Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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-Alone-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#571

Aww, poor pia..loved abhay's dialog 😳Awesome update..loved it..thnx 4 d pm..🤗

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#572

@ Tanzie awesome update yaar you showed each and every emotion beautifully they were going through jealousy and possesiveness for eachothe,r passion and their burning desire and their longing for eachother felt really bad for Pia Madhu was her real mother and Abhay knows about it and her father too is it Chand ? then why does he want to kill her? does he know that Pia is his daughter or not ?anyways beautiful update and update next part soon 😊

@ Heena : best of luck for your exams dear 👍🏼 😊

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#573

dat was awesome..
carry on..
thanxx for d pm..

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#574

Amazing update tanz!!!!!👏👏👏

pia jealousy part was superb😃 !!!!!OMG😲 who is pia father ? reveal the secret soon !!!! wase kahi Chand to nahi 😆Abhay possessive toward pia was too good 😳!!! Finally Abhay accept his defeat and Accept his love for pia 😍😍 !!! Abhiya Kiss was So romantic 😍😍😍!!!!! Love the way You describe last part 👏👏👏!!!!!

"You are not going anywhere wearing this handkerchief.

this line was superb Tanzzz👏👏👏

wonderful update👏👏

continue soon !!!!

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#575

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#576

tanzie the update was mind blowing 👏 👏

who is pia's father? 😲 is it abhay's master? 😕

you made panchi pia's aunt 😆 😆

abhay found that dress like a handkerchief 😲 🤣

finally abhay accepted his defeat n said his love to pia 😳 the last part was 😳

but im angry with you for stopping at this point

now plzzz continue soon 😍

Edited by priya.1 - 13 years ago

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#577

Finally abhiya kissed.Awsome.Waiting eagerly 4 nxt chappy

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#578

amazing part , so madhu is pia's mother... love abhiya in this part... very well written.. kaha par aakar khatam kar diya.. ab jaldi update karna sorry for late reply...