Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#561

breathtaking update+MAGICAL
****faint*****
piya's stry ws painful
panchi d bar dancer i cn visualize ...dis scene 🤣🤣 she is dancin lik chikni chameli🤣🤣

cnt xplain d last para...☺️☺️

OMG!!!!!!!! DESE R MY FAV. LINES...

"How could he hold my world like this??" oh!!!!!!! wow!!!! abhay is sooo jealous
"she was looking like an angel in dt white saree that actually made her way to earth coz of me." hw romantic
I used to burn my pain inside the bottles of alcohols and dance floors and because of Abhay I can't even do that now. Because he may not love me but if he starts hating me.. I won't be able to bear it" painful
"if looks could kill I would have died at the spot right now" mst beautiful line i hv ever heard...
Its jst a guess..."chand is piya's father" 😃...
U R A FAB. WRITER.... PLZ UPDATE SOON ...I CNT WAIT 😳

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#562

this update was superb, amazing, fabulous, mind blowing, excellent👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️...n all the the words used for praising.

this one is the best chappy of this SS. everything from abhiya's feelings to their dialogues was awesome.👍🏼

some shocking facts revealed😲...panchi is not pia's mom...infact she is madhu's daughter😲...n father is chand...i can guess that😉...so is thats the reason he is searching for pia n abhay?😕

hate that ferine.😡...good he got punished by abhay.👏
n loved the part where abhiya were jealous of attention they were getting from others.😉😳😆
n last part was.☺️...oh i dont have any words to describe how was it.😍...bhaavnaon ko samjho😳☺️😍😆
but how could you stop it there.😒...oh ok i can understand 🤔...it was long chappy...but give next update soon.😍😉

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#563

AMAZING update dear:-):-) loved it:-):-)

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#564

Wow I loved it it was a superb updates . There really are no words to describe how superb amazing awesome fantastic brilliant mind blowing excellent it is . Omg madu is piya's mom😲 and she is afraid to accept her front of the world. I loved how abhiya were getting jealous. I especially loved the handkerchief dialogue and only I can see you like this and last part was ☺️. Thanks for pm. I am guessing Abhay's boss chand is piya's father . Ferine deserved the punishment . Continue soon

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#565

Wow tanzie wht an update I loved it.Sometime I feel Chand is Pia's father.Poor Pia life ka raaz khul gya & haye mere Abhiya were so cute.Love Abhiya's jealousy 4 ach other & last scene was breath taking.Oh chalo I wish heena all the bst & cant wait 2 read nxt chapter tanzie.So please cont

Love u🤗

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#566

wow yar superb update...
and u said u dont liked it huh
just awsome yar
sooo panchi is not piya mother madhu is piya mom...
who is her dad??
abhay knws that what if piya came to knw that abhay hide it from her??
loved the piya jealousy than abhay tooo hehehheheh
poor piya went to her bad state...
she barely said abhay hide his feeling for her wowoww yar
loved the last past yar...
piya first kiss than my abhay yupieee
y did u end at tht point yar
waiting to see where they lead nw...
plsss cont soon

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#567

awesome update , tanzie !

The possessiveness b/w abhiya for each other was WOW !

OMG ! I feel so bad for piya ! Her whole life has been a lie ..

And who is her real father? Is it chand??

The last abhiya scene was hot ! He tore piya's dress.. Now , thats the abhay i like .. Not his self-sacrificing mode !

Continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc

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517072

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#568

I can't believe this!!!!!! 😲😲

Abhay actually came out of his 'Dukhiyari Bahu' mode,and tore Piya's dress????😲🤣

Haawwwttt scene of AbhIya kissing!!!😳😍

Btw,U are getting better wid da romantic stuffs.😆 Byapar ki???😉 Pm me plz!!😆

Okay,I'm not being mean(I know I already am😆) But Panchi is Piya's 'auntyji'!!!😲🤣

Thanx for the pm Tanzie.🤗

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#569

amazing
awesome
beautiful update.
I just loved it to the core.
Last part was my favourite.
So, piya now knows about her mother.
wow abhay confessed.
I loved each and every part of it.
pls continue soon.
thanks for the pm dear.

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#570

Loved abhiya part,their eye lock,jealousy
feeling bad 4 pia ,she is suffering so much
madhu is pia's mom then who is her dad?is it chand?how abhay know her dad?
Last part was gr8 where abhay stopped pia and abhay's confession and their beautiful kiss