'I Choose You' || Jay&Piya FF || - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..awesome update...pls continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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All righhht :)

Not that happy with the many comments i get, but i guess that's how it is. 🤗

Love all of youu for commenting and at least liking my posts ;) ❤️
Means ALOOOT TO MEE 🥱

Just hope i get more commenters sooon :P

Okaay so i was originally gonna wait for more viewers, but its not fair to the rest of you, so i guess ill just upload todaay since im free of HW! 😛

(Sorry for such a short part 1 ! This and the rest will be longeer! Pakkapromishh! 😃 )



PART 2

I looked up at him , while his face was a mixture of confusion, excitement, and surprise.

A minute passed by as Jay took it all in.

It had starting to slightly rain.

The next thing I knew , I was up in the air, held by two strong arms, twirling me around.

I yelped, and giggled, as the raindrops hit my face.

I'd never been as ecstatic as I was now.

I knew I made the right decision.

I heard a low growl as Abhay closed his eyes, and disappeared into the darkness, leaving a thin air of black mist.

I was much too happy to be worried about Abhay. All I could think of was the bright smile on Jay's face as he gently took me down.

He took me into a rib-crashing hug,

"Piya .. "

He took a deep breath. I slowed down my heartbeat as my ears strained to listen.

"You don't know what you've given me. I feel like ive won the world. The victory is mine. More importantly. YOU are mine, " he whispered in my ears, and tears of joy came drizzling down my cheeks.

It took merely a second to say,

"I love you Jay Khurana!"

Jay smiled his adorable smile and crinkled his nose.

"I love you more, Piya Jaiswal! Wait wait wait. Letme correct that.

Piya Khurana."

I stared at him in awe.

Was this real?

I blushed a deep red, as he leaned in.

His soft lips were inches away from mine.

I couldn't hold it any longer.

I captured his lips and we were headed to a world of magic.

Soon enough, it started to drizzle. Hard.

And not the type where you can take your guy's hand and start dancing the night away. It was the type where the rain would fall on your head like huge boulders.

We slowly broke the kiss. (Although I truly wish we hadn't ;D )

Jay lifted me up, and we fled , (werewolf-style), through the droplets of stones and into his car.

Did I mention, that my boyfriend was a werewolf?

Well , he is.

The most cutest, caring, loving, hot werewolf you've ever seen.

In the beginning though, when he first told me about it, I was freaked . Well wouldn't you be? Ahaha, but eventually, I got used to the fur, claws, growls, and speed-running.

Hota hai. ;D

My train of thoughts were broken by the snapping of his two fingers in front of my face.

"Kahaan kho gayi, jaan? You were thinking about me na ? ;D sach sach batao! I mean, who wouldn't? After all , im so hot .. "

"Oh shut up, jay!" I said with a blush, I tried to hide. His ego can really get to his head.

"hahaa! .. chale? " he asked as he started the engine.

"Yeupp!" I said , with a sigh. What a night,

We stopped in front of his house. I was still thinking over things. Just like I always do. :P

Before I knew it, my car door swung open with Jay standing there with his hand out.

"Here we are! I cant wait till we get marrie-HEY! Did I ever tell you , you look super sexy in that pink top? " he winked.

"Uh..uhm.." I stuttered as my eyes were trying to locate themselves at my shoes. I hope I didn't look like a fool. My blushing can go overboard at times. Nope. Not just times. Times, when Jay compliments me. Or , if he's just anywhere around me.

"Hello? Yaar. I know im all smexy and stuff, but can we please get in? Im getting drenched!" he exclaimed.

"Ohmygosh jay. You're just too much. Pagal ho tum! "

"Yup – Bas ter-"

"Yeah yeah, pata hai. Woh typical filmy dialogue. Bas tere liye!"

I mimicked the dialogue. He was such a player, I thought while I giggled.

"Hmph." He said with a cute scowl on his face.

I couldn't help but pull his cheeks.

"Your shooo cuteee! " I said, suddenly hallucinating him as a teddy bear.

"okay!!!" He said trying to get me off.

I laughed. Oh, how much I loved this man.


We walked inside the house. It was quite beautiful I must say. Except for that grey lamp. I need to make changes to that. Oh, and the brown rug over here. That needs to go. I thought to myself, letting my designer ideas flow.

I walked all over the living room, mentally making notes, on how this place was going to get changed after marriage, MARRIAGE!

