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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

I think i already said I will update tomorrow or if I can tonight. i dont like to repeat the same things. I dont have the time luxury to write all the time because I have lots of other works and my job to do. I think i should better stop writing because I cant reach up to your expectations



nooo yar take ur time...i didnt knw about ur tomorrow update thts y i write it...u will take ur time yar...u r superb writer...sorry 4 hurting😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy

Aww, Tanzie! You proved yet again why I consider this SS to be a masterpiece! It's so dark and intense and it never fails to touch my heart. The confession has to be the most unconventional ever but it is their kind! They didn't even say 'I love you' yet it seems complete! I don't think the typical candlelight romance and someone going down on their knees would've justified them anyway because that is not the kind of relationship they share. The title of your latest chapter is apt. AbhIya here are in an unnamed relationship. Even after the confession, I can't call them just 'lovers' or even 'soulmates'. They're so much more than that and even I don't know what they really are. But whatever they share, it is extremely warm, sensitive, poised and palpable and the way you never leave it's essence is what makes you two brilliant writers for me. I confess I have never enjoyed reading anything as much as I love this SS. I am going to remember it long after you're done with it, mark my words! I missed your comments a lot Neethzi... because you always understand the depth of this SS like few people and I knew you would 😳 So true... you speak my heart... i will never give dance or candlelight romance here bcoz it just doesnt fit here 😆 Abhay n Pias relationship is bonded with PAIN here... not attraction but they will heal each other with the passion they have for each other and finally find solace where they can look for better life..

And coming to Panchi, I hadn't expected this revelation that Madhu is Pia's biological mother. I don't blame the girl for feeling betrayed. It was so disheartening seeing her going back to her Princess PD ways but I'm glad Abhay brought her back in time. I hope he doesn't ruin it in the next update 'coz then I don't know what Pia will do. Although, his fears aren't baseless. The kind of past he has, it is not that easy to leave it behind, it will come back to haunt him sometime or the other and we can see Chand is already looking for him Its like everything in Pia's life has became a lie where the only truth remains is Abhay. she knows tomorrow he will be leaving too and she wont be able to take it. so her attempt will be desperate and bold to make Abhay realize and confess how much he feels for her too and she will be successful in that.

It is too bad Heena willn't be continuing this with you but studies come first. I wish her the very best for her exams🤗
Continue soon, Tanzie❤️ I will miss Heenas writing too but she is too busy with exams na. Love you 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks to all for reading and commenting. means a lot to me. I'm so sorry I couldn't reply everyone because of time shortage and I had a eye infection from last few days so I couldn't even go to office or sit infront of my lappy. I'm really sorry guys I fail to update sooner because it's just not possible for me though I really want to. I hope you guys understand and I'm sorry I got mad... please bear with me. will update as soon as I can 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Tanzie this update was worth the wait 👏 n thanks for giving it so quickly despite having eye problems. It was MINDBLOWINGLY SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

It was not the union of 2 bodies but it was the coming together of 2 souls n it was beautiful. Not even for one second I felt I could see the lust. True it was passionate but it had nothing to do with the needs of the body. It was more like quenching the thirst of the soul. 😳 It was mesmerising. I loved the way you described Abhay n Pia's feelings here. Trust me I can write an epic comment for this epic update but at the moment I am at a loss for words. Abhay's hesitation, Pia's surrender n finally the coming together of 2 soulmates was so wonderfully depicted that I honestly have no words. The morning after was even more beautiful. Pia's journey from being an irresponsible girl to a woman blissfully in love was spectacular 👏 Loved the way she got scared on not seeing Abhay. I am an Abhay fan all the way but Pia stole the thunder in this update.
Loved the last part where Abhay finally found solace in the norms of a regular life which is devoid of guns, bullets, blood and death 😳
Trust me I have not read such a beautiful segment in any book also forget an FF. 👏 Tanzie u have done an outstanding job dear. Thank u so so much for giving this amazing SS 🤗
NOTE: I hope your eye infection is completely cured n ur fine now 😊 Tanzie dear please dont get upset if your readers press you for updates. You should have realised by now how much we love your works. The moment you reserve a post for update all your readers will be in a race to reserve their post for comments as well. Within a min or two, more than 2 pages will already be reserved and there are many times even I felt bad coz I never got to be the first person to reserve a post Trust me whenever u say u might post an update I check the forum regularly to check for your 'res' post. I feel super happy if I get to res a post for urs or Ayshu's FFs 😃 early on. I know ur busy, u have other priorities as well n surely none of us want u to overlook all of that just so that we get to enjoy your stories. We will wait. I understand that coz I work for more than 12 hrs lately in office n its difficult for me to update my FF n SS too 😭 I know you had mentioned u'll update within 2 days but trust me when readers post their requests asking u to update fast am sure they wouldn have read ur previous posts regarding when u'll update next. Please dont get mad at us. Give us updates only when u have the time for it 🤗
Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow wow. Just wow Tanzie. That really is truly sensual, romantic and aesthetic all rolled into one update. 👏 Only you could pull off such a classic writing for something so racy. 👏
Edited by ..dishu.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh my god... hhhaaawwwttt burning update!
Seriously this was the hottest update ever i read in ur all ffs!

I never knew this side of urs...totaly mindblowing!

Just fabolus!
Wow abhay wants a normal life with pia...
great! Hope it happens...
Ok one thing i request to u, if u r planning abhiya baby then i want a boy!

Waiting fr next chappy...update sooon!

Note- sorry fr making u mad by persueing u fr updates!
Really sorry, hope ur infection of eye get well soon. TAKE CARE.
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Phew tanzie...what was this i reached icu got discharged today...😆so updating my comment...and ya i had to take shower after reading this update😛...heres a song...for u...khuda ki kasam tum lajavab ho...😉tumhare haath do i wanna kiss them...
mindblowing update...abhiyas romance was

but i know prob r there now..
🤗tc ...waiting for nxt update
P.S. dnt get angry yaar we r ur swt readers na😳galti maaf kardo...
Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was a mind blowing updare Tanzie...👏👏👏👏..Loved it to the core...😳...I've already read it thrice u know..and Thanks for posting the update despite having an eye infection...Both Abhay and Pia poured out their love for each other...and their feelings were depicted perfectly and clearly through your words dear..😊..be it love or insecurity or hesitation or any other emotion...I love the way you show it Tanzie..👏👏👏and for Pia..I loved the way she made Abhay understand what he means to her...😳
Why you have to hold back so much? I would have done something stupid after hearing my own mother feed me lies about her and my father along with my identity all my life. It's just for you I'm alive. I have been reckless, irrational and temperamental always. Only you have the perfect control over me. You are the only one I have left. Don't do this to me. I need you to stay alive.
..Loved the end part Tanz...😃
Is this how a typical man lives his life? Then I love this life. There won't be any bullets or blood in my life and I would earn, eat, sleep and love like a normal human. There's nothing more I could ask for.
I just hope Abhay gets this kind of life soon...But his past won't let him live peacefully so easily..I feel sad for him..Even when he wants to go away from the darkness...his master wouldn't let him live peacefully.
and btw..the warning you gave would only make ur readers of age less than 16 more curious to read it..😆..you really can't help that..😆
Thank u once again Tanzie..for this wonderful update..
Waiting to read what more their life has in store for them...
..continue soon..and thanks for the pm...🤗
Edited by qwerty-sonu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hawwwt update tanzie

loved n enjoyed each n every bit of it


abhiya were just awesum



thnx 4 d pm n cont. soon🤗
Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago

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