ban gayi 😆 Awesome. But I felt so bad for Pia 😭 Poor thing, was betrayed by her own mother all these years. Loved the way Abhay got so protective for Pia 😃 Abhiya silence suffering for the 2 or more weeks was heart wrenching 🥺 The last bit OMG 😍 was the best part. I was anticipating an explosion like this. I knew there wouldn be a romantic ILU ILU eye lock session 😳 coz the fire was already burning in them 😉 Y did u stop it here yaar? 😡 Now hope u update this soon coz I wanna know where this will lead to. So u had hinted at Abhiya baby right? 😉 Hopefully we get it before the epilogue only 😃
SUPER DUPER AWESOME UPDATE TANZIE 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

@Heena: All the best for ur exams dear 👍🏼

Aww...thanks sooo much Manasa... means a lot me. 🤗 you know how much I love it so all of your beautiful comments means a lot to me. Its not that I put extra effort to write it but maybe I just feel it or could feel it better to make it more beautiful thn my ther works 😳

Pehle to Panchi was going to be Abhay's saans na if she is Pia's mother... isse accha to masi hai 🤣 jealousy card always works for Abhiya as Poco used to say, "abhiya are jalkukda n jalkukdi 😆
Their passion is going to burn them and the entire update. I already wrote half n edited it twice. there will be confession but it wont be typical type. I had to stop... im famous for stopping at wrong moments... my readers always say im such a tease 🤣

glad u liked it dear 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: flora212
WOW...WOW...WOW!!!! JUST FABOLUS...AWSOME!!!👏👏
FEELING BAD FR PIA...SHE HAS GONE THROUGH SO MUCH LIES!!!😲 ABHAY AND PIA JELOUSY PART WAS AWSOME...
THE LAST PART IS MY FABOURITE
THE LINE-No one has the right to see you like this except me. Because you are MINE...and only I can claim you. AWW...HE IS FALLING IN DEEP LOVE!!!!!
NOW COMING TO PIA FATHER...WHO IS THAT ??? I AM 80 % SURE ITS CHAND...😆I DONT KNOW IF I AM WRONG!!!😕 BUT PLEASE DONT BRING CHAND SO SOON...LET ABHIYA LIVE IN PEACE FR SOME DAYS!!!😳 AND DONT DARE TO MAKE ABHEY LEAVE NOW!!!😡😆
BUT WHY DID U STOP SUCH INTERESTING POINT...SO ABHIYA KISSED...🤣
DO START FROM THE PART WHERE U STOPED...😉AND UPDATE SOON TANZIE!!!😃
I AM REALLY ATTRACTED TO UR THIS SS TOO MUCH...
MAKE IT LONG AS MUCH AS U CAN...
AND PLEASE DONT THINK OF THIS TRAGYDY ENDING AS THIER LIVES R ALREADY TRAGYDY!!!
I JUST HOPE ABHAY CONFESS HIS FEELINGS FR PIA..I AM NOW EXPECTING FROM U SOME AHEM..AHEM IN NEXT UPDATE!!!
UPDATE SOON...AND WISH BEST OF LUCK TO HENNA...

Thanks Nafi 🤗 I will continue from the moment I have left and it will go on n on 😉 so be happy I know how besharam u guys are 😛 n you will know about Pias father on right time 😛

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
thts one brilliant piece Tanzie. My God, what hasn't Pia gone through. Her whole life has been filled with lies and only lies. And who is her real father? Why do I have a feeling that it's Abhay's master?😕

Thanks a lot Dishu 😊 u might be right...lets see. its time Pia and Abhay both find peace in each other 😳

Originally posted by: hema_rawat
beautiful update tanzie ... u r suprb ... i luvd ur updte

Thanks a lot Hema 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
Wow tanzie what an update...gosh abhay is so possesive...rofl he called the dress hankerchief...and whats with pia so confusing...her past is...cont soon...and no probs i know heenu is busy..nxt chap seems i teresting...but u left at such nice point ...

Thanks Rashu. I love possessive Abhay and I know most people do too 😆 Pia has gone through a lot...her whole life has become a joke after knowing Madhu is her real mother. offcourse next chapter will look interesting to u 🤣 im sure your gonna love it 😛

Originally posted by: abhiya0006
Loved the Jealousy part!!
Abhay ne Pia ka dress faar diya😳😳

Abhiya kissed😳 but why did u stop there😡😡

Thanks dear. Im famous for stopping at wrong places...adat se majboor 😛 😆 dont worry will continue from that point. and I don't know your name 😳

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
😍awesum updt...poor pian pia jealous of abhay was awesum😳😛abhiya kiss was awesum😳thnx 4 d pm n cont. soon

Thanks dear. Abhiya are always awesome in jealousy haina 😆 I noticed I never asked your name... 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: anjali.K
Tanzie!!!!
update soon na plz!!!

Tomorrow Anji...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#587

I saw in one of ur posts that u have an eye infection How is it now? Sorry for pestering u for updates yaar. Give it when u feel better.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: mandy1024
I saw in one of ur posts that u have an eye infection How is it now? Sorry for pestering u for updates yaar. Give it when u feel better.

It's a bit better now dear..thanks for asking. I had to remain at home since I looked like cyclops 🤓 now its better so i wrote half last night. if i feel good I will finish it tonight 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: qwerty-sonu
OMG...!!
What an update Tanzie...👏..
Both were burning in jealousy for each other...nd still their ego doesn't let them confess..😆
Pia was already shattered with the relevation of d truth..and Abhay's ignoring only added fuel to the fire...But this fire burnt all d barriers abhay had created around himself...So finally he had to accept his feelings...
"No one has the right to see you like this except me. Because you are MINE...and only I can claim you."
Loved dis line Tanz..😉 Thanks Sonu. jealousy are key element in abhiyas relationship to expose their feelings. 😆 thanks u liked the line..as a fact..i like it too 😉
And Madhu doesn't have d guts to accept her own daughter..😡
dis person Torres Ferine is such a ____ ..Abhay should have punched him hard...
And Abhay called her dress a handkerchief..🤣.. isnt he all very possessive about Pia 😆
Abhay's anger on her reply was uncontrolable...😲..and what has done in that rage was really unexpected😲..
and I hope Abhay still doesn't have any plans to leave her..
Thank u for such a lovely update Tanz...
nd for d pm too..🤗..
I've just finished reading this update ..nd I already want d next one as soon as possible..😛..
So continue soon please..😊 will update tomorrow or if my eyes behave better with me..tonight 😆

And 'ALL THE BEST' to Heena for all her exams...👍🏼
mujhe bhi abhi bahuth saare exams dene hain ..I hope hum dono ke exams rocking honge...😃