Oh god. I blushed at that thought. Imagine ME in a dulhan's salwar. WOOW. That would look .. different. OHHH. But I can SO imagine ..him as a dulha! He would look one hell of a groom man. I chuckled at my idiotic-ness.

"Wahaan kya karihi ho? Akele.. Haste ? " He said confusedly

"Main.. who.. bas..i wanted to see your room" I said, as quick as I could.

Jay's confused look disappeared as his signature smile covered it.

"OHH .. so I see. Hahaa Comee!" he said as he led me to a beautifully-polished set of wooden stairs.

I was just about to climb the shiny step, when my stupid heels, decided to slip.

So, yes you guessed it.

My man, Mr. Khurana over here, had held his strong hands to save my tiny body from becoming all cracked bones.

Ohmygosh. He has the most beautiful eyes I've ever seen. I don't know how long we were in that position but my arms really started to hurt from holding his neck.

We looked at each other, embarrassed as he helped me back up on my feet.

I had my back to him, fixing my dress and keeping my hair in place, when I feel his hot hands on my waist.

My heartbeat had somehow long back sensed that he was coming my way, and did its job to stop responding.

His grip got tighter, as my breath got stuck somewhere in my throat. I felt this sudden urge of passion.

His chin, slowly came down and snuggled on my shoulder, keeping his face in my curls. My head unknowingly leaned itself on top of his head. He slowly started planting kisses on my shoulder, while I shut my eyes super-tight.

His hands were moving around my waist while I kept my hands slightly on top of his.

That was it.

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Okaaay soo i ive posted longer than i wanted to, which means i need to write moree stuff, which ALSO meaans, the next upload will comee a little later 😳


Lovee you guys,

PLEASEE PLEASE PLEEEASEE do comment or at the most LIKE the comment, and for a PM < Just comment and tell me you would like a pm and i will add u to the list :D <3


Youuurs truly,

Yashi ❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yashi! firstly i apologise for commenting so late. I've been a little busy. I just caught with both your updates. I must say you are a great writer. You should join all Jay Piya fans on our JiYa AT, where you'll meet so many JiYa fans, and you can always post your FF links there to get them to read it. You are a great writer :)

Coming to the updates, ohmygosh! i wish this happened in real in pkyek. Piya choosing Jay would be a dream come true. And Moreover their love scenes would be like none other on tv. Seriously they are two actors who create so much chemistry. Their scenes seem like real life, they are both such tremendously fabulous actors. I wish they hooked up on the show :( i miss them so much
Edited by .Yamini. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yahi awesome FF I just loved the way u describe the things and moreover u r making JiYa the best thing to look more beautiful seriously dis FF is presenting my JiYa those are just out of his world.

Okay I read whole thing in one go and I liked 2 part the most. About people not commenting actually maximum JiYa fans dont visit this Blaaahhh forum and reason is known to everyone :P so I will suggest u to be active at JiYa AT cz we get to know any stuff on JiYa by there only

Just loved this fff and ur description and plaz do continue❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Thaaank you SOSOSOSO muchh guys :'D i feeel soo honouredd! I will definitely join te JiYa at since thats the hpme to jiya fans! ;D ❤️

@.Yamini. Diii thank youu so much! I missed ur sweeet comments and encouraging adviceee :'D you are such an amazing personn yaaar !! Love u to death! Will continue soon for suree!
@sam119. Thank youu so much Samm! I think you have to go to the jiya at and comment there to get in ! :)
@sunshine Thank you SHOO muchh yaar! It means sp mich to see your comment! Its filled with mithaas! Hehee im superduper gladdd youre liking it yaar! I will def continuee soon! :D thanks once againn!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was sweet yaar, I love JiYa. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
very nice update...love jiya :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Yashi, aww you're most welcome sweety! :) i always like reading FF's and OS's on JiYa. They always make my day 😳 Pls do continue soon. Waiting to read the next part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res :) @RainOnMe looks like a spelendid FF <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OHMYGOSH :| this is like SUPER AWESOME OMGG FF :) not one not two not three but MILLIONN LIKEEE :D not like butt LOOVVEE 😍 i don't read FF's much, but this is like you must READD 😳 and i love LOVE theee concept cause iwish PKYEK was like that :| :S i wish piya accepts jay but agaiin :X abhay raichand :| which i dont wanna make a comment on butt seriously yashi.. this is perfect and you NEED to continue it :$ :| ignore the haters 🤔 and oh yeahh, yamz di THANKYOUfor the PMM :) ily, and i will reply to the other PM soon :D ANYWAYSS love you yashi & your FF ) continue please naa :|

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