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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

thnx for d pm

i m really very sorry for dis late reply
really felt very bad for both abhiya
but i do understand its there dark love story
n by overcoming them there bond will b more strong
cont soon
updt soon


Thanks a lto dear. no problem with the late reply. since its ramadan I will be late in updating too so take your time. I just wanted to make it realistic. and yes, their bond will be stronger than anything... when they will find each other again...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

Amazing dr.. So pia is comimg to nyk... Cool.. I hope she found abhay soon...
Cont soon n thanks 4 d pm...


Thank you so much. she will... 😳

Originally posted by: koli97

👍🏼👏⭐️⭐️...I can't find words...lovely...wish Abhiya comeout the darkworld...


Thanks a lot Koli. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

God Tanz this update was such an emotional high ride for me everyone messed up in between head and heart Abhiya's destiny messed them up God its so messy right now. Abhay's longing and pain is hurting me so is Pia's 😭


Next update will be emotional high ride more and a glimpse of darkest sights of mafia world. well, its going to be time for being strong. Abhay will be stronger by accepting Chands offer and Pia by knowing the dirty world and determined to get Abhay out of this... 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

omg!!!!!! dude pia is too much shattered but still acting strongly... hope abhay dont take stupid decision or hope dat u would not more mess in their life... what to say jst wait 4 next chap chappy chapter... god save d lovers plz...


She will be scared and shattered more after seeing the mafia world but some hints will keep her going that Abhay is different.. Abhay will accept Chands offer to save Pias life. dont worry i will save them 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ---Priya---

Tanzie really sorry for not commenting for a long time..😳

coming to the update,
it was a very emotional update 😭abhiya lonin for each other 😭
pia getting to know abt her biological father. i think madhu should have given chand another chance.. who knows, he might have changed 😔
i feel very bad for abhay, he dsnt even know that pia is expecting his child 😭
so finally pia is set to go to NY in search of abhay..
waiting eagerly to read the next part.. guess it will be all action packed...
continue asap...


Hey Priya... yeap you are commenting after a long time. I thought you have stopped reading 😆 Chand and Madhus situation is open ended.. anything could have happened and now we will never now because she didnt give him the chance...
Abhay wont know about his child in a long time.. next update would be pias investigation. not that action packed but that is coming soon too...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Awesome update tanzie.Finally after ages u posted this SS of urs & congo 4 book 2 LOL.OH I so loved it.Chand was psycho,is psycho but I hope he turned 2 normal soon.Oh I felt bad 4 Abhiya.Both r living a nightmare.Whn u described abt tht rat scene I was lke Abhay might eat tht rat due 2 hunger coz usually hunger & thirst make human animal😆.Oh so Pia is on 'Mission-Search Abhay soon'.Plz cont.. Love U🤗


ha sorry I took so much time... i was very busy 😕 he was not that psycho but yes he is now and theres no chance of him going good. oh i thought that too when i was writing but I just couldnt write it for Abhay 🤢 Pia will start her investigation next update 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Awesome tanzie!!!!!
just wonderful, don't have proper words.
I loved it to the core, it was intense, emotional and just fab.
In my pov I don't think that chand is alone responsible for what he is right now, yes he was greedy, muderer, etc, but everyone deserves a second chance in life but yea madhu was not totally wrong but to some extent I think she was wrong, like marrying arnab, she could have raised piya alone. I agree she was worried about her own safety, but still I think she somehow to some extent is responsible for what chand is today.
Now coming to abhiya parts, both are in so much pain, one unknown that he is going to be a father, and another wants to search him anyway.
I loved that hallucanation scene most, it just made me cry, it was so so so emotional.
just loved this update, it was just highly emotional, and off course brilliantly written.
continue soon


Thanks a lot sweetz. I totally agree with you. but were at fault. But Madhu was right on her part that she wanted a problem free life. accepting Chand meaning she has to let go of a lot of luxury, her family and face many problems. even raising the child alone meaning lots of problems and life would be tough, not everyone has the courage or spirit to do it. so she didn't. she is a weak human being to be precise. and coming to chand, who knows he would have let go of the greed and money and power or not. money is like a blackhole. greed can consume you and you will be lost in darkness. greed kills the goodness in a person...
next update, both will go stronger slowly... and fight with the world.. but it will take some time to meet each other and face.. Pia will now see the real darkest part of mafia world which will scare the daylight out of her..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot everyone for the amazing response. because of Book 1 ending in such a short time I have to open a Book 2 and turn the SS into a Mini FF... i will end it on Book 2 😳

Here's the link of Book 2 and next chapters will be updating in there:



thanks a lot again for making this SS so special 🤗
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jUST FOUND THIS AND WILL READ IT SOON

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