Tanzie this update was worth the wait 👏 n thanks for giving it so quickly despite having eye problems. It was MINDBLOWINGLY SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
It was not the union of 2 bodies but it was the coming together of 2 souls n it was beautiful. Not even for one second I felt I could see the lust. True it was passionate but it had nothing to do with the needs of the body. It was more like quenching the thirst of the soul. 😳 It was mesmerising. I loved the way you described Abhay n Pia's feelings here. Trust me I can write an epic comment for this epic update but at the moment I am at a loss for words. Abhay's hesitation, Pia's surrender n finally the coming together of 2 soulmates was so wonderfully depicted that I honestly have no words. The morning after was even more beautiful. Pia's journey from being an irresponsible girl to a woman blissfully in love was spectacular 👏 Loved the way she got scared on not seeing Abhay. I am an Abhay fan all the way but Pia stole the thunder in this update.
Loved the last part where Abhay finally found solace in the norms of a regular life which is devoid of guns, bullets, blood and death 😳
Trust me I have not read such a beautiful segment in any book also forget an FF. 👏 Tanzie u have done an outstanding job dear. Thank u so so much for giving this amazing SS 🤗
NOTE: I hope your eye infection is completely cured n ur fine now 😊 Tanzie dear please dont get upset if your readers press you for updates. You should have realised by now how much we love your works. The moment you reserve a post for update all your readers will be in a race to reserve their post for comments as well. Within a min or two, more than 2 pages will already be reserved and there are many times even I felt bad coz I never got to be the first person to reserve a post Trust me whenever u say u might post an update I check the forum regularly to check for your 'res' post. I feel super happy if I get to res a post for urs or Ayshu's FFs 😃 early on. I know ur busy, u have other priorities as well n surely none of us want u to overlook all of that just so that we get to enjoy your stories. We will wait. I understand that coz I work for more than 12 hrs lately in office n its difficult for me to update my FF n SS too 😭 I know you had mentioned u'll update within 2 days but trust me when readers post their requests asking u to update fast am sure they wouldn have read ur previous posts regarding when u'll update next. Please dont get mad at us. Give us updates only when u have the time for it 🤗
